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 Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:58 pm
this is a poem from when i was younger. i went through a big time of poem writing. and only started up agian this year and i write more songs then poems.
I'm the one last noticed.
The one people don't belive.
The one they allways blam.
They don't fear me, i fear them.
I'm weak, there strong.
I'm dumb, there smart.
I'm nothiner there all.
I fear the truth they fear the le.
yeah its a werid peom but its how i usally fell.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:52 pm
Check your spelling and grammar.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 7:31 pm
ok thanks but it didn't look that bad before
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