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Altelise

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:52 am


Hello to all, I am new here so if I am doing anything against the rules; please inform me. I have posted in the place where I am supposed to introduce myself a bit, so I've got that part down and I did read the rules, really. But I can't help but be paranoid thinking; "What if there is a certain rule that I have missed?" Hopefully, I haven't missed any though.

Anyway, I've been wanting to post some profiles here. So, I'm going to include all my characters in this one thread. Please bare with me because their profiles will be by post, I have pictures of some of them as well; although sadly, not all. I will draw all of their pictures though; don't worry.
So, this is the first post and here will be the contents. I hope you enjoy this.

1. Nero Freyr
2. Luka Xalanderain Tortallinth
3. Conlan Dirce
4. Hugo Theron
5. Leon Knightly

Oh, by the way. This is the type of thread that updats slowly. But I'll try to get back on as much as possible. So I don't really mind if people posts comments in between my posts.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:01 am


Nero Freyr

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((I'm sorry, this is an old pictue really. I've had this since last year so I pretty much dislike it. I will draw a better picture next time.))

Nero is considered to be the reluctant hero of the story. The boy has a will as fragile as a leaf; and can easily be mislead. Often one, tormented by his past; often one haunted by the thought of whether he is still sane, Nero has trouble believing in himself.
He has very little self-confidence and often judges himself when his actions come out wrong. Nero tries hard to stand strong, stay firm, and lock away his emotions; this makes people think badly of him, though, he prefers not to have close ties with people for the fear of going through loss.

A. Cold. He is a cold person, his trust in others is something hard to actually grasp. In a sense, Nero’s coldness is grown tough and more or less, immoral. Yes, Immoral is the key word to it all. To get his means, Nero will cheat if he has to. And his harshness towards reality only proves to be a leading thread from his past.
B. Reserved. Nero is a very reserved character. Though, he will show the foolishness of a seventeen year old bully who merely indulges in suffering another person if it concerns him at all. Nero can be considered the silent outcast, though, a title given to him is trouble maker.
C. Outspoken. Perhaps, it cannot even be considered outspoken. But, Nero will definitely not hesitate to speak something harsh when he wants to. If he doesn’t like you, he won’t just ignore you. He’ll come out a say it.
D. Mysterious. One may not be able to expect what the boy will think of next and that is certain. Nero absolutely hates it when he finds that a person has got to know him well and he does not have trouble hiding things more and more. Sometimes, he goes as far as changing his own personality.
E. Dangerous. Nero is a very dangerous person. Not that he enjoys danger, but now, he is danger himself. It will not be a surprise when a certain character does not trust him. Though, if he trusts you, you can rest assured that he will grant you undying loyalty.
F. Strange. Nero is a very disturbing character. His words and actions may prove to surprise you. Though, it is said that he dislikes Leon, the character in him is perhaps the same.
G. Childlike. When I say childlike, what I’m talking about is how he reacts to the things around him. Nero hardly shows how he truly feels to others, but, in a strange way; he yearns for attention when he is feeling down. Sometimes, he just wants attention. He can ask for the most simple and childish things, like for you to hold his hand or to stay by his bedside until he falls asleep.

H. Cry baby. Though it doesn’t seem like it. Nero is a big cry baby, he may act tough most of the time but deep down, he’s too much of a softie.

Softer Feelings
Nero has always been a soft person underneath his hard exterior. He can not help it, as he too is human and have his own human morals

His kindness. His way of being kind is to insult you. He is the type of person who will try to push you away for his own means and will do anything for a person important to him, even at the cost of his own life. Sometimes, his words are very harsh, but if you dig deeper into its meaning, you’ll find that in a way it will help you and soon you will be relaxed. Nero’s way of showing he cares is often misjudged and this just makes people hate him more. Though, his ulterior motive always tends to have a hard time getting through people.


His loving side. Nero can be sweet when he wants to though his way of being sweet is very different from others. When he is sweet, he is rather abrupt, and may tend to surprise you. Nero’s loving side is quite forceful. It can be with him, trapping you against a wall or it can even be displayed in front of others. However, this side of him is very rarely seen, you’d find it easier to get out his kindness.

Protective. It can easily be said that Nero is very protective of people, especially to the person he loves most (That would have been me if he was real, but since he’s not, I’m letting Luka take that role.) Well, anyway. Nero’s protectiveness can tend to be rather annoying, he can act more like a guard dog than a friend and if you are someone important to him, there will be no stopping him from trailing you like an unwanted tail. Luka is so lucky…

Caring. Nero is perhaps the least person in the world who could give a damn for another. If he did care for a random individual, perhaps, you should know that you are dreaming. But, when Nero does show he cares—he may reveal it to you in a blunt way, or in a way that it will hurt your feelings.

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Kita-Ysabell

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:24 pm


eek Sooo... long.... *will get around to reading. Someday. I promise*

Could you... give us... a synopsis?
PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:10 am


Sorry! Sorry! I'll get to that, you bet I will! I deffinitely will, but it's our exam week so I have to refrain from it for now.

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