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angelstorment

PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:14 pm


arrow Your Gaia Name: angelstorment
Character's name: Naomi Kolk
Age: 17
Gender:Female
Race: Human/Ice Angel
Appearance:Naomi Kolk. Naomi has dark purple hair that reaches to the middle of her back. She usually wears it in a ponytail or in a bun on a daily basis and only lets it down during special occasions. She obtained her lilac eyes from her mother and they have the ability to change colors depending on her mood. Naomi has a light yellowish tinge to her skin due to her father being very dark skinned and her mother being very light. You would usually find Naomi wearing shorts and a plain T-shirt.
Height: 5'10
Strengths: Naomi is a very fast runner and has great stamina something she gained from her father. She also has the ability to be very persuasive and can calm any situation.
Weaknesses: Even though Naomi has great running ability she lacks a lot in the strength category. She can barely lift 65 pounds without falling over. Naomi also has a problem trusting people (which can be a problem when fighting with someone) this is due to the fact her mother was killed by family friend.
Weapon: Likes to use two swords at the same time, and the tonfa
Personality:Naomi is a perfect example of teen angst. You never know what you're going to get depending on the day. But on a good,normal day Naomi is usually sarcastic, random, and very flirtatious. She can strike up a conversation with anyone, but the likelihood that the person would become very good friends with her is very unlikely.
Bio: Naomi's parents were killed when she was baby. The person that killed her parents was an old family friend eager to get their hands on the family wealth. Before her parents' murderer could their hands on the gold, Naomi's grandfather (on her mother's side) stepped in and took Naomi under his wing hoping to raise her as a normal child. But at an early age Naomi began to show symptoms of her mother's elemental powers ( body temperature below 98.6 degrees Fahrenheit, ice poop, preferring colder temperatures to warmer ones etc.). Seeing the signs the grandfather saw in Naomi, he pulled her out of school and began to train her to under the art of ice manipulation. Naomi became very skilled, almost to the same skill as her grandfather, in her ice powers but lacked very much in brute strength. Two years before Naomi showed up at House of Bricks was when Naomi started her tonfa and double swords training. Her grandfather died (at the old age of 126!) and left her instructions in his will to continue her ice manipulation and weaponry training at the House of Bricks. Naomi's grandfather also left her the family wealth to pay for anything she wanted.
Extra: has the power to manipulate and create ice. She can also create ice and snow storms when need be. Of course if she is dehydrated or is in very hot weather she cannot produce any ice unless she gets some water in her system. She make ice balls as big as bowling balls and freeze lakes with a diameter of a mile. She can also form icicles to throw as darts at enemies.






(( I just want to make it clear that Naomi is not attending HoB to avenge her parents' death (that's just too cliche). She's come to terms with her parents' death and seeks no revenge. Just want to clear that up smile ))  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:50 pm


accepted.

LaudyLau


angelstorment

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:36 pm


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Garret ---------------------------------------- Hasn't met or seen
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:32 pm


Re-evaluation:

Appearance: It's okay that you're using a picture, but we also need a written description. It's good to be able to make your character visible in someone's mind with your words.

Strengths: More needed, as well as elaboration as to why she's strong at these things.

Weaknesses: More needed, as well as elaboration as to why she's weak at these things.

Bio: Needs more back story. Why exactly did her father make her come to the House of Bricks? Has anything interesting happened in her past? Has she ever known her mother?

LaudyLau


Lord Andarel

PostPosted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:41 pm


I agree with previous re-eval. The profile says little about the character in terms of history, relatable personality, strengths, weaknesses, etc.

Should be expanded (doesn't need to be totally redone, though).
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