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yama_neko

PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:03 am


This is from my journal. My observations of a TANPOPO

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The common dandelion; the bane of gardeners; yet its leaves can be used in salads or for making dandelion wine.

It is a weed that aspires to be aflower, yet, in the mind of most children, it is a flower. Their most favorite flower, whose yellow petals, when placed under a chin, can tell if a person likes butter.

The first flowers collected by children to give to their parents or grandparents as a special bouquet.

A yellow flower that can be woven into a crown or bracelet, by tying its straw-like stems together in a chain.

And when that flower goes to seed. . . .magic! The yellow flower turns into a white puff ball of seeds.

A wish granter.

A dream maker.

When lightly blown upon or spun around, sends the seed into flight, thinking of tiny parachutes. . . .or of faeries in flight. . . .the seeds gently drift in the wind, until they come to rest in some forgotten spot. Until next Spring, when the little weed-who-would-be-a-flower, pops its head out, for the next child to discover its beauty. . . .

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 4:13 am


Unlucky chico. Even this writer's guild has rules, of which you have not read. Give it a quick read and do what it sees or I'll have to put this baby down in three days.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:03 am


Queeny
Unlucky chico. Even this writer's guild has rules, of which you have not read. Give it a quick read and do what it sees or I'll have to put this baby down in three days.


I'm glad to say, I won't have to put this down!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 7:44 am


Whiskey Tango Foxtrot?

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:59 pm


I liked it; it's sweet. I make wishes on dandylions all the time, but they never come true! crying Fate is so cruel to me!!!

That picture is nice, and kinda . . . romantic.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:12 pm


This piece, I am pleased to say, is very good. . . and it gave me a pink link. . .

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Susan Salt

PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:51 am


i like it too, it might be better over in the poetrie section!
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 4:32 pm


I like this a lot. You really capture the idea of something that is, when we're children, whimsical. And when we get older, annoying. But you do it without taking days and days and too many complicated, useless words to explain.

It's more of an explanation than a story, but yeah. That's cool. I really like it. heart

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