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 Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:39 am
Hey Wolf,
So the Red Hood Legacy didn't go too well for a number of reasons; it was partly it was because you didn't do too well on the application and it didn't help you seemed to not be listening. For someone of who was going to RP with the BatFamily of this guild, that just won't do I'm afraid mate. So, I'm going to help you out with your application in here. You have already agreed to this but there are some rules you must follow for us to continue:
1. You will listen to any instruction given to you by me in this forum. You may question it for genuine reason (obviously) but being stubborn or lazy will result in me withdrawing my help. I WILL check everything so you can't just bombard me with posts.
2. You will not b***h to other people about what happens here. Any problems will be directed at me. You will talk to me. You will confront him. Otherwise, I will withdraw you help. Let's not be bitches. Let's just be man enough to work together. Yeah?
3. Do not talk to me on Skype about this stuff. Always post in here.
Also, let's not post your profile multiple times. How about we just edit the profile and put any edits in Red. Okay, let's do it!
Post your application post and your profile in two separate posts and away we go!
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 2:16 pm
The last thing thing Jeremiah can remember was getting into a small ship with a woman he called his mother. She had blue skin with white markings along the arms and leading up to her neck. Jeremiah was 7 around the time, to young for anything but was capable of a lot. His mother kept his Origins a secret from Jeremiah, She feared if he knew, he'd feel like an outsider, Especially on a world he never belonged too. Upon arrival to earth, they were labeled a UFO while flying over area 51 and shot at. Being hit, the ship would crash, and only one escape pod took off. The mother had stayed, she realized there was no way for her to survive especially when she doesn't look human, nor can she replicate human looks. Jeremiah landed far from the crash site, but not far enough. He passed out upon impact and woke up with flashlights being pointed at his pupils. Everything was a bit blurry for him at the moment, but he could hear the conversation they were having just fine. "We'll begin our experiment." They placed a mask over his mouth and he woke up inside a bed...inside a room. It made no sense to him. After getting up, he felt himself traveling downstairs to the living room. He saw a man tightening his tie along with a woman kissing him on the cheek. They turned to greet Jeremiah with cheerful faces. "Good morning Jeremiah." Said the woman. "Hey there champ." Said the man. Who is Jeremiah? "Hurry and dressed, today is your first day of school." Jeremiah was still curious but his dad took him upstairs and helped him look for an outfit, from there they took him to school, they, Including him, Met with the principle. They made up the story that Jeremiah was an amnesiac from a car accident and that he didn't really talk because of it. Jeremiah actually believed that story because he had nothing else to believe for what was going on. Growing up, Jeremiah would slowly learn the actions of earthlings. It was also around that time he realized his anger issues. When ever he'd get angry was when his powers began to show. He found he could shoot laser's from his eyes and fly along with super strength. He demonstrated that on some would be thugs, Severely burning one persons hand off, and injuring the others. They attempted to rat him out but the only person that could fit that description was Super boy and he's on the other side of us metaphorically speaking. Leading into his high school years, He was now in better control of his super powers, Yet his risk of danger to the people around him had risen. The only reason he remained out to the public was because of the couple taking care of him. They had grown attached to him, and he had done the same to the couple. He met a girl who it turns out he had went to school with during elementary and Junior high. They were friends during those times and she had moved out of town for two years, but came back during Junior year. They continued as best friends and soon blossomed into a relationship. The couple received orders to force Jeremiah to cut off the relationship. He left the house that night and would live with his girlfriend after that. He still continued to contact the people who took care of them who sent in false reports to HQ for them not to check in. a year after graduation, when they were both nineteen, Jeremiah proposed to her, they ((Not done, But how is it?))
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 2:22 pm
Chaos_wolf12 The last thing thing Jeremiah can remember was getting into a small ship with a woman he called his mother. She had blue skin with white markings along the arms and leading up to her neck. Jeremiah was 7 around the time, to young for anything but was capable of a lot. His mother kept his Origins a secret from Jeremiah, She feared if he knew, he'd feel like an outsider, Especially on a world he never belonged too. Upon arrival to earth, they were labeled a UFO while flying over area 51 and shot at. Being hit, the ship would crash, and only one escape pod took off. The mother had stayed, she realized there was no way for her to survive especially when she doesn't look human, nor can she replicate human looks. Jeremiah landed far from the crash site, but not far enough. He passed out upon impact and woke up with flashlights being pointed at his pupils. Everything was a bit blurry for him at the moment, but he could hear the conversation they were having just fine. "We'll begin our experiment." They placed a mask over his mouth and he woke up inside a bed...inside a room. It made no sense to him. After getting up, he felt himself traveling downstairs to the living room. He saw a man tightening his tie along with a woman kissing him on the cheek. They turned to greet Jeremiah with cheerful faces. "Good morning Jeremiah." Said the woman. "Hey there champ." Said the man. Who is Jeremiah? "Hurry and dressed, today is your first day of school." Jeremiah was still curious but his dad took him upstairs and helped him look for an outfit, from there they took him to school, they, Including him, Met with the principle. They made up the story that Jeremiah was an amnesiac from a car accident and that he didn't really talk because of it. Jeremiah actually believed that story because he had nothing else to believe for what was going on. Growing up, Jeremiah would slowly learn the actions of earthlings. It was also around that time he realized his anger issues. When ever he'd get angry was when his powers began to show. He found he could shoot laser's from his eyes and fly along with super strength. He demonstrated that on some would be thugs, Severely burning one persons hand off, and injuring the others. They attempted to rat him out but the only person that could fit that description was Super boy and he's on the other side of us metaphorically speaking. Leading into his high school years, He was now in better control of his super powers, Yet his risk of danger to the people around him had risen. The only reason he remained out to the public was because of the couple taking care of him. They had grown attached to him, and he had done the same to the couple. He met a girl who it turns out he had went to school with during elementary and Junior high. They were friends during those times and she had moved out of town for two years, but came back during Junior year. They continued as best friends and soon blossomed into a relationship. The couple received orders to force Jeremiah to cut off the relationship. He left the house that night and would live with his girlfriend after that. He still continued to contact the people who took care of them who sent in false reports to HQ for them not to check in. a year after graduation, when they were both nineteen, Jeremiah proposed to her, they ((Not done, But how is it?)) Wow, first of all, paragraphs bro. That's a damn wall of text. Secondly, there are a lot of spelling errors. You should probably look into those. And thirdly, can we get the whole application and profile done and handed in first? It's easier to do the whole thing in one go. However... I am looking... This is kinda a mess dude. Let's look at an example bio. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=24591341#370106249http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=24591341#370128755
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 2:52 pm
 [General Information]
Name: Eric Rose
Nicknames: Rose, Ranger, Project:Nexus
Titles: Power Boy
Age: 21
Birthday: May 29
Star Sign: Gemini
Gender: Male
Race: Alien/~New god
Moral Alignment: Has yet to decide
[Personal Information] Occupation: Nothing
Sexuality: Bisexual
Likes: The color red, Flying, Flirting, Silence
Dreams: To out do every other hero.
Dislikes: Losing, Pink
Fears: Being at fault for someone's death.
Darkest Secret: His presence was the reason his girlfriend died.
Favourite Food: Pizza, Vegetables, Tofu
Favourite Drink: Water, Orange & Grape soda.
Least Favourite Food: Pears
Least Favourite Drink: Alcohol
Loyalties: Riza
Intelligence Level: X IQ Level.
Dominant Hand: Right.
Strengths: His brute strength is his main strength. Whether it comes to bashing in robotic skulls, the punching in the faces of evil doers, its always there when he needs it.
Weaknesses: Can't control his rage, can't work with others without being concerned for them, Doesn't have full control of his powers, Doesn't know his own strength, Finds it hard to hit a lady.
Cherished Items:
A locket with a picture of his Dead Ex girlfriend inside of it. The locket is 4 years old, it was a present from his girlfriend, it originally had both of their faces in it, now he used a picture with just her face. Its shaped like a heard with angel wings covering it.
Philosophical/ Social Viewpoint:
Only kill when its the only option. Meaning when there is no other choice, that's the only time when killing a person is allowed.
Religious Viewpoint:
He believes in the after life, believes in heaven or hell. The reason it doesn't bother him is because if he goes to heaven then he knows he lived a good life, If he goes to hell then he can just raise hell.
Romantic Viewpoint:
He is willing to date, but hasn't found anyone he'd stay with, so he leaves the next morning and doesn't call back. This stems from the death of his fiancee, since she died, he found it hard to have a relationship.
Personality
Jeremiah loves to smile and laugh. He's comical and tries to be funny which usually works. When he's alone, he tends to brood on life. He's artistic, and does not like to start a conflict and will try to avoid them unless there is no way to do so. He is charismatic, and charming, especially when its to get what he wants.
Biography
• The thing is about Eric is that he's not actually human; and the thing about that is he's not exactly natural either. Eric is actually the result of an Apokalyptian Experiment called PROJECT: NEXUS. After holding a grand tournament for his warriors with one for female combatants and one for male combatants, Darksied found two parents whom he wished to use as his donors for his experiment. The Project (should it be successful) would take the DNA of these two Champions and create a being so terrifying that it would lead Darksied's Armies throughout the Multiverse and conquer every plane of existence that it set foot on.
However, despite Darksied's best laid plans and his apparent satisfaction with the Project's parentage, the destiny of PROJECT: NEXUS was linked with another... The New Genesis spy, Riza.
Riza was a New God from New Gensis who was sent by Orion to spy on Darksied eons ago and having seen the gladiatorial games that her "Master" had decided to put on; Riza became somewhat reluctant to follow her mission. As a part of PROJECT: NEXUS, she would dissect and butcher the bodies of the two winners and eventually take the best tissue from each and mesh it together in one humanoid. It was a painfully long process but after weeks generating and destroying possible vessels, Eric's body was finally built and infused with life thanks to a basatrdised version of the Life Equation. Darksied seemed once again pleased that his plan was going so swimmingly. He finally had his ultimate soldier but once again fate intervened and Riza stole a Motherbox in order to send Eric to New Genesis.
However, upon discovery, Darksied quickly mobilized himself to stop the traitor. Riza, panicking, knew she would not be able to save herself and Eric and decided to make the ultimate sacrifice in order to save him. She opened a Boom Tube and pushed the unconscious experiment through. She thought he was safe and as Darksied stared her down... She spat at his feet and was obliterated by his Omega Beams...
Disorientated from his travel inside the Boom Tube (as well as only just having been 'born'), Eric couldn't make out what was happening to him when he woke up. The ground was cold underneath him, like metal, and men in large bright coasts poked and prodded at what sounded like hard stone. Even as he tried to keep his eyes open, he could feel something being forced onto his face and his eyes slammed shut once again. He once again saw Riza, a tear in her eye as she thought of a home she'd never see again, disappear in a flash of red.
Jeremiah didn't remember much of his past. Apparently, he'd been hit by a car; it explained why he woke up to a loving family in a hospital in Central with little to no idea who he was. His Mother, so happy her son had found his way back, wrapped his arms around the young man as he sat up in his bed with no assistance. They said he'd been out for months and that everyone was wondering where he was. His friends, everyone. They even had a party for him when he went home.
However, try as he might to feel accepted in this set up that was apparently his own... Jeremiah couldn't help but feel like the World around him wasn't as simple as it seemed. There was something that the people wouldn't tell him. You could see it in their eyes every time he looked at them; there was something there that wasn't meant to be. And Jeremiah soon came to the conclusion that it was him.
This feeling of isolation drove Jeremiah to strange lengths. He would fight boys in his school, namely bullies or predators, with a skill and finesse that was not acquired within his memory. And with each time he displayed an intellect or a body that he could not explain, Jeremiah had memories of a large mountain or monster looming of him. There was always glass between them... Like Orcas at the zoo. Only Jeremiah was the prized attraction, floating and waiting to be free.
Jeremiah's parents put all his strange memories and dreams down to the accident. They blamed things like PTSD or anxiety. They lied to Jeremiah's face and reported the new developments to their higher-ups in a heartbeat and relished in the money they recieved. Jeremiah was none the wiser. He just carried on. He kept his secret of the Granite Man. He studied hard. He worked hard in a local store. Everything was eventually going to turn out okay, or at least he thought it would. He believed his parents. Why shouldn't he? Even though he felt like such an outsider, he desperately wanted in and was content with leaving a humdrum life to do so.
That was until Olivia Wilde came to live in his sleepy, little town...
Olivia Wilde was not the hot actress from House. She was hot though and from the moment she walked into the store to buy chewing gum, Jeremiah was hooked. She was a whirlwind- a tempest- and she was picking him up and taking him for the ride in a matter of seconds. The two of them became fast friends after Jeremiah asked her out for coffee after he got off the morning shift; he would even go as far as to be honest with her about how he felt. It wasn't just about her though, it was about many things like how he felt he didn't belong and he had strange dreams and how he felt as if he was destined for greater. Even though he'd been so afraid to tell anyone, he told Olivia and Olivia accepted him and loved him for it. She wanted him to achieve greater- to be greater and the two finally became romantically involved.
After High School, Olivia and Jeremiah would get engaged but thanks to his parents telling the Higher-Ups a full platoon of soldiers were sent to retrieve him. Jeremiah could not be allowed to leave that small town and join the world; Jeremiah could not risk being exposed and discovered; Jeremiah had too much riding on him. So, with the Platoon dispatched, they began hunting for Jeremiah and Olivia relentlessly. They closed all highways out of town and, in a small prairie, the two lovers were found in their car.
Jeremiah tried tuning himself in but the soldiers shot anyway and covering his face, Jeremiah's skin turned black and protecting him from the bullets. He could not protect Olivia. She died of multiple bullet wounds in the car and Jeremiah lost it...
In a few hours all of the soldiers were dead and a black demon stood over them; breathing heavily and weeping. It took Jeremiah some time to realize he wasn't alone. Riza, or a part of her that she sealed in the young man, stood next to him. She would educate him. She would help him. She unlocked all of his memories and took him to the brink but Jeremiah re-emerged stronger for it.
He became Eric Rose, the Power Man, determined to get his own back on both Darksied and the people who killed his love.
[Relationship Information]
Friends:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force | Relationship Type
Releationship Explanation
Enemies:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force They Belong To | Relationship Type
Releationship Explanation
Family:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force They Belong To | Relationship Type
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Romantic Relationships:
○ Character Name as Url Link | Force They Belong To | Relationship Type
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[Weapon Information]
○ Weapon/ Item Name: Explanation here.
[Ability Information]
○ Laser vision: Ability to shoot extremely dangerous lasers from his eyes. These lasers have the capability to cut through Hyper diamond.
○ Super strength: Meaning his strength Far surpasses the human limit of strength. He could lift a yacht like it was nothing.
○ Flight: It gives him the ability to fly at sonic speeds. He decides how fast he wants to fly obviously. He can match speeds above 10 mph.
○ Skin Carbonation: he has the ability to re-arrange the configuration of carbon atoms of his body, allowing him to convert his skin into Graphene. This allows for anything blade or bullet to either skid or ricochet off of it. This makes it incredibly hard to cut through his skin, Near impossible for a human, and incredibly hard for a superhero.
○ Superhuman Reflexes:All New Gods, they have a highly developed nervous system. Their reaction speed and hand-eye coordination is superior to a normal human's. They can move fast enough to dodge a bullet before the gun fires and react with blinding speed.
○ Super human Immunity: New Gods have an extremely evolved immune system. They have developed immunity to a number of toxins and diseases.
○ Super Stamina: New God stamina and endurance is nothing short of amazing. Due to the naturally exhausting and extensive rigors of their life on Apokolips or Stamina training on New Genesis, a New God is able to manage their stamina on a certain amount of rest and sustenance (more than minimal) so that it seems they are able to constantly function, though this is not entirely the case. Tied directly to their strength and invulnerability, even their immunity to a certain extent, they can actually function at peak efficiency for almost 48 hours before needing to eat and rest.
○ Immortality: The New Gods are functionally immortal; they cease aging physically near the age of 30. Unless they fall in battle, they are immune to the ravages of time, and could easily live for thousands upon thousands of years.
○ Invulnerability: They are resistant to blunt trauma like punches, kicks, and blows from weapons like bats and maces, though not -completely- immune; unless the blows are dealt by a being with similar or greater strength, there isn't a chance of injury. However, this invulnerability does not extend to bullets, laser-blasts, or other piercing/slicing weapons - their invulnerability is more akin to that of an Amazon, rather than a Kryptonian. But his carbonation of the skin ability takes care of that.
○ Riza's mark: Before Rizas death Via omega beam, she left a mark on Eric's wrist, she will basically live as a sentient "computer-soul" inside you. She appears when Eric activates the blue mark around his wrist. She trains Eric, gives wise words to Eric, She can activate the mark herself, only to prevent Eric from doing thing crazy. Only these two can touch each other.
[Weakness Information]
○ Radion:New Gods are vulnerable to a substance called Radion. Its source is unknown and its effects are toxic only in sustained amounts or after explosive exposure. The average New God can be slain by an application of Radion from a Radion blaster or bomb. Though, in Eric's case it would take 2 blast's because of his skin. The first to de-stabilize the skin, the second to kill.
○ Mirrors/Shade glasses: The material used to make these items clashes with Erics ability to shoot lasers from his eyes. When ever he shoots at these items, the mirror reflects it, and the shade glasses neutralizes it.
○ Eyes: That is the weakest part on Erics body. Anything can damage his eyes, like a set of normal eyes. He can be blinded if not careful.
○ Skin for flight: While in his carbonation form, which protects his skin, he is not permitted to fly at all, this doesn't however excuse long distance jumps.
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 4:04 pm
Okay, this is a decent start. We can build on this. It is nowhere near ready for approval but I can work with this to help as best I can. Now, going to need you to listen now and pay attention because these edits are going to be coming at you thick and fast! Right...
Edits Needed (Will be highlighted in Red)
- Picture needed
- Change "Titles" Section to Titles: Power Boy
- Change "Race" Section to Race: Alien ~ Specify Species. Please check below in the "Suggestions" before filling this out as I have some ideas you could use for this section. Obviously, you don't have to use them but... Yeah, I have a few thoughts.
- General Edit: Put more effort in. Expand on things.
- General Edit: Remove all (()) from profile. They are not needed. Use compound sentences instead. This is a profile there is a need for literacy not OOC.
- Change "Intelligence Level" to Intelleigence: X IQ Score
- Change "Dominant Hand" to Dominant Hand: Right
- Change "Strengths" to be More specific. Look at your example profiles in the earlier posts.
- Change "Weaknesses" to be More specific, Kryptonite is an actual weakness his is more a weakness of character.
- Change "Cherished Items" to be More specfic. How old is the locket? What does it look like? What is it made of?
- General Edit (because I'm sick of typing it) Be more specific or detailed.
- Further Explain Philo/Socio Viewpoint
- Further Explain Religious Viewpoint
- Further Explain Romantic Viewpoint/ Quote People Properly.
- Bio needs serious work in terms of presentation. Use Paragraphs.
- The Abilities Information is pretty much a joke, I'm sorry to be harsh but it is true. Please expand on these and use reference materials like DC Comics Database and Comic Vine which I shall link in suggestions.
- Needs more Weaknesses.
Suggestions (Will be highlighted in Green)
- For Race Possibly Use Daxamite or New God, rather than Kryptonian? Daxamites are pretty much Kryptonians [See Sodam Yat] and Power Man was a New God. So these types of races can fill this role too. However, if you want to be Kryptonian still I will respect that.
- Use http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page as a resource?
- Use http://www.comicvine.com/ as a resource?
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:45 pm
See! Is that Bio not better now that you've decided to space it out into paragraphs? Looks neater and is a lot easier to read now. However... You still haven't seemed to do half of the things I have asked you. Also, if you're going to be a New God you need to change your Powers and your Weaknesses to reflect that.
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:52 pm
Uchiha Roxas See! Is that Bio not better now that you've decided to space it out into paragraphs? Looks neater and is a lot easier to read now. However... You still haven't seemed to do half of the things I have asked you. Also, if you're going to be a New God you need to change your Powers and your Weaknesses to reflect that. oh. what did i leave? also when you say change my powers, do you mean create some weaknesses to counter them? or just change them completely?
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:08 pm
Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas See! Is that Bio not better now that you've decided to space it out into paragraphs? Looks neater and is a lot easier to read now. However... You still haven't seemed to do half of the things I have asked you. Also, if you're going to be a New God you need to change your Powers and your Weaknesses to reflect that. oh. what did i leave? also when you say change my powers, do you mean create some weaknesses to counter them? or just change them completely? You left out quite a few corrections that I asked you to make. Just go down he list and check them off. As for powers and weaknesses and stuff, the New Gods are a totally different Race to Kryptonians so they do not have the same powers. Check Here: http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/New_Gods to see what I mean. If you are not sure how to make it work still in terms of a character check out the New God called Orion. I think he will make a good reference for you. You will need to make a few more weaknesses up though.
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:13 pm
Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay.
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:27 am
Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them.
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 6:14 am
Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them. Alright i think i have it. Also can i start out in star labs with you guys?
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 9:15 am
Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them. Alright i think i have it. Also can i start out in star labs with you guys? No because this is not an approval. This is us getting you ready for approval. To match your story with your character, you may need to make some edits to mention things like New Gensis or Apokalypse. We even have a Darksied (Acheron Thorne) who you may be able to plot with. This being siad, you will also need to remove Kryptonite from being one of your weaknesses as the new Gods and Kryptonite have no relation. I think it would be a cool idea if you were to make him a bit like Greed from Full Metal Alchemist. Do you know what I mean by that?
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:39 am
Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them. Alright i think i have it. Also can i start out in star labs with you guys? No because this is not an approval. This is us getting you ready for approval. To match your story with your character, you may need to make some edits to mention things like New Gensis or Apokalypse. We even have a Darksied (Acheron Thorne) who you may be able to plot with. This being siad, you will also need to remove Kryptonite from being one of your weaknesses as the new Gods and Kryptonite have no relation. I think it would be a cool idea if you were to make him a bit like Greed from Full Metal Alchemist. Do you know what I mean by that? That sounds like a good idea. Do you mean artificial created, if so I could make something good with that, or do you mean personality wise, or both?
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:48 am
Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them. Alright i think i have it. Also can i start out in star labs with you guys? No because this is not an approval. This is us getting you ready for approval. To match your story with your character, you may need to make some edits to mention things like New Gensis or Apokalypse. We even have a Darksied (Acheron Thorne) who you may be able to plot with. This being siad, you will also need to remove Kryptonite from being one of your weaknesses as the new Gods and Kryptonite have no relation. I think it would be a cool idea if you were to make him a bit like Greed from Full Metal Alchemist. Do you know what I mean by that? That sounds like a good idea. Do you mean artificial created, if so I could make something good with that, or do you mean personality wise, or both? I meant in terms of his Ultimate Defense.
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:56 am
Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Uchiha Roxas Chaos_wolf12 Could have sworn some of them could fly. Okay. Some can. New Gods can also have powers unique to them. Alright i think i have it. Also can i start out in star labs with you guys? No because this is not an approval. This is us getting you ready for approval. To match your story with your character, you may need to make some edits to mention things like New Gensis or Apokalypse. We even have a Darksied (Acheron Thorne) who you may be able to plot with. This being siad, you will also need to remove Kryptonite from being one of your weaknesses as the new Gods and Kryptonite have no relation. I think it would be a cool idea if you were to make him a bit like Greed from Full Metal Alchemist. Do you know what I mean by that? That sounds like a good idea. Do you mean artificial created, if so I could make something good with that, or do you mean personality wise, or both? I meant in terms of his Ultimate Defense. The skin hardening technique?
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