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 Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:35 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:32 pm
I'll have to read that... i haven't gotten around to it, but when i get the chance, i will.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 11:45 am
You better! I haven't had a comment on that story in over a year.
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:32 am
I'll be sure to read it one of these days! And I'll leave a comment too.
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 1:11 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:29 pm
so far it's good... it keeps saying "Bad Response From Server", so it'll take me awhile to get past the third chapter...
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:14 pm
I read the whole thing... it's so good! sad in the end, but good.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:51 pm
Too many deaths...
Too friggin' short...
Occasional mistakes...
(I complain a lot, really,
So don't mind me.)
Other than that,
It's pretty good.
-peace-
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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:06 pm
hahahahh. I'm just starting to read it, and when you said "Lt. Hawkeye," I immediately realized it was fma characters...since there was Roy too....
I love them, so I like it so far... it seems to be pretty good o_o
okay, I'll keep reading.
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Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:23 pm
Well, it's good. And seriously sad. I liked the last line. It totally ended it.
Hmm
The situation doesn't...seem likely though. XD
but that doesn't really matter since it's called fanfiction for a reason.
It is short, but that's why I read it. o_o
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:06 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:08 pm
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