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Horrible. You should be banned from writing ever again.
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...It was alright I guess...
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Good
42%
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Great
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I loved it! you have great talent!
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Other. Please state.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:16 pm


Woah.
eek
That was like...... awesome...
1000/10!
Yep, you heard me 1000!!!
^.^
I would really like to read The Deadly Vine as well!
I know!
idea
Maybe you could write that and post it here! ^.^
And if you are, E! I'm so happy, and I can't wait to read it!

But, uh, don't you think that Mr. Linden is kinda cruel? He'd rather read about his family than be with them?
PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 2:23 pm


Oh my gosh! That is SO GOOD! Way to go! Where in the world would you get such a great idea like that? Simply amazing, enough said.

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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 6:06 am


20 Shades of Crazy
I like the concept and idea of the story, but I think it's a bit lacking in some places. 8/10 [Ten being the best, I'm taking it. If one is the best, then you have a two. >< Yeah.]

Such as description - this peice would reallyreally be enhanced with the proper desciption, giving us detail on the vines, more so on the book, the glow, and so on. Or the characters. Esspecially the characters. They could reallyreally use a full body detail on them.

Also, you have justa few grammatical errors.

Other then that, it's an amazing peice. <3


o.o

Stole the words out of my keyboard.

What she said. ^
PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 5:30 pm


It was a nice story!!! 10!! I enjoyed it lots!! Keep on writing!!!

-Writings Within My Eyes-

 
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