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Fair enough, it's still pretty messy though. Hmmmmm... Your powers are also still very sloppy. Why don't you copy and paste the New Gods' abilities from their Wiki Page I gave you. That would make it look and sound better, wouldn't it?

If I have to pick this up and do this for you it's going to be annoying.

Then let's do things properly. Look at the other Legacy Profiles and compare them to this and see what it's missing.

There are all sorts of components in this profile that make it hard to accept. There is a lack of cohesion; there is a lack of effort; there is a lack of research; and there is a lack of, unfortunately, quality. I can feel that there is some sort of spark of greatness within you that you have not yet tapped into... Welp, now is the time to tap into that.

Never mind a test sounds like a bad idea, But still, im trying.

Can you point out whats left...Or can we have a small sparring match to test him out? I feel as if i have a solid story and a good power set up.

Alright i have it. I labeled the important area's with a bullet point, along with adding some more weaknesses.

• Darkseid forms the DNA of two powerful fighters together to create project:Nexus, something that could crush the enemies of Apokolips

• Apokolips scientist begin the genetic creation of Project:Nexus

• Former Apokolips god Riza breaks Project:Nexus out.

•Apokolips god Riza uses motherbox she stole from Darkseid to attempt to save the two, but instead saves Project:Nexus before she is shot by Darkseids Omega beam.

• Before Riza and Project: Nexus was found by Darkseid, Riza explains to Project:Nexus what he is, what is going on, and what he must do along with imprinting a marking on his wrist

•Project:Nexus awakens in a lab being tested on by earth scientist until they decide to see how he would live in a normal family enviorment

•Project:Nexus name is changed to Jeremiah and awakens in a house where a family greets him as one of there own.

•Jeremiah begins his first day of school in which he gets in trouble for beating up a group of bullies after raging out.

• Jeremiah would begin to gain memory flashes of being inside the test tube on apokolips.

• Jeremiah begins to have nightmares of Darkseid and apokolips.

• Jeremiah awakens to his frightened parents and burned lines around his room. It turned out to be him, he had waken in rage during the night due to his nightmares.

• Jeremiah enter's middle school and meets a girl named Olivia.

• Olivia and Jeremiah become best friends during 7th grade

• Jeremiah and Olivia gains a romantic relationship during freshmen year.

• Jeremiah reveals what he remembers about Apokolips to Olivia.

• Jeremiah and Oliva become engaged after high school

• Military tracks down Jeremiah and olivia is killed in cross fire.

• Jeremiah rages out and kills the squadron sent to capture Jeremiah.

• Riza's mark activates and explains to Jeremiah what she did, and what he will face in the future, along with giving him a refresher on what he is and where he came from, and who he needed to protect himself from.

• Jeremiah changes his name to Eric rose

• Eric attempts to kill himself via bullet to the head, but his skin carbonation activates unknowingly by Eric to stop the bullet.

• Eric breaks down seeks to destroy darkseid for creating him if his life is going to happen likes this.

There we go

Ohhhh, well i kind of have them set up like that so people would know what Eric came from and what he went through. But that can work, if i set them nicely.

List them like:
1. Dude is created by Doomsday for whatever purpose.
2. Subject reaches maturity is freed by a new God Spy etc.
3. Comes to Earth.