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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:17 pm
ok so im writing this yuri hentai story. I want your opion! And please be honest! So here are the characters.
Ayame- 16, strawberry pink hair, blue eyes, outgoing, adventuress, bubbly, doesnt care who loves her she feels honored.
Yumi- 16, blonde hair in pigtails, green eyes, wears glasses, very smart, shy, quiet, Ayame's best freind, has been in love with Ayame for many years!
Those are the two main characters the others dont have names yet. ok backround
Its the year 3000. The Earth was in danger of exploading so they moved the people to a planet close by so they could keep working to try and fix the problem they created. So our two girls have been best friends since they were five. So now Ayame wants to join the U.M. the protectors of the Universe!! And of course since Yumi lover her she goes and joins her. Ayame becomes Captain of the Moonlight. A cruise ship given to help the military! Well Ayame finally finds out Yumi's serect and they share a kiss. After that no one knows about them. Now many werid things keep happening to them. Ayame is getting blackmailed and hit on. And Yumi is breaking out of her shell! And then the queen of eveil tries to kill Ayame and Yumi must save her.
So? Please be as honest as possible!
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:47 am
You may want to delete the part about this being a "Yuri Hentai" for I was about to delete this post because we do not allow hentai here. I do not see why you call this a hentai considering that would mean lots of senseless sex and if you want to write a story that will be taken more seriously then just writing a lesbian story would be better. If you still want this to be a porno then I will have to say good bye to this tread. Sorry.
jaa ne
Kat
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 1:35 pm
Thanks! The only reason why i put that is b/c i do want to add a few sex moments. So thats the only reason why i put in hentai
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 12:17 pm
LittleRini06 Thanks! The only reason why i put that is b/c i do want to add a few sex moments. So thats the only reason why i put in hentai
Hentai is porn, mostly sex without much story. What you are considering is either a romance or romantic erotica. Stories can have sex without it being Hentai or porn. It just makes the story rating much higher. If you wish to discuss your story idea and not the sexual side of the story then that is fine. Just remember we have to keep things PG-13. If you wish to post it somewhere later there is always our other forum, which allows erotica, but Porn.
jaa ne and luck
Kat
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:33 pm
Hey thanks so much! And yes I would love to discuss it so more I hope I can PM you if I need help.
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