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 Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:48 am
..I still fear I shall never get it xD
I mean, the cat is hiding behind her right? *confuzzled*
Oh, and is she the girlfriend?
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:17 pm
Yush, that's Siyara as a little kid :3
And I'll make a note about the vague leg >O maybe it'll become more clear if I EVENTUALLY add tones to it? *hopes*
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:31 pm
aw, when I changed the colours to black n white, it didn't show the water from around the vase... yush, I'll just blame the fact that I didn't use tones yet >,<
And honestly I don't like the first pic of the girl on pg 6, I've done her over like 4 times, but somehow it didn't work out better..
Ahem, but here are pg 5 and pg 6, they're absolutely *cough cough* fabulous ;3
Hmz, tell me, is it disturbing that there isn't a line around the page?
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:39 am
Oh, so it's like a prologue, right? I forgot to make a prologue myself Dx...gotta do that later too...waaah~
But anyways, I'm gonna bet that the kitty is running away from a force that is going to warn her about something in the future or....the kitty is just pure EVIL! xD I was gonna get a cat, and now I'm glad I didn't. That would run my patience up the wall.
Hmm...I think it looks fine, but if you don't feel fully satisfied with a drawing of yours, it won't be satisfying then, to even others. [ Confidence is an awesome thing. ] I'm gonna redo some of my panels and pictures too in the first chapter, when I get around to it : ) [ in a month or two after doing several chapters? Lol. ] AND FINALLY AFTER ME RAMBLING LIKE THE WORLD IS GONNA END OR SOMETHING, here is some erm, examples I guess xD Something to get you inspired to fully satisfy? Lol.
Yup, they are! x3
Not at all. I stopped doing the line around the page a while ago, it really isn't required, I mean, it's like blush, it isn't like everyone is going to draw it, but that's just a matter of choice I guess.
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:20 am
I'M ORDERING MY TABLET TODAY! ZOMG ZOMG!! CAN'T WAITTTT >.<
Making it more round is a good idea, it looks to flat when I look at it again.
and the shirt more ripped to. (once I have the tablet, I can easilly -I hope- add tones and stuff myself *-*)
thanks^^, it looks so cute with the flowers and kitty 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 3:23 am
YAY TABLET!11!!~~ x3 How much did it cost you to order it? : D Mine cost around $300 dollars or so, which I find scary.
Okkies xD I'm glad I kinda helped. No problemo ^^ I have an obsession with over drawing cute things > . < Auu auu...
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 8:22 am
That's a good thing =P
And mine was 100 euro with manga studio and coral drawer (a small B5 tablet).
Sounds way cheaper xP
Yay, page 7 and 8 *-*
Sorry it took so long xP Somehow page 8 took a lot of time (and postponing and stuff :3)
Hm, my ink pen is starting to fade a lil.. I think I need a new one >.<
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:12 am
Page 9 and 10 =D =D.
And since I didn't announce it when I put up 7 and 8, I gues nobody ever saw them before either xP
Wah, about three more pages until the intro is over, then I actually have to start the real story 0.o
scary burning_eyes
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:22 am
its getting better : P
I would say more details '^^ but it can be a style thing '^^
and tones would help : P
and of course some more anatomy training '^^
well the best way to train is to draw a manga ^_____^
think perspective and sometimes zoom in :''3
the cat is sooo cute ^_____^
I got my tablet (A4)
for under 100 $ : O
its made for illustration tho '^^ so its a bit harder to make smooth lines -.-'' but I think its okay anyway : O
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:36 am
Details are hard =S. And I'm pretty lazy because you have to draw the same lil ennoying ribbon over and over again xO.
And folds in clothes and things like sheets are hard to..
But I thought I had the anatomics pretty much right in these pages sweatdrop
but thanks :3
... link ... *huggles* heart
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:32 am
I know what you mean '^^
I have to draw braids in my next chapter >.> its a pain.
but ribbons are easy :'P
well anatomy always have to improve -.-''
even for me xD
you're welcome : D
yees :''D -link pose-
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:38 am
I posted another sketch for my next page. But I still don't really like how the mouth of the vamp is on the lowest picture...
So does it look okay? :3
(I mean all of the sketch)
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:53 am
I'm looking at it xD just waiting for my PS to load >.>'''
its very small tho '^^
maybe in the future you can post bigger pictures '^^
its hard to see....
anyway I will take a look at it and post a suggestion soon razz
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:07 am
...>.>'' I have no idea whats happening on the page.... >.>''
is she clueless or really scared? O.o
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 3:06 am
Clueless, and I think the page is a bit bigger this way.
I'm using with the scanner they have here and it's really different from the one at home xP
But the mouth! I want to know what you think about the mouth from the guy on the lowest pic (on the sketch of pg11).
Cos... I hate it, but don't know what to change it into.. (and I've been erasing so much that the paper is starting to get thinner and thinner xP)
New sketch^^. Yay
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