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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 2:32 pm


Chaos_wolf12

• Darkseid forms the DNA of two powerful fighters together to create project:Nexus, something that could crush the enemies of Apokolips

• Apokolips scientist begin the genetic creation of Project:Nexus

• Former Apokolips god Riza breaks Project:Nexus out.

•Apokolips god Riza uses motherbox she stole from Darkseid to attempt to save the two, but instead saves Project:Nexus before she is shot by Darkseids Omega beam.

• Before Riza and Project: Nexus was found by Darkseid, Riza explains to Project:Nexus what he is, what is going on, and what he must do along with imprinting a marking on his wrist

•Project:Nexus awakens in a lab being tested on by earth scientist until they decide to see how he would live in a normal family enviorment

•Project:Nexus name is changed to Jeremiah and awakens in a house where a family greets him as one of there own.

•Jeremiah begins his first day of school in which he gets in trouble for beating up a group of bullies after raging out.

• Jeremiah would begin to gain memory flashes of being inside the test tube on apokolips.

• Jeremiah begins to have nightmares of Darkseid and apokolips.

• Jeremiah awakens to his frightened parents and burned lines around his room. It turned out to be him, he had waken in rage during the night due to his nightmares.

• Jeremiah enter's middle school and meets a girl named Olivia.

• Olivia and Jeremiah become best friends during 7th grade

• Jeremiah and Olivia gains a romantic relationship during freshmen year.

• Jeremiah reveals what he remembers about Apokolips to Olivia.

• Jeremiah and Oliva become engaged after high school

• Military tracks down Jeremiah and olivia is killed in cross fire.

• Jeremiah rages out and kills the squadron sent to capture Jeremiah.

• Riza's mark activates and explains to Jeremiah what she did, and what he will face in the future, along with giving him a refresher on what he is and where he came from, and who he needed to protect himself from.

• Jeremiah changes his name to Eric rose

• Eric attempts to kill himself via bullet to the head, but his skin carbonation activates unknowingly by Eric to stop the bullet.

• Eric breaks down seeks to destroy darkseid for creating him if his life is going to happen likes this.

There we go


Oh, you did it. Can we like... stop just editing stuff and post a new everytime I get so many quotes and stuff that it becomes harder to keep track of if you keep editing stuff.

Right let me mess with this in a minute.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 2:34 pm


Uchiha Roxas

Okay i'll stop that and its fine i think i can lengthen it.....probably.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:11 pm


Chaos_wolf12


It doesn't need lengthening as per say, it needs quality control. I'm messing with it at the moment.

• The thing is about Eric is that he's not actually human; and the thing about that is he's not exactly natural either. Eric is actually the result of an Apokalyptian Experiment called PROJECT: NEXUS. After holding a grand tournament for his warriors with one for female combatants and one for male combatants, Darksied found two parents whom he wished to use as his donors for his experiment. The Project (should it be successful) would take the DNA of these two Champions and create a being so terrifying that it would lead Darksied's Armies throughout the Multiverse and conquer every plane of existence that it set foot on.

However, despite Darksied's best laid plans and his apparent satisfaction with the Project's parentage, the destiny of PROJECT: NEXUS was linked with another... The New Genesis spy, Riza.


---- Not done yet---

• Former Apokolips god Riza breaks Project:Nexus out.

•Apokolips god Riza uses motherbox she stole from Darkseid to attempt to save the two, but instead saves Project:Nexus before she is shot by Darkseids Omega beam.

• Before Riza and Project: Nexus was found by Darkseid, Riza explains to Project:Nexus what he is, what is going on, and what he must do along with imprinting a marking on his wrist

•Project:Nexus awakens in a lab being tested on by earth scientist until they decide to see how he would live in a normal family enviorment

•Project:Nexus name is changed to Jeremiah and awakens in a house where a family greets him as one of there own.

•Jeremiah begins his first day of school in which he gets in trouble for beating up a group of bullies after raging out.

• Jeremiah would begin to gain memory flashes of being inside the test tube on apokolips.

• Jeremiah begins to have nightmares of Darkseid and apokolips.

• Jeremiah awakens to his frightened parents and burned lines around his room. It turned out to be him, he had waken in rage during the night due to his nightmares.

• Jeremiah enter's middle school and meets a girl named Olivia.

• Olivia and Jeremiah become best friends during 7th grade

• Jeremiah and Olivia gains a romantic relationship during freshmen year.

• Jeremiah reveals what he remembers about Apokolips to Olivia.

• Jeremiah and Oliva become engaged after high school

• Military tracks down Jeremiah and olivia is killed in cross fire.

• Jeremiah rages out and kills the squadron sent to capture Jeremiah.

• Riza's mark activates and explains to Jeremiah what she did, and what he will face in the future, along with giving him a refresher on what he is and where he came from, and who he needed to protect himself from.

• Jeremiah changes his name to Eric rose

• Eric attempts to kill himself via bullet to the head, but his skin carbonation activates unknowingly by Eric to stop the bullet.

• Eric breaks down seeks to destroy darkseid for creating him if his life is going to happen likes this.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:15 pm


Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12


It doesn't need lengthening as per say, it needs quality control. I'm messing with it at the moment.

• The thing is about Eric is that he's not actually human; and the thing about that is he's not exactly natural either. Eric is actually the result of an Apokalyptian Experiment called PROJECT: NEXUS. After holding a grand tournament for his warriors with one for female combatants and one for male combatants, Darksied found two parents whom he wished to use as his donors for his experiment. The Project (should it be successful) would take the DNA of these two Champions and create a being so terrifying that it would lead Darksied's Armies throughout the Multiverse and conquer every plane of existence that it set foot on.

However, despite Darksied's best laid plans and his apparent satisfaction with the Project's parentage, the destiny of PROJECT: NEXUS was linked with another... The New Genesis spy, Riza.


---- Not done yet---

• Former Apokolips god Riza breaks Project:Nexus out.

•Apokolips god Riza uses motherbox she stole from Darkseid to attempt to save the two, but instead saves Project:Nexus before she is shot by Darkseids Omega beam.

• Before Riza and Project: Nexus was found by Darkseid, Riza explains to Project:Nexus what he is, what is going on, and what he must do along with imprinting a marking on his wrist

•Project:Nexus awakens in a lab being tested on by earth scientist until they decide to see how he would live in a normal family enviorment

•Project:Nexus name is changed to Jeremiah and awakens in a house where a family greets him as one of there own.

•Jeremiah begins his first day of school in which he gets in trouble for beating up a group of bullies after raging out.

• Jeremiah would begin to gain memory flashes of being inside the test tube on apokolips.

• Jeremiah begins to have nightmares of Darkseid and apokolips.

• Jeremiah awakens to his frightened parents and burned lines around his room. It turned out to be him, he had waken in rage during the night due to his nightmares.

• Jeremiah enter's middle school and meets a girl named Olivia.

• Olivia and Jeremiah become best friends during 7th grade

• Jeremiah and Olivia gains a romantic relationship during freshmen year.

• Jeremiah reveals what he remembers about Apokolips to Olivia.

• Jeremiah and Oliva become engaged after high school

• Military tracks down Jeremiah and olivia is killed in cross fire.

• Jeremiah rages out and kills the squadron sent to capture Jeremiah.

• Riza's mark activates and explains to Jeremiah what she did, and what he will face in the future, along with giving him a refresher on what he is and where he came from, and who he needed to protect himself from.

• Jeremiah changes his name to Eric rose

• Eric attempts to kill himself via bullet to the head, but his skin carbonation activates unknowingly by Eric to stop the bullet.

• Eric breaks down seeks to destroy darkseid for creating him if his life is going to happen likes this.


Okay...and darnet, i wish i thought of that top bullet point.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:32 pm


Chaos_wolf12

Okay...and darnet, i wish i thought of that top bullet point.


• The thing is about Eric is that he's not actually human; and the thing about that is he's not exactly natural either. Eric is actually the result of an Apokalyptian Experiment called PROJECT: NEXUS. After holding a grand tournament for his warriors with one for female combatants and one for male combatants, Darksied found two parents whom he wished to use as his donors for his experiment. The Project (should it be successful) would take the DNA of these two Champions and create a being so terrifying that it would lead Darksied's Armies throughout the Multiverse and conquer every plane of existence that it set foot on.

However, despite Darksied's best laid plans and his apparent satisfaction with the Project's parentage, the destiny of PROJECT: NEXUS was linked with another... The New Genesis spy, Riza.

Riza was a New God from New Gensis who was sent by Orion to spy on Darksied eons ago and having seen the gladiatorial games that her "Master" had decided to put on; Riza became somewhat reluctant to follow her mission. As a part of PROJECT: NEXUS, she would dissect and butcher the bodies of the two winners and eventually take the best tissue from each and mesh it together in one humanoid. It was a painfully long process but after weeks generating and destroying possible vessels, Eric's body was finally built and infused with life thanks to a basatrdised version of the Life Equation. Darksied seemed once again pleased that his plan was going so swimmingly. He finally had his ultimate soldier but once again fate intervened and Riza stole a Motherbox in order to send Eric to New Genesis.

However, upon discovery, Darksied quickly mobilized himself to stop the traitor. Riza, panicking, knew she would not be able to save herself and Eric and decided to make the ultimate sacrifice in order to save him. She opened a Boom Tube and pushed the unconscious experiment through. She thought he was safe and as Darksied stared her down... She spat at his feet and was obliterated by his Omega Beams...


---- Not done yet---



•Project:Nexus awakens in a lab being tested on by earth scientist until they decide to see how he would live in a normal family enviorment

•Project:Nexus name is changed to Jeremiah and awakens in a house where a family greets him as one of there own.

•Jeremiah begins his first day of school in which he gets in trouble for beating up a group of bullies after raging out.

• Jeremiah would begin to gain memory flashes of being inside the test tube on apokolips.

• Jeremiah begins to have nightmares of Darkseid and apokolips.

• Jeremiah awakens to his frightened parents and burned lines around his room. It turned out to be him, he had waken in rage during the night due to his nightmares.

• Jeremiah enter's middle school and meets a girl named Olivia.

• Olivia and Jeremiah become best friends during 7th grade

• Jeremiah and Olivia gains a romantic relationship during freshmen year.

• Jeremiah reveals what he remembers about Apokolips to Olivia.

• Jeremiah and Oliva become engaged after high school

• Military tracks down Jeremiah and olivia is killed in cross fire.

• Jeremiah rages out and kills the squadron sent to capture Jeremiah.

• Riza's mark activates and explains to Jeremiah what she did, and what he will face in the future, along with giving him a refresher on what he is and where he came from, and who he needed to protect himself from.

• Jeremiah changes his name to Eric rose

• Eric attempts to kill himself via bullet to the head, but his skin carbonation activates unknowingly by Eric to stop the bullet.

• Eric breaks down seeks to destroy darkseid for creating him if his life is going to happen likes this.

NOTE: I think we should get rid of the Rage ability. It's kinda overdone, whatcha reckon? I can easily maker this work without it.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:47 pm


Uchiha Roxas

Well, with Eric being so powerful, i didn't want him to seem unfair, the rage was what i could use for him to use his full power yet at the same time not being in full control.....Actually that does sound kind of over done...especially with the hulk. This story isn't going to be usable is it?

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Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:16 pm


Chaos_wolf12
Uchiha Roxas

Well, with Eric being so powerful, i didn't want him to seem unfair, the rage was what i could use for him to use his full power yet at the same time not being in full control.....Actually that does sound kind of over done...especially with the hulk. This story isn't going to be usable is it?


It is actually.
I think maybe using his body hardening and a bullet ricochet (extra guilt factor! surprised dun dun dun!)

I also think you should add a weakness in that for some unknown reason when in Graphite form... Eric can't fly.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:26 pm


Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12
Uchiha Roxas

Well, with Eric being so powerful, i didn't want him to seem unfair, the rage was what i could use for him to use his full power yet at the same time not being in full control.....Actually that does sound kind of over done...especially with the hulk. This story isn't going to be usable is it?


It is actually.
I think maybe using his body hardening and a bullet ricochet (extra guilt factor! surprised dun dun dun!)

I also think you should add a weakness in that for some unknown reason when in Graphite form... Eric can't fly.

Alright and the edits have been made. What about the legacy app with 200 words? we'll be taking care of that in here to?

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 6:17 am



Gaia Username: Chaos_wolf12
Wanted Legacy/Villain: Power girl
RP Sample:
Eric would look down at the man who attempted to stab him in the back. "You betrayed me, I saved your life and this is how you repay me!?" The man slowly reached for his back pocket to respond. "Well, when a god ask's you to do something in exchange for something great, you do it." His hand drew fast and something hit him in the chest. His skin carbonation protected him, but it began disappearing off his chest before the shot disappeared. It left his skin burning, the pain was intense as he fell to the ground. He looked at the man who explained what he shot him with. "One shot of Raidon. Enough to kill a normal new god. But you, your skin armor means you need an extra helping....Good bye eric." Said his former ally. Eric looked at him as rage and frustration built in his eyes. He shouted as he rose from the ground and flew at him with super sonic speed. He continued his yell as he flew towards space. He stopped once they reached the area where oxygen is to thin to breathe, and eric held him by his neck. "Good bye Arno." He flew at sonic speeds towards the ground and stopped before making contact with the ground, but breaking Arno's neck. He stood up and looked around as every one looked at him. "He killed that man." "Power boy murdered someone." "Murderer" "He killed him!" Eric looked around as they continued to talk about it and him. Arno shouted as he took off towards the sky.
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? In brightest day and blackest night, No evil shall escape my..Punchy sight, for those who worship evil doers, beware my fist, Power boys light...((I swear))

PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:15 am


Chaos_wolf12

Gaia Username: Chaos_wolf12
Wanted Legacy/Villain: Power girl
RP Sample:
Eric would look down at the man who attempted to stab him in the back. "You betrayed me, I saved your life and this is how you repay me!?" The man slowly reached for his back pocket to respond. "Well, when a god ask's you to do something in exchange for something great, you do it." His hand drew fast and something hit him in the chest. His skin carbonation protected him, but it began disappearing off his chest before the shot disappeared. It left his skin burning, the pain was intense as he fell to the ground. He looked at the man who explained what he shot him with. "One shot of Raidon. Enough to kill a normal new god. But you, your skin armor means you need an extra helping....Good bye eric." Said his former ally. Eric looked at him as rage and frustration built in his eyes. He shouted as he rose from the ground and flew at him with super sonic speed. He continued his yell as he flew towards space. He stopped once they reached the area where oxygen is to thin to breathe, and eric held him by his neck. "Good bye Arno." He flew at sonic speeds towards the ground and stopped before making contact with the ground, but breaking Arno's neck. He stood up and looked around as every one looked at him. "He killed that man." "Power boy murdered someone." "Murderer" "He killed him!" Eric looked around as they continued to talk about it and him. Arno shouted as he took off towards the sky.
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? In brightest day and blackest night, No evil shall escape my..Punchy sight, for those who worship evil doers, beware my fist, Power boys light...((I swear))



Can I please finish your Bio before we get cracking onto this? The reason I say that is because with the Bio finished and whatever else we need to do after I want you to look it over and take that quality into your sample. Or at least a glimmer of it.

Right now, you're hardly hitting word caps.

So give me a few hours to make my own RP posts and then I will hopefully finish this bio and let you use it. Then we can move onto powers and such.

Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:19 am


Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12

Gaia Username: Chaos_wolf12
Wanted Legacy/Villain: Power girl
RP Sample:
Eric would look down at the man who attempted to stab him in the back. "You betrayed me, I saved your life and this is how you repay me!?" The man slowly reached for his back pocket to respond. "Well, when a god ask's you to do something in exchange for something great, you do it." His hand drew fast and something hit him in the chest. His skin carbonation protected him, but it began disappearing off his chest before the shot disappeared. It left his skin burning, the pain was intense as he fell to the ground. He looked at the man who explained what he shot him with. "One shot of Raidon. Enough to kill a normal new god. But you, your skin armor means you need an extra helping....Good bye eric." Said his former ally. Eric looked at him as rage and frustration built in his eyes. He shouted as he rose from the ground and flew at him with super sonic speed. He continued his yell as he flew towards space. He stopped once they reached the area where oxygen is to thin to breathe, and eric held him by his neck. "Good bye Arno." He flew at sonic speeds towards the ground and stopped before making contact with the ground, but breaking Arno's neck. He stood up and looked around as every one looked at him. "He killed that man." "Power boy murdered someone." "Murderer" "He killed him!" Eric looked around as they continued to talk about it and him. Arno shouted as he took off towards the sky.
Are you a fan of the series, are you familiar with this character?
Do you promise to be as active as possible if we grant you this privilege? In brightest day and blackest night, No evil shall escape my..Punchy sight, for those who worship evil doers, beware my fist, Power boys light...((I swear))



Can I please finish your Bio before we get cracking onto this? The reason I say that is because with the Bio finished and whatever else we need to do after I want you to look it over and take that quality into your sample. Or at least a glimmer of it.

Right now, you're hardly hitting word caps.

So give me a few hours to make my own RP posts and then I will hopefully finish this bio and let you use it. Then we can move onto powers and such.

Wait what's wrong with my powers? Also I you finished your absence early?
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:03 am


Chaos_wolf12

Wait what's wrong with my powers? Also I you finished your absence early?


I want to help you to tweak them to be awesome. I want you to be the best you can be. I think that if we make this work, you will improve phenomenally.

I did. Bad Day, decided to stay in.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:18 am


Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12

Wait what's wrong with my powers? Also I you finished your absence early?


I want to help you to tweak them to be awesome. I want you to be the best you can be. I think that if we make this work, you will improve phenomenally.

I did. Bad Day, decided to stay in.

Oh...ohhhh ok.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:27 am


Chaos_wolf12
Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12

Wait what's wrong with my powers? Also I you finished your absence early?


I want to help you to tweak them to be awesome. I want you to be the best you can be. I think that if we make this work, you will improve phenomenally.

I did. Bad Day, decided to stay in.

Oh...ohhhh ok.


It's alright. smile Let me just get some RP posts out for myself.

Uchiha Roxas

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:43 am


Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12
Uchiha Roxas
Chaos_wolf12

Wait what's wrong with my powers? Also I you finished your absence early?


I want to help you to tweak them to be awesome. I want you to be the best you can be. I think that if we make this work, you will improve phenomenally.

I did. Bad Day, decided to stay in.

Oh...ohhhh ok.


It's alright. smile Let me just get some RP posts out for myself.

Okay.
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