Okay, so, I was working on M'kayla Aristotle's story last night... and... a new idea hit me. Here it is.
Okay, so it's based off of one of my many life-after-death theories. I got the idea for this last night, and here's what I wrote down, you know, not concrete stuff, just getting the idea written down... so yeah, here's what I wrote last night.
When you die, you lose all physical functions. You can no longer walk or talk, and your body is probably rotting six feet beneath the ground somewhere. So basically, all you are is a spirit. It's like going to Heaven, except the Angel Comity wipes away all of your memories, and they send you back from the dead.
When they do send you back, the time they do is both before and after your death. The same day you were born is when you return. Sometimes, though, the mind erasing finishes ahead or behind schedule, and when it does, you simply return to the day of your birth and are reborn, but this time at a late or early time.
Everything always falls in the same place, just not always at the same exact moment - Except for your death. You always end up dying at the same moment.
Some memories however, are left after the mind erasing, because if the person had done a bad deed in their life, they were tortured for it by having cruel and unusual NiteMares and Dejavu.
But what were to happen if an Angel of the Angel Comity simply forgot to erase someones memories? That's what happens in this story. This is the tale of Billy McCardy.
Main Characters
{Descriptions}
Main Main Character{Billy McCardy}~ Pretty, average IQ for and eleventh grader. Killed in a car crash. When she returned from the dead, none of her memories had been erased. Her father's a lawyer, her mother's a nurse. She has two older brothers and a younger sister and brother <- Twins. Her family isn't the religious kind, and she is sporty and caring. Her memories, however, do not all become crystal clear at once, just as the event where the memory was created drew closer is when she remembers it. Dejavu for her isn't abnormal. And neither are NiteMares.
Main Main Angel{Rose Greed}~ Drop dead gorgeous. Known as "The Goddess". Head of the Angel Comity. In charge of mission "Terminate". In charage of mission "Illusion". And in creator of NiteMares. "Villian" of the story.
Main Angel{Lilith Greed}~ Beautiful in a rebelious kind of way, you (for an Angel), same last name as The Goddess; but claims to have absolutely no relations to her. Head of the NiteMare Rebellion.
Main Human{Does not have a name yet}~Mostly average joe kinda guy, except more muscular. Nineteen year old highschool dropout. Has had NiteMares since he was fourteen and accidentally killed his baby sister. Went to Juvy for a few years and no longer, because it was only an accident, and evidence proved so. Lives in his own apartment and works as an automobile mechanic.
So, what does everyone think of it so far?
{Oh yeah, and who can tell me what the words in the poll are? xD}
Okay, so it's based off of one of my many life-after-death theories. I got the idea for this last night, and here's what I wrote down, you know, not concrete stuff, just getting the idea written down... so yeah, here's what I wrote last night.
When you die, you lose all physical functions. You can no longer walk or talk, and your body is probably rotting six feet beneath the ground somewhere. So basically, all you are is a spirit. It's like going to Heaven, except the Angel Comity wipes away all of your memories, and they send you back from the dead.
When they do send you back, the time they do is both before and after your death. The same day you were born is when you return. Sometimes, though, the mind erasing finishes ahead or behind schedule, and when it does, you simply return to the day of your birth and are reborn, but this time at a late or early time.
Everything always falls in the same place, just not always at the same exact moment - Except for your death. You always end up dying at the same moment.
Some memories however, are left after the mind erasing, because if the person had done a bad deed in their life, they were tortured for it by having cruel and unusual NiteMares and Dejavu.
But what were to happen if an Angel of the Angel Comity simply forgot to erase someones memories? That's what happens in this story. This is the tale of Billy McCardy.
Main Characters
{Descriptions}
Main Main Character{Billy McCardy}~ Pretty, average IQ for and eleventh grader. Killed in a car crash. When she returned from the dead, none of her memories had been erased. Her father's a lawyer, her mother's a nurse. She has two older brothers and a younger sister and brother <- Twins. Her family isn't the religious kind, and she is sporty and caring. Her memories, however, do not all become crystal clear at once, just as the event where the memory was created drew closer is when she remembers it. Dejavu for her isn't abnormal. And neither are NiteMares.
Main Main Angel{Rose Greed}~ Drop dead gorgeous. Known as "The Goddess". Head of the Angel Comity. In charge of mission "Terminate". In charage of mission "Illusion". And in creator of NiteMares. "Villian" of the story.
Main Angel{Lilith Greed}~ Beautiful in a rebelious kind of way, you (for an Angel), same last name as The Goddess; but claims to have absolutely no relations to her. Head of the NiteMare Rebellion.
Main Human{Does not have a name yet}~Mostly average joe kinda guy, except more muscular. Nineteen year old highschool dropout. Has had NiteMares since he was fourteen and accidentally killed his baby sister. Went to Juvy for a few years and no longer, because it was only an accident, and evidence proved so. Lives in his own apartment and works as an automobile mechanic.
So, what does everyone think of it so far?
{Oh yeah, and who can tell me what the words in the poll are? xD}
