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 Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 10:49 am
i just wrote this poem in my spare time. Its a little depressing tho ^^0 Enjoy ^_^
A part of me is lost to you
One that can never be returned
And if I am truly playing with fire
I guess I’ve already been burned
I am always bonded to you
I am your eternal slave
I did for you everything I could
I continuously gave and gave
But I guess none of that was enough
Although I always obeyed
Even though I only did what I did
Because I was afraid
Afraid that you would leave me
And I’d be left behind
With no love left for me at all
Never a trace to find
Of course my fear was what was wrong
That was my only flaw
I obeyed every one of your words
But I did not follow your law
Maybe if I’d given you true love
And not obeyed you out of fear
You’d still be in love with me
And you would still be here
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 9:10 am
Wow, very nice. This poem is powerful and Fleuent, nice job ^.^
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:35 am
That's very sad....Very understandable. great work. ^^
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