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 Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:04 pm
When my life breaks in two
There isn't anything I can do
When my heart falls apart
There isn't anything I can do
My life is full of anguish
My memories full of hate
Everywhere I turn
I fear my fate
With death knocking on my door
What should a man do
One can't simply run away
With it right there too
I run down a path
To my window
As I look out
I see my final dismissal.
So now as I ready myself
For my upcoming death
My last words will be
For all to hear
Bring peace to this place
Or I will reappear
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:37 pm
Its an enersitng peice i think it needs some revision. I'm not exactly sure what is happeng to the subject in this peice...maybe after some revising it will be more clear. other then that its really cool!
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-Technically Broken- Crew
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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 12:56 pm
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