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 Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 10:58 am
I've got a fic I wrote if anyone is interested in reading it! Title: Defying GravitySummary: Narcissa Malfoy reflects on the last conversation she had with her cousin, Regulus. Let me know what you think anyway you want.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:00 pm
RegulusofSlytherin I've got a fic I wrote if anyone is interested in reading it! Title: Defying GravitySummary: Narcissa Malfoy reflects on the last conversation she had with her cousin, Regulus. Let me know what you think anyway you want. I love the ending. I only spotted two errors (which is great). You really did your homework for this fic, too, I could tell. This is the first fic I've read that looks into Narcissa and Regulus' relationship, so that's good.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:38 pm
Errors? *looks flabbergasted* Where?
No, seriously, thanks! My parents were staring at me because I was sitting in front of the computer for hours with OotP and HBP spread in front of me checking and double checking everything known about Regulus and Narcissa.
Where were those errors though? I tried really hard to make sure that I caught as many as possible. I'd like to know so I can fix it later.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:51 pm
RegulusofSlytherin Errors? *looks flabbergasted* Where? No, seriously, thanks! My parents were staring at me because I was sitting in front of the computer for hours with OotP and HBP spread in front of me checking and double checking everything known about Regulus and Narcissa. Where were those errors though? I tried really hard to make sure that I caught as many as possible. I'd like to know so I can fix it later. Hmm.. In the sentence "Narcissa said nothing for a few minutes, just sitting down again and stroking her babies hand," 'babies' should be 'baby's'. In the phrase, "but...no where is safe," there should be a space before 'no', and there shouldn't be a space between 'no' and 'where'. In the phrase, "we could even out prank Sirius," 'out prank' should have a hyphen where the space is (so it would be out-prank). Okay, that's all I caught.. It's a bit more than two, but that's how many I spotted on my first read. They're little things, though, so you shouldn't be worried. wink Good luck with your future fics.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:09 pm
who is Regulus im sry im drawing a blank?
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:11 pm
Me, lol. No, Sirius's younger brother.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:13 pm
Oh he is the one who trys to leave the death eaters but ends up dying in a couple weeks right
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:55 pm
familyguyfan218 Oh he is the one who trys to leave the death eaters but ends up dying in a couple weeks right Right.
eek I just made a possible discovery, by the way; I was just looking up the Black Family Tree chapter in OotP (so that I could answer your question; RegulusofSlytherin beat me to it, though), and.. Well, just read this:
"There was a musical box that emitted a... tune when wound, and they all found themselves becoming... sleepy until Ginny had the sense to slam the lid shut; also a heavy locket that none of them could open, an number of ancient seals... blahblahblah." (pg. 116, Ootp US version, if anyone wants to read it themselves. I took out some unimportant bits.)
Was that "heavy locket" the fake Horcrux that Regulus supposedly left in the cauldron? Now, I know that this took place after he was dead, but could Sirius possibly have opened it and taken it to where he was sure Regulus would have left it? It seems a bit too complicated for it to be true, but it's a fun theory nevertheless.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:59 pm
That's a different one O.o. I've heard that locket is the Horcrux, which I rather like, because then Kreacher could easily hide it somewhere. He's done it with other things.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:12 pm
RegulusofSlytherin That's a different one O.o. I've heard that locket is the Horcrux, which I rather like, because then Kreacher could easily hide it somewhere. He's done it with other things. True! I hadn't thought of that. It's certainly more possible than my theory, and it makes sense. Alot of sense, actually. In fact, it's probably the truth. Regulus said (in the fake locket) that he had stolen the real one and hid it in his house (which would be the perfect place to hide something, since it's so cluttered, and it has all tose protection spells on it). Thank you for letting me know of this theory.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:16 pm
feel-good-hit familyguyfan218 Oh he is the one who trys to leave the death eaters but ends up dying in a couple weeks right Right.
eek I just made a possible discovery, by the way; I was just looking up the Black Family Tree chapter in OotP (so that I could answer your question; RegulusofSlytherin beat me to it, though), and.. Well, just read this:
"There was a musical box that emitted a... tune when wound, and they all found themselves becoming... sleepy until Ginny had the sense to slam the lid shut; also a heavy locket that none of them could open, an number of ancient seals... blahblahblah." (pg. 116, Ootp US version, if anyone wants to read it themselves. I took out some unimportant bits.)
Was that "heavy locket" the fake Horcrux that Regulus supposedly left in the cauldron? Now, I know that this took place after he was dead, but could Sirius possibly have opened it and taken it to where he was sure Regulus would have left it? It seems a bit too complicated for it to be true, but it's a fun theory nevertheless.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:17 pm
So Regulus is basicly the one that kiled dumbledore.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:17 pm
Your welcome ^^. Actually, I think Regulus as R.A.B. makes a considerable amount of sense. Which is why I'm worried it's not true, lol. At any rate, it gives my Regulus fics more exposure.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 4:09 pm
RegulusofSlytherin Your welcome ^^. Actually, I think Regulus as R.A.B. makes a considerable amount of sense. Which is why I'm worried it's not true, lol. At any rate, it gives my Regulus fics more exposure. Speaking of exposure, would you mind if I included your link in a list of fics I'm making?
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:29 pm
familyguyfan218 So Regulus is basicly the one that kiled dumbledore. Um. No. It was Snape.
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