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 Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:50 am
We smile in this world of ours... This is a place to learn. Here you will learn anything I can teach you. Attending class is important and although I might force you to attend once in a while I will try not to miss a class. I would like to start by saying a few things about who I am so you know that I am qualified to be your teacher. I am a literature and composition honors three student. I love to write poetry in my free time and you have probably read some of it. One of the main things that I will teach you is how to make sentences flow together and punctuation. I am still learning myself so give me a break if I don't always get things right but I will do what I can. Rules:No chat speak. Remember what I tell you as best you can Don't hesitate to ask if you're not sure about something Be active, try to visit as much as you can Be kind. If I have to take out my time to help someone else extra I do not want other people asking me to get on with my lecture. Do not use a spell check device unless it is Fire Fox.  Spell Check:I am going to be doing a more hands on class and that means that when I get someone typing one word wrong again and again I want to know. Using no spell check before you post means that I can figure out where your problem is and fix it and or tell you how to spell that word correctly. I will be composing a list of misspelled words called the Black Board and then a list of misunderstood words called the Dictionary in my following posts. When you misspell a word and do not realize you have it misspelled I will highlight it in red. When you do not correct your spelling in that post I will correct it OOC in my next post to alert you to it. After that you must type the word correctly in five sentences. The sentences must be funny too. Fire Fox:I am accepting fire fox corrections because it doesn't correct things well. It has the worst suggestion words I have ever seen. Why this is an RP class:What I'm going to do is I'm going to create an RP that you all must participate in and during this RP you will be required to use words of the week, found at the bottom or near this post. I will start out with commonly used words that have been misspelled frequently, like all of the twos, theres, and other things like that, then I will start using other words like adjacent, despite, hence, to increase vocabulary. ...although it is so very dim.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:06 am
We smile in this world of ours... ::Lesson One::
The first lesson I shall teach you is how to create a good solid profile. For this I will use old facts that I have gathered and what a profile should generally include. Considering the first thing needed to create a good profile is a role play, I shall make an RP for us to use as our ground.
:RP:
Walking threw the woods one day I noticed something strange, it was a shining golden plate stuck in the ground and I couldn't get it out. The next day I brought a shovel with me and began to dig to get the golden plate out but that's when everything went amiss. I dug, and dug, trying to get the plate from the ground but the more I dug, the deeper it seemed to get. I was digging around the golden plate after all and it was no longer a plate, but the top of something big. Finally, by the end of the day, the plate had become a ball a meter in diameter. I reached down for it and picked it up, it came easily and without hassle like it weighed nothing at all. But that was not so, for when I touched the ball, I was zapped into another world all together.
This world is one of bright colors and rarely storms. There is rain at night and sunshine in the day, breeds play and romp in the fields of bright green grass. Birds of blue, red, orange, purple, green, and teal all flock to the skies as a giant rainbow of joy while little creatures scurry threw the woods. I couldn't believe my eyes when I first saw this sight, it made me wonder just what type of world I had been zapped into, but when I continued looking around, I noticed that everything was exactly like a dream. Then I realized it, I was in a dream world.
razz rofiles:
The next thing any good RP needs is a profile application, but for all of you, I'm going to give you a treat. Instead of filling out a profile that someone else created, I want you to create one of your own, or use one you've created and post it below. When I'm happy with it, I will post it on the Profile post and when I'm not happy with it I will tell you why.
wahmbulance No More people ZAPPED!! I've chosen someone for that roll. wahmbulance ...although it is so very dim.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:11 am
.:Black Board:.
Girl
Homework
Cries
Certain
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:19 am
. biggrin ictionary:. To- going at something/ I'm going to the store. Too- with or addition of something else, as well/ The dog was throwing up too. Two- a number, double/ There were two sick people going to the hospital too! They're- Conjunction of They and are/ They're really thirsty. There- a location/ The dog should sit there. Their- a group possessing something or when you do not know or want to reveal the gender/ Their hands were like silk upon my cheek. Knew- to understand something/ She knew he was lying. New- young, without wear/ This carpet was new! Bored- tired of everything/ I'm bored! Board- a sheet of wood/ She grabbed the board firmly and yanked.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:22 am
. razz rofiles:. ~Monica!~ ~3~
~Febuary 4th~
~Momo, Little Bug~ Monica is Shy, Loveable, Sweet, Independent, and sometimes Bad Tempered. She likes flowers, the color purple, games, and when someone signs to her, or tells her a story. She dislikes the dark, water, clowns, being alone, and storms. Monica carries a blancket everywhere with her, and mostly plays with her purple ball, teaddy bear, blocks, lady bug, and dinosour. She does not talk much, but can say mommy, daddy, up, down, yes, and no. Monica Lives with her adopted family. She walks around after certain family members she has latched onto. She cries for no reason, and screams to get her way. She was found by one of the older children, after being abandoned by her real parents when she was born, and has lived with her new family since. Monica knows not of where she came from or that she was abandoned, and because she is half demon. Withes, and demons don't mix. Her mother had left her only baby in the bushes to save her little Witch/Demon from being murdered because of there culture. Other Photos: One, Two, Three, Four~Mystriotrix~----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 6:22 pm
Name: Myra Simmons Age: 17 Appearance:MyraRace: Human Bio: Myra come from a pretty well off family. Well...her family is absurdly rich. She tend to get everything and anything she wants. Yes, she's spoiled, but don't let that fool you. She is tough. Myra loves being out doors, but likes to look good while doing it. She can play tons of sports. Not well, but I can. She doesn't like rich foods. She could live off of...well anything. She's not too picky. She has lots of friends and a family that cares for her. She is a junior in High School with straight A's. Her education is important to her. Have to be smart. While she's not talking to friends, doing homework or whatever though, she likes to get out of the house. Away from all the people watching her. Away from the people waiting to jump to make me happy. It can be seriously annoying sometimes. So Myra wanders the woods near her fathers property. That's when she found the golden plate and was zapped into this new dream land. Strengths: Can run for a long time(high stamina), know some self defense and a good reader/learner. Weaknesses: She loves jewlery, romantic things (ie-dates, lines, books ect), doesn't have too many survival skills for the "wild". ((I'll read over the rest of my bio again later. I don't like how it sounds now. Rather choppy I think...))
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:56 am
frdee OK. Let's give this a try. Name: Myra Simmons Age: 17 Appearance: MyraRace: Human My Story Up 'Till Now: My name is Myra. _I come from a pretty well off family. _Well...I'll just come out and say it. _My family is absurdly rich. _I tend to get everything and anything I want. _Yes, I'm spoiled, but don't let that fool you. _I am tough. _I love being out doors, but I like to look good while doing it. _I can play tons of sports. _Not well, I might add but I can. _I don't like rich foods. _I personally could live off of...well anything. I'm not too picky. _I have lots of friends and a family that cares for me. _I am a junior in High School with straight A's. _My education is important to me. Have to be smart. _While I'm not talking to friends, doing homwork or whatever though, I like to get out of the house. _Away from all the people watching me. _Away from the people waiting to jump to make me happy. _It can be seriously annoying sometimes. _So I wander the woods near my fathers property. _That's when I found the golden plate and was zapped into this new dream land. There . _I hope that was right. _I wasn't sure if we were supposed to do a profile for the gil that get's zapped or someone in the dreamland. _I can do someone in the dream land if you want me too. I just want a profile for someone. You can even be the girl zapped to dream land if you want to be. This profile would do fine for that. There are some things I would like to point out though, It's always nice to have the subject like Name: Age: Race: Appearance: Biography: bold, that way other people can seperate it from your text quickly and easily without thinking about it. Also your story is your Biography, or Bio as most will shorten it and I would like you to have listed weaknesses, and strengths. Also note that most people will write the Biography in third person, omniscient.
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:04 pm
Gaian Name: MystriotrixName: Ashley Miley PotterHumen Form:  Nickname: Ash, MiAge: 23Born: 2/04/84Height: 5' 2"Weight: 130lbEyes: BrownHair: BrownSkin: Wite Blood type: red, and silver Body Type: Average Markings: Royal Birth Mark on left sholderLocation/Country: Barton Town/Gaia, and A Dream World Occupation: Professional Hobbies: Learing - what comes she way, Art - drawing what she sees, and Writting - loves to tell the littles stories. Fave color: Black, Red, White, Blue, Purple, Green, TealMotto: Don't Hold Back, Go For ItZodiac: AquariusElement: AirType: PositiveQuality: FixedRouling Planet: Uranus Gemstones: Sapphire and AmethystFlowers: Violets, Pansys, DaffodilsInterests: Everything Lifs Sends Her WayAllies: Friends, and Family Enemies: Step Father and Step UncleSpecies: Half Witch/Half Humen Ethinic Group: Wiccan Powers: Has the Power to move objects with mind, tell-a-port to places, tell-a-port stuff to ones self, blow stuff up, can cast 333 diferent spells, transfig into any object, and fly on a broom.Element: all - Earth, Fire, Water, Air, Spirit. Ashley holds Gems of fire(right hand), earth(forhead), water(laft hand), and air/spirt(tummy) under her skin. There are prople(other's with powers) out there who want the gems out of greed, And some want her blood, which is silver, and can grant anyone imortatly. But if a gem is removed Ashley would die, and if she dies the world would turn to dust.Personality: Shy, Loveable, Sweet, Independent, Creative, Philosophical, and sometimes Tempermental.Strengths: Leastening, Sneeking Around, and Seeing Things Others Can Not.Weaknesses: Family, and FriendsPersonal Skills: Hand to Hand Combat, The Arts, and Orgaanization.Weapons: A Black Leather Functional Samurai Sword, Japanese Style Reverse-Bladed Sword, A Switchblade Knife, Athame, and Wand.History: Ashley was born in a castle by the sea in the country of Russia, to the Empriss of Russia. She was born into a family which had six children already. Welsey age 7, Jason age 6, Tara age 4, Vipra age 3, Domainck age 2, Zoe age 1. Her Siblings and she got along well up intill the day it happend.
It was her 3rd birthday evryone was runng aroung getting the ball room ready for a party, her mother, father, siblings and her started our day in the great hall getting our picture taken. After they split up to get ready for the party, the children went with our nannys to thier rooms, and their parents went to theirs. In Ashley's room, her nanny had gottten her dressed up, than she took her to her parents room, where she found a new toy in the toybox (they had a toybox in everyroom), her parents were arguing weather or not she should have it. As she pointed the new toy at her mother playfully, her father said "look she found it" he bent down and showed her a lever, as he said "pull the little lever". With the toy still pointing at her mother, she did as her father said, than she saw her mother fall to the grownd. Walking over to her crying "mommy", she sat down and cryed agan "mommy", and this time with tears in her eyes, her father bent down, and picked her up, he caried her to a dark room, than left. Sneeking around the castle he than took her siblings to different homes throught out time, and space. After A few houres he had returned to the castle to face the police that were there. They questioned him, found no trace of evedince, and dropped the case. When the police left the house he went to the dark room and for the frits time he hurt her. For the year she lived with her father, he countinued to hurt and torcher her. But It was the second day of the three days he sayed he would take her to the market that she was reconized by an old castle worker. She called the police, and Ashley was plasced in an foster home, while he was arested for the merder of my mother and the disapernce of eight children. At the foster home Ashley used bad words, made trubble with the other children in the home, and ran away every chance she got, after awile the family gave up, and droped her in an Orphanage.
During the five years Ashley was in and out of foster homes, she countinued to use her powers when she was not soposed to, used bad words, mad trubble with the other children in the homes, and she ran away every chance she got. By age eight and a half the state gave up, and left her alone. She was nine when she went walking threw some woods just outside the town one day, and noticed something strange, it was a shining golden plate stuck in the ground, She couldn't get it out, so the next day she brought a shovel with her, and began to dig to get the golden plate out, but that's when everything went amiss. She dug, and dug, trying to get the plate from the ground, but the more she dug, the deeper it seemed to get. She was digging around the golden plate after all, and it was no longer a plate, but the top of something big. Finally by the end of the day the plate had become a ball, a meter in diameter. Ashley reached down for it, and picked it up, it came easily and without hassle like it weighed nothing at all. But that was not so, for when she touched the ball, she was zapped into another world all together.
This world is one of bright colors, and to rarely stormed. There is rain at night, and sunshine in the day. Breeds play, and romp in the fields of bright green grass. Birds of blue, red, orange, purple, green, and teal all flock to the skies as a giant rainbow of joy while little creatures scurry threw the woods. Ashley couldn't believe her eyes when she first saw this sight, it made her wonder just what type of world she had been zapped into, but when she continued looking around, she noticed that everything was exactly like a dream. Then she realized it, she was in a dream world. Now 14 years have pased, and Ashley is still the dream world. She learned many trades, and lifestyles of thoes who lived in the dream world.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 2:48 pm
Mystriotrix Gaian Name: Mystriotrix Name: Ashley Miley Potter Humen Form: Nickname: Ash, Mi Age: 23 Born: 2/04/84 Height: 5' 2" Weight: 130lb Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Skin: Wite
Blood type: red, and silver
Body Type: Average
Markings: Royal Birth Mark on left sholder
Location/Country: Barton Town/Gaia, and A Dream World
Occupation: Professional ____
Hobbies: Learing - what comes she way, Art - drawing what she sees, and Writting - loves to tell the littles stories.
Fave color: Black, Red, White, Blue, Purple, Green, Teal
Motto: Don't Hold Back, Go For It
Zodiac: Aquarius
Element: Air
Type: Positive
Quality: Fixed
Rouling Planet: Uranus
Gemstones: Sapphire and Amethyst
Flowers: Violets, Pansys, Daffodils
Interests: EverythingLifs Sends Her WayAllies: Friends, and Family Enemies: Step Father and Step Uncle Species: Half Witch/Half Humen Ethinic Group: Wiccan Powers: Has the Power to move objects with mind, tell-a-port to places, tell-a-port stuff to ones self, blow stuff up, can cast 333 diferent spells, transfig into any object, and fly on a broom. Element: all - Earth, Fire, Water, Air, Spirit. Ashley holds Gems of fire(right hand), earth( forhead), water( laft hand), and air/ spirt(tummy) under her skin. There are prople(other's with powers) out there who want the gems out of greed, And some want her blood, which is silver, and can grant anyone imortatly. But if a gem is removed Ashley would die, and if she dies the world would turn to dust. Personality:Shy, Loveable, Sweet, Independent, Creative, Philosophical, and sometimes Tempermental.Strengths: Leastening, Sneeking Around, and Seeing Things Others Can Not. Weaknesses: Family, and Friends Personal Skills: Hand to Hand Combat, The Arts, and Orgaanization.Weapons: A Black Leather Functional Samurai Sword, Japanese Style Reverse-Bladed Sword, A Switchblade Knife, Athame, and Wand. History: Ashley was born in a castle by the sea in the country of Russia, to the Empriss of Russia. She was born into a family which had six children already. Welsey age 7, Jason age 6, Tara age 4, Vipra age 3, Domainck age 2, Zoe age 1. Her Siblings and she got along well up intill the day it happend.
It was her 3rd birthday evryone was runng aroung getting the ball room ready for a party, her mother, father, siblings and her started our day in the great hall getting our picture taken. After they split up to get ready for the party, the children went with our nannys to thier rooms, and their parents went to theirs. In Ashley's room, her nanny had gottten her dressed up, than she took her to her parents room, where she found a new toy in the toybox (they had a toybox in everyroom), her parents were arguing weather or not she should have it. As she pointed the new toy at her mother playfully, her father said "look she found it" he bent down and showed her a lever, as he said "pull the little lever". With the toy still pointing at her mother, she did as her father said, than she saw her mother fall to the grownd. Walking over to her crying "mommy", she sat down and cryed agan "mommy", and this time with tears in her eyes, her father bent down, and picked her up, he caried her to a dark room, than left. Sneeking around the castle he than took her siblings to different homes throught out time, and space. After A few houres he had returned to the castle to face the police that were there. They questioned him, found no trace of evedince, and dropped the case. When the police left the house he went to the dark room and for the frits time he hurt her. For the year she lived with her father, he countinued to hurt and torcher her. But It was the second day of the three days he sayed he would take her to the market that she was reconized by an old castle worker. She called the police, and Ashley was plasced in an foster home, while he was arested for the merder of my mother and the disapernce of eight children. At the foster home Ashley used bad words, made trubble with the other children in the home, and ran away every chance she got, after awile the family gave up, and droped her in an Orphanage. During the five years Ashley was in and out of foster homes, she continued to use her powers when she was not soposed to, used bad words, mad trubble with the other children in the homes, and she ran away every chance she got. By age eight and a half the state gave up, and left her alone. She was nine when she went walking threw some woods just outside the town one day, and noticed something strange, it was a shining golden plate stuck in the ground, She couldn't get it out, so the next day she brought a shovel with her, and began to dig to get the golden plate out, but that's when everything went amiss. She dug, and dug, trying to get the plate from the ground, but the more she dug, the deeper it seemed to get. She was digging around the golden plate after all, and it was no longer a plate, but the top of something big. Finally by the end of the day the plate had become a ball, a meter in diameter. Ashley reached down for it, and picked it up, it came easily and without hassle like it weighed nothing at all. But that was not so, for when she touched the ball, she was zapped into another world all together. This world is one of bright colors, and to rarely stormed. There is rain at night, and sunshine in the day. Breeds play, and romp in the fields of bright green grass. Birds of blue, red, orange, purple, green, and teal all flock to the skies as a giant rainbow of joy while little creatures scurry threw the woods. Ashley couldn't believe her eyes when she first saw this sight, it made her wonder just what type of world she had been zapped into, but when she continued looking around, she noticed that everything was exactly like a dream. Then she realized it, she was in a dream world. Now 14 years have pased, and Ashley is still the dream world. She learned many trades, and lifestyles of thoes who lived in the dream world.
I would never, in a million years, DREAM of accepting such a terrible Mary Sue. A Mary sue is a person who can do too many things and is absolutely perfect. She is someone who has the world and can do thousands of things without any penalties. THIS character right here is the perfect example of a Mary sue. MORE Over I do Not want profiles for a character who is zapped to the other world, I want characters who are already there! The character I choose will be the one that is zapped to the other world! YOU have to make a completely NEW character, I will NEVER accept this girl.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 9:57 pm
So should I make a new one then? Sorry, I'm kind of confused. I fixed my original one. ^_^;;
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 6:24 pm
frdee So should I make a new one then? Sorry, I'm kind of confused. I fixed my original one. ^_^;; No, no, you're fine. What you need to do is add a few things. Weaknesses: Strengths: etc... and you also have a problem with the sentance 'She am tough.' in the biography. You may wish to read over it and figure out what else can improve. Note: OTHERS should not be zapped. I've chosen Frdee as the zapped.
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:17 am
Well now thats alittle harsh. I'm sorry I have a huge wild imagination. I'll have the new pro has soon as I get time to create it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:30 pm
This is just a random Profile. ~Monica!~ ~3~
~Febuary 4th~
~Momo, Little Bug~ Monica is Shy, Loveable, Sweet, Independent, and sometimes Bad Tempered. She likes flowers, the color purple, games, and when someone signs to her, or tells her a story. She dislikes the dark, water, clowns, being alone, and storms. Monica carries a blancket everywhere with her, and mostly plays with her purple ball, teaddy bear, blocks, lady bug, and dinosour. She does not talk much, but can say mommy, daddy, up, down, yes, and no. Monica Lives with her adopted family. She walks around after certon family members she has latched onto. She crys for no reason, and screams to get her way. She was found by one of the older children, after being abandoned by her real parents when she was born, and has lived with her new family sence. Monica knows not of where she came from or that she was abandoned, and because she is half demon. Withes, and demons don't mix. Her mother had left her only baby in the bushes to save her little Witch/Demon from being merdered because of there caulture. Other Photos: One, Two, Three, Four~Mystriotrix~
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:01 pm
Mystriotrix This is just a random Profile. ~Monica!~ ~3~
~Febuary 4th~
~Momo, Little Bug~ Monica is Shy, Loveable, Sweet, Independent, and sometimes Bad Tempered. She likes flowers, the color purple, games, and when someone signs to her, or tells her a story. She dislikes the dark, water, clowns, being alone, and storms. Monica carries a blancket everywhere with her, and mostly plays with her purple ball, teaddy bear, blocks, lady bug, and dinosour. She does not talk much, but can say mommy, daddy, up, down, yes, and no. Monica Lives with her adopted family. She walks around after certon family members she has latched onto. She crys for no reason, and screams to get her way. She was found by one of the older children, after being abandoned by her real parents when she was born, and has lived with her new family sence. Monica knows not of where she came from or that she was abandoned, and because she is half demon. Withes, and demons don't mix. Her mother had left her only baby in the bushes to save her little Witch/Demon from being merdered because of there caulture. Other Photos: One, Two, Three, Four~Mystriotrix~ XD There we go. The only reason I was harsh was because I knew you could do better. Creativity means that you Do Not create those types of profiles, that is uncreative, creative, is things like your little bug. Nice and original. She will already be in the other world, this profile is the first to be accepted.
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