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 Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:31 pm
My English prof. gave us an assignment to do this weekend. Tell me what you think?
"Write a poem using the same style/format of The Red Wheelbarrow."
The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
My poems. Pick which one you like more.
these ratty old
sneakers
could walk for
ever
through the hill
side
of a distant
country
--OR--
my ratty old
sneakers
will walk for
ever
in the foot
steps
of my older
brother
Well? I hate not using punctuation.
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:59 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 7:36 pm
these ratty old
sneakers
could walk for
ever
through the hill
side
of a distant
country
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:58 am
Night likes the first of your two better. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 12:36 pm
Me too, but I turned in the other one instead. sweatdrop
And now I have a paper to write. I don't know what to write. Icky.
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:20 pm
Cassius likes the second one. Its so deep heart
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:24 pm
So deep, huh?
I always felt like everything I did, my brother had already done it before me and better. Now life is scary. I'm doing stuff my brother never did and I don't know where to go. I can't follow him. crying Well, I could, but I don't want to. Following Robbie isn't where I'm supposed to be walking.
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:56 pm
Kayla-Kay Koala So deep, huh?
I always felt like everything I did, my brother had already done it before me and better. Now life is scary. I'm doing stuff my brother never did and I don't know where to go. I can't follow him. crying Well, I could, but I don't want to. Following Robbie isn't where I'm supposed to be walking. Maybe its a part of your great destiny. He's kinda like your stepping stone or foundation or something of that nature ya know?
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:32 pm
the secon 1.
and i like using puctuation.lol.
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