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 Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 6:15 pm
Hey peoples. So this is my poem, it doesnt have a title right now, but you may submit a suggested title if you wish. Constructive criticism and comments only please!
Shall I aquaint that I fancy him?
Shall I divulge the feelings that Ive bottled up within?
Shall he think of me, over and over again?
Shall this be the crush that has a recoil?
or will it once again be foiled....
Naivity, innocence, shy, me.
Why him?
Why me?
Why not someone in my league?
How could this happen?
How could he pass my guard, my sheild that lets nothing pass?
How can he figure me out, when no guy has?
Whos to say?
Who has the answers to my long asked questions?
Who will be my prophet, predict if theres a future?
When will this stop?
When did it begin?
I cant eat, I cant breathe.
This is engulfing me like a disease.
I just want it to be over, gone and done.
I hate getting unraveled, my heartstrings coming undone.
Will this once again be a crushed crush, or will it bloom into a romance?
will I take his hand and kiss him,
or will I stand alone and try hard not to think of him?
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:00 pm
I rather like the repeative beat to it, and I feel like its something almost everyone can relate to.
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