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at the moment I'm busy with a story...
but I'm very empty the last days....
maybe you can help me?????
I will listen to your advice.
you can write what you want even if everyone dies because they were almost hit by a frog ore something like that ^^

please help me



this is what I have till now:

myena

this story goes about a war.
the war started 1000 years ago.
After the “great war” there was a time there was peace.
But not for long......
a group of humans named the Gett have made clones with special abilities.
they are searching for pyses.
that are little spheres made with magic.
only people with magic our special abilities have got a pyses.
they are searching the pyses from the soceres medea.
she lived 200 years ago in the time of the “great war”.
when they create medea again the end of the world is nearby.......
myena is just a girl with a normal family.
she’s quite special because she can see the past of humans.
her mother can see the future.
then her mother suddenly say that myena have to go to another country.
she have to take her litle cousin Amilene (ami) with her.
and together with AMI she goes to her new home.
Myena try to live a normal life.
She takes a job as waitress.

myena is walking in the city and suddenly she see a boy attacking an old .
she try to help but she is stabbed down......
but the old woman is the messenger from the great spirit and myena becomes an half angel.

there is a legend that a young woman can stop the war but she have to sacrifice something.
it's a great sacrifice....
myena is the young woman from the legend but she doesn't know it yet.

myena is only an angel when she want's it.
when she's an angel she is much stronger than in her normal form.
she also have the ability to fly.
the old woman gave her two swords to fight with.
after a while myena decides to join the rebbels who want to stop the Gett.
But myena doesn’t say what she really is.......

( I used this name as my nickname because I couldn't imagine something else....I had this name for the character before I came to gaia ore whatever)

Okay...so this is an outline, yes?
Okay, it runs like an rpg. It has the potential to be really cliche or okay. It's interesting that Myena works as a waitress, but hten she becomes a half angel....um....that's where the cliche starts. It'd be more interesting if there wasn't a war raging, but instead an unsteady impasse. The major problem I'm having is because if there is a war raging and she's to start it is because it leans towards gung ho violence. Try instead to add political intrigue as well- which is hard with a war.