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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:16 pm
Title:The Missing Uchiha {PART 1}
Penname: Tsuki no Ki
Category your story fits under: Naruto
Genre: General/Adventure
Status: In progress
Rating: T (only because it didn't seem like a little kid story to me, it's not bad or anything. There are just some swear words)
Disclaimer: Masashi Kishimoto-sensei owns all the characters in this story except Solari Uchiha, Chyako-iemoto, and anyone with the last name Takanata (In PART 1 the only Takanatas are Senshi and Ara, but Ara is only mentioned)
Summary: Honorable granddaughter Solari knew that she had been adopted for almost her entire life. But then she finds out that she is an Uchiha. She and her twin brother Sasuke must learn about themselves if they are to save each other from Orochimaru's grasp.
Extra Information: I am finished writing this story, it is 30 chapters long but FF.net only has the first 10 so far. FF.net is very far behind becuase no one is reviewing my stories.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:18 pm
Update Log
~8/22/07~ Put up chapter 7; 0 reviews
~10/22/07~ Put up chapters 8, 9, & 10; 0 reviews; 1 favorite
~10/22/07~ Replaced chapters 1 & 2 with edited versions. No content change, just my writing style is much better now.
**The amount of reviews and favorites in each update are totals, not new additions
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:24 pm
Story Teaser
~I changed one sentance in this teaser to not give away a huge thing about my OC but it makes no difference in this part of the story~
~This bit is from chapter 25~
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Kakashi came over to her and put a hand on her back. “Solari, is that true?”
Solari shook her head. “Not anymore,” she managed to say through her tears.
“Solari, Why don’t I take you home. I see all the other shinobi retreating so it’s over.”
“But, what about Hokage-sama?”
Kakashi looked up at Gai. “Gai, go check on Hokage-sama, then come strait to the headquarters. I’ll be there with Solari, tell us what happened.”
Gai nodded, apparently putting their temporary rivalry aside, and headed off.
Kakashi led Solari out of the arena and through the village. This village was destroyed and people were injured. There were medic-nins and other ninja trying to help. Solari didn’t see any of it, she was still crying and everything was blurry.
Kakashi led her into the headquarters and into the Hokage’s office. He sat her down in a chair.
“This will be the first place Gai will look for us. We should stay here until he gets back.”
Solari nodded, wiping tears away.
“Solari I won’t tell anyone your secret, and neither will Gai. I’ve been a shinobi for a very long time, and in all that time the only ninja I’ve seen that are more loyal to Konoha than you are would be the Hokages. You are a Leaf Ninja and that is what matters. It’s who you are now, not who you used to be that counts.”
“Arigato Kakashi.”
The door opened and Gai walked in. He had a somber look on his face.
Kakashi stood up and walked over to him. “Well?” he asked.
Gai shook his head. “Orochimaru killed him. There was nothing anyone could do, they were completely blocked off.”
At these words Solari stood up and headed towards the door.
“Solari, are you okay?” Kakashi asked.
She put her hand on the door and shook her head. She opened the door and said only three words before she left. “Damn you Orochimaru.”
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:24 pm
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