The 'Insert' key really DOES say 'Incest...'
Hi, hi, hiiii! ^-^ This would be the first Naruto fic I've written and actually liked. I need some feedback on it though sooo... I'd highly appreciate it. heart
Title: Eh.. Sorry. Dun have one yet. >->;
Author: Yesssss, I diiiid. o-o
Couple: Well... Naruto and Sasuke, I would think...
Rating: PG-13? >-> I mean... aside from cursing... there's not much to be afraid of. o-O;;
Plot: Yea, it's got one(Alice in Wonderland with a twist) but it's not done yet, sooo... Yea.
Deep in the forest, just outside of Konoha, in a tree with many odd kinks and twists, sat Sasuke, emo boy-genius. With a sigh, he continued his daily sulk, his back against the bark and his eyes shut tranquilly. He wasn't tired or anything. But the thought of getting to rest after doing four consecutive rank-C missions sounded good-- even if it was in a tree.
Drifting between unconsciousness and complete awareness, Sasuke sat in utter silence. That is... until he saw him.
Well, really, he had heard him more than anything else.
"I'm late—I'm late!!"
That was odd. That loud mouth sad excuse for a ninja never gave a shat if he was late. So, why the sudden hurry, Sasuke pondered.
"I'm late!!!" Opening one eye, the youngest Uchiha watched Naruto run by his tree and deeper into the forest.
He watched the retreating figure for a moment until the blonde stopped, looking around as if he were lost, and, in that time, Sasuke noticed something... strange and very off about the number one most surprising ninja.
"What is he wearing?!" He muttered to himself and to the trees and air around him.
A dazzling red-orange waist coat with accentuating black pinstripes(1), a gold chain clipped at one end of the pocket and the other end of the chain leading inside it, tight black, leather pants, chains and straps starting at his waist and leading all down the legs, topped off with slim, neatly laced boots. Strangely enough, none of that seemed truly strange to Sasuke. Only the orange, pointed ears poking out of his bright blonde hair.
Before he could call out to the boy of course, he took off again, causing Sasuke to shoot up and chase after him.
"Dobe, where the hell are you go—" ...He'd disappeared; he'd literally been swallowed up into the ground!
Upon closer inspection, though, Sasuke stooped down to examine the seemingly bottomless, well hidden hole in the ground. He found himself leaning toward it, closer and closer, only slightly curious as to where it lead. But, unexpectedly, there was a kick to his rear and, with a very undignified curse, he fell through gracelessly.
(1) - I was thinking of a Panic! At the disco song when I wrote that. >->;;
The word of the day(my LIFE) is: Delusional - When I said "I'd hit that" I meant with my car.
