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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:01 am
so far this has been a dull guild sio im doin a roleplay story!
Here we go!!!!
"Why am I here" I have been an alchemist for years with my team Scot Redfield,Chris Law,and Crysal Moore.I was sitting an a new cafe for alchemists when my freind Scot came in. "hey VM!""hey Scot!" "Hows your alchemist thing goin?" "I didnt u guys were on a date!" Me and Scot turn around to see Crystal standing there."Thats becase we are not on a date.Yeah so wats up Crystal.Oh and VM we have a mission today....
Thats all for now .Tell me if u liked it and if you would want to be in the story. ^-^
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 7:05 am
ok tel me retype the begining it kinda sucked ill do that later tho ok razz sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:16 am
OK this time FOR REAL.....
The sun was high in the skywith cluods surrounding it.I was outside a cafe looking for my best freind Scot. We have been freinds since we were kids
Flashback:
Alissa: "Coma on Crystal throw the frizbe!" Crystal:"Alright this one is gonna be far!" (Crystal throws the frizbe into the street. While picking up the frizbe I notice a light.I couldn't belive it ! Shocked i stood there frozen.It was a Truck heading strait for me!) eek eek Crystal: Look out Alissa!!!Move! Move!!!! wahmbulance (Before you know it I'm rescued by a boy my age.He had brown hair and eyes his skin,was light and,his face was like an angel that was my guiardian.I looked up.) ?:You should be more carefull Crystal: Wow you saved Alissa's life thats so cool! Alissa:What is your name? redface Scot: My name is Scot and yours? razz Alissa: Mine is Alissa! razz Crystal: Call me Crystal! blaugh Scot: nice to meet you both. 3nodding Alissa: Did you just move in? I haven't seen you before. Scot: Yeah I live across the street. (Scot points to a house that had been for sale the day before.) Crystal: So you just moved in thats cool. cool Alissa: We should be freinds! blaugh Scot: Why not? 3nodding
END OF Flashback........................
Scot: Hey Alissa I'm sorry I'm late.Lets go I'm starving!" Alissa: You do look hungry! 3nodding (Crystal was waiting inside we ordered our meals and started talking)
Scot:We have a new mission today. Alissa: I know but wat is it? Crystal:I bet its somthing to do with the Elric brothers..... stare Scot:Mabe, Mabe not... neutral Alissa:We will just have to see when we get our jobs.... stare Crystal:Yeah.... sad
To be cotinued.......
That was alot better huh?
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 4:34 pm
Hello? Anyone........ sad
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:31 pm
I guess ill cotinue......oh and i didnt give the fist chapter a name so here it is Chapter one: The three friends. Notice i deleted chris for later.Lets continue shall we......
Last time.....Scot,Crystal,and Alissa meet at the cafe after a quik flashback to talk about a mission.....that was fast.....
Chapter two:Mission One Danger Zone.....
Scot:So what now? Alissa:I'm gonna go training you guys get the mission info before we get started. Scot:But aren't you gonna be tired after training?Besides i think it was an easy mission that we dont have to fight in. Alissa:I know but i want to master somthing before we go okay. Crystal surprised k Scot surprised k Alissa; we will meet here when we are done packing our stuff for our mission. Scot annd CrystaL:Got it! Alissa:good
AT THE FOREST....
Alissa:Alright this time for real! (A fire alchemy is used again and again but Alissa fails to inprove...) Alissa: (breathing heavily) Come...on....give me a BREAK! scream stressed (while Alissa is catching her breath she hears something.She quikly jumps up alert and rady to fight.) stare Scot: It's me.....(Alissa sees Scot come from the bushes) man do you look tired.... neutral Alissa:It's nothing....What are you doing here? question neutral Scot:looking for you its time to pack and I was worried redface Alissa:worried why?I know how to defend myself... neutral Scot:....well I dint mean it like that sweatdrop ....(scot leans against a tree) redface Alissa: redface well lets go I'm ready to pack as well. razz
MEANWHILE........ Crystal surprised h come on this shouldnt take so long!!!!...... scream scream (crystal not8ices a person thats nearby stare ....It's The Elric brothers! eek She doesnt know what to do so she just stares at the ground.) Edward:You look lost Crystal:No I'm just waitng for my friends... neutral Edward:near the alchemist cafe?Why? question Crystal:becase we wanted to....... stare Al biggrin o you have a table already? Crystal: It's kinda rude to go in before your freinds do... Edward:Oh well.... come on Al..... (Crystal didn't mean for them to go she felt so mean> Crystal:Wait!! Edward:hmmm.... Crystall:Why not order a table I'm sure my freinds will understand (Edward,Al ,and Crystal get a table and order their meals)
BACK TO ALISSA AND SCOT.....
Outside The Cafe.......A few mins later...... Alissa: where is she?! eek Scot:I dont know she wouldnt go fer though...<.< .....>.> Alissa:mabe shes inside......... Scot:yeah..... (Scot and Alissa go inside and see Crystal with the Elric brothers!) Scot: eek Alissa: eek Crystal:Hey guys!I'm over here!!! blaugh Edward:I'm guessing they are your friends Crystal:yup since we were kids! Scot surprised h no not again.... Alissa:-.-
FLASHBACK .......again
Alissa: "Come on on Crystal throw the frizbe!" Crystal:"Alright this one is gonna be far!" (Crystal throws the frizbe into the street. While picking up the frizbe I notice a light.I couldn't belive it ! Shocked i stood there frozen.It was a Truck heading strait for me!) Crystal: Look out Alissa!!!Move! Move!!!! (Before you know it I'm rescued by a boy my age.He had brown hair and eyes his skin,was light and,his face was like an angel that was my guiardian.I looked up.) ?:You should be more carefull Crystal: Wow you saved Alissa's life thats so cool! Alissa:What is your name? Scot: My name is Scot and yours? Alissa: Mine is Alissa! Crystal: Call me Crystal! Scot: nice to meet you both. Alissa: Did you just move in? I haven't seen you before. Scot: Yeah I live across the street. (Scot points to a house that had been for sale the day before.) Crystal: So you just moved in thats cool. Alissa: We should be freinds! Scot: Why not?
END......Again....lol razz
Scot:so....your the Elric brothers... Edward and AL:yep Alissa:so wats the mission Crystal surprised ur missoin.....Oh yeah! Our mission is to get an impotant message to a small town nearby ....But.... Alissa:but......... Scot:wats the town name? Crystal: Haven town Scot:I see... Alissa:What? Scot:That town is the most dangerous of them all especialy becase of robbers and gangs.... Alissa:That makes no differance We will go to that town and finnish our missoin mad Edward:are you guys aware that the military is using you? Crystal:they are not they are asking for our help! scream Edward:.....You guys expect.... danger besides that is the death vally Scot i know...(scot looks at Alissa worried but then look at the menu everyine is silent and continue the evening as such)
What do u guys think?
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Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:52 pm
where r u guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 0.0
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:49 pm
even though ppl havent been here for months!!!!!!!!!! ill continue the story even though i dont know what the towns names are... and yes I made the town name up....
chapter three:morning hike
Scot surprised k u guys ready? question Alissa and Crystal:yes! 3nodding 3nodding (Scot looks again at the road before him on the sides were brush , trees,plus the occasional animal.The three teammates get in the best formation line they could think of.Ahead was Scot he could have his pet owl 'witch he kept usaly at home' alongside him sniffing for scents of dangeous opponents four miles ahead ,so they could think on what to do.Then next was Alissa who could spot anything that was on the side and paralize them none knew how she did though.Last was of course Crystal she was phsycic and could find any living thing within ten mile wich makes folowing immpossible.)
Scot surprised k lets get moving! razz Alissa:so who are we delivering to again? stare Crystal: I dont know probably the town mayor or sheriff... confused Scot:*whistles* (Scots owl appers above the three) Scot:good boy! Just making sure ur here too dont wanna leave without you! razz Alissa:are we going or what? confused Scot:yeah just cheaking... rolleyes sweatdrop (twenty miles later.....that evening..)
Scot:*sweating* ok we can stop now.....*breathes heavily* gonk Alissa surprised k! *sits down and takes lunches out*here guys! razz Crystal:*gasping* thanks....Alissa Scot:why arent you tired??? neutral question question burning_eyes Alissa:*looks down and thinks* I dont know...... ninja Scot:huh???? confused Alissa: .....well i dont get tired too easy...... Scot:easy.....(scot decides its personal but still wonders) Alissa:*goes to tent* cry Why am I a half vampire beast...i hate secrets... crying *crys on pillow* crying crying Scot:*hears crying* sad *mumbles to self* did I hurt her that much? Alissa:mabe shes tired but she doesnt want to show it and worry us probably stressed too....... neutral rolleyes Scot: I guess.....Ill ask her tommorow night...... sad confused
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 4:15 pm
where is everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mad mad scream scream crying crying im lonely crying crying
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 5:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:41 am
i thoguht i put the next chapter -.-'
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 12:39 pm
(Looks like you need more peoples. XP I'll join in, if you want.)
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Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 6:01 am
(Your story sounds pretty interesting!)
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 3:49 pm
ok here i go again..... oh by the way this: eek means that veastella-is gatting hungry and this: heart means Alissa's heart os starting to beat rapidly "which means shes gonna lose it soon" Midnight snack....
Alissa wakes up in the middle of the night ready to eat...no ready to hunt...She carefully sneaks outside of camp and feeds on a few squrels. Alissa: this should keep my stomach from growling tommorow... sweatdrop Alissa steps into her tent and sits there waiting for sleep to engulf her. Suddenly she hears the tent to the right of her open. "thieves!" Alissa thought. Scot: time for a morning practice! razz Alissa: ........ *thinking* "scot is going to wear himself out..." eek "huh?" eek "didn't i just feed" eek *fangs start to apear...* eek heart Alissa: *covers mouth* gah! stressed Meanwhile........ Scot: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! scream *forces lightning through four trees* yes! mrgreen *scot's owl circles above cooing* Scot: question *hears heavy breathing behing him* exclaim *spins around only to find Alissa standing there not looking normal* question Scot: youre up earl- Alissa stops scot by holding a hand up talk2hand Alissa: heart heart eek eek eek *lifts head to reveal fangs now resting on her lips...* Scot: what the... Alissa are you- *Alissa then opens her mouth and takes a sep torward scot.* Scot: exclaim ...uhhh... (steps back) Alissa: heart heart heart eek *steps torward scot and traces the outline of his neck* Scot: exclaim exclaim Alissa.... OO question *Alissa stops her finger on a vein.Its was sticking out just calling out for her to rip open and drain every drop of blood* Alissa: .... twisted Scot: exclaim exclaim exclaim .. A-A - Alissa.. *Alissa brings her mouth closer to scot's neck only getting hungrier.* Scot: Alissa!! Wha- exclaim exclaim *Scot is stopped short by the sharp pain that he was feeling from Alissa's bite* Alissa: nn..nnn...........nn stare *Scot feels weaker all of the sudden and falls into a coma while alissa holds him up to feed.* Scot:uhhh...... *Alissa lets go of scot and steps back and falls to her knees only to find herself falling ,also, to the ground next to scot.
How was it? oh and thx fr the comments 4laugh
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:57 pm
Oh!! eek almost for forgot those who would like to join in post a profile for me sorta looking like this:
name: Age: Alchemy: race: human/ or vampire specailties: weapons: personality sad at least six words) Optional.... history or past: Outfit: (and anything else)...
for example:
Alissa Age: 16 alchemy: fire race: vampire Specialties: can sense a presence from mile away weapons: fangs... Personality:Headstrong,loyal,smart,shy,energetic,and very nice Outfit: Black and red skirt with a bow as a belt(also red) A long sleeve black shirt with a neacklace resting on it (ruby neacklace) Black boots and gloves. well .. sorta like my sig,.... lol except that is me And alissa has long bright blonde hair
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