Zeru-sama
Hey, Nice picture, I like the concept and the pose. over all i give it a ...B!
ha ha, but if you would like my advice, you could work on your line weight and if you can edit it in photoshop or something it would be good to clean up those erase marks.
Just some friendly help
Zeru-Sama
Acutally that was just a drawing with a single thickness pen and I didn't bother doing much to it because it's a sketch. Usualy I clean up my line work, and I seldom color unless it's with pencle.