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 Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 10:39 am
Yet another poem i need some replies on please
The stars twinkle in the eyes of the moon
They dance with beauty and grace
They make light come from the darkest gloom
And wink at the moons face
They laugh with merriment and joy
And smile unearthly wide
And out a window stares a young boy
Watching the stars as they glide
Soon up rises the sun
It is time to end their flight
But although they end their fun
They’ll play again another night
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 2:36 pm
I think its perfect! and its so beautiful!
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:37 pm
awwww, thanx ^_^ Thats so nice of u ^_^
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 2:05 am
That's really pretty, good job biggrin
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:08 pm
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