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kingcorrupted

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:38 am


"I love you"

The fields over look us, we lay their, the grass swallows us.
Beneath the realities of the world, our dreams bubble around us keeping us real.
The smiles we have shared, the memories we have made.
Lost in a field, unwilling to move, unclouded eyes view us from above.
Through the lost sights, into the narrow eyes, our walls are lost.
Running in circles, smiling and laughing , like two kids playing tag we kiss each other.
Our difference spring from or similarities, our hearts meld as one.
Beautiful sounds, multiple notes, love is our symphony.
The grass sways with the winds, the sky wraps us, we lay so close.
Over our curves, our figures, our hearts everything else seems so small.
Can you feel the beat in the wind, the bass in our beating hearts, the treble in the sky?
Fall into the new dream, feel the wishes, see the choices dance infront of you.
Only you, only me,only we exist in this new heaven.
Being pressed, held in place, we push back together.
I hold your hand, kiss you softly, tears fall from our eyes.
It can't hold they say, they won't hold, the field doubts our loves conviction.
The light, it begins to rise, or shadows cover the field.
The fields begin to turn away, we stand up, we overcame the field.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 11:09 am


I love it but yeah spell check man. Like did you mean voices when you said goices? And it's tremble, not treble.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:21 am


I meant choices, sorry but it was treble not tremble. like bass cleff and treble cleff. They are musical terms. I play instruments in both cleffs. Sorry, I don't actually have spell check here.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 8:06 am


kingcorrupted
I meant choices, sorry but it was treble not tremble. like bass cleff and treble cleff. They are musical terms. I play instruments in both cleffs. Sorry, I don't actually have spell check here.
Oh okay, there was just a slight confuison there for me. Thanks for clearing it up.

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