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PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:32 pm


October Contest - Writing


Since we've only had one brave submission, there is no need to vote to determine the winner. I give you... LeitaKree, from Limbo!

LeitaKree
Once upon a time, there was a little girl whose only aspiration in life was to have the child of the man she loved.

This little girl grew up, fell in love, and got married over the years. Her husband was a good, kind man, and she was madly in love with him. However, one night, he fell extremely ill and died. The girl was heartbroken, but she still had her dream; if she was pregnant with his child, she would be happy.

However, a few weeks later, the girl had her period, and she sank deep into despair.

She was so enveloped in grief that she began looking into sorcery as a way to achieve her dream; she pored over ancient books of Alchemy, unrolled dusty scrolls of Egyptian magic, and visited the supposed witch that lived outside of town. However, nothing seemed to work.

Time passed and the girl sunk deeper and deeper into her insanity, cursing the gods as each spell failed to bring back her lost love. She felt she was getting close, however... She heard his voice, one night, as she cast a spell given to her by the witch.

One dark winter night, the girl cast a powerful spell that the witch had given her, hoping that it would work. Unfortunately, her hopes were realized.

Her lost love appeared within the pentagram she had traced upon the floor in her own blood, pale as death and very, very upset. "My love, my love, why have you summoned me?" he moaned.

"I'm lonely." The girl said sadly, "and I was hoping to bring you back."

"My dear, you have sinned to bring me here." Her lover whispered, extending his arms. "You do not belong here anymore. To me, my love."

Heedless of the danger, the girl rose and entered the pentragram. Her lost love embraced her, and the two floated into the air, away from the dusty study, away from the world.

The next morning, the girl's family found her body, unnaturally thin and stiff. When the law came to assess the scene, they found that she died of a broken heart.


Myths are all about stories, and navigating through stories is a vital skill to any lover of myths. Therefore, for our first contest you must write a scary story using elements from a mythic pantheons. The contest is approached in two different ways, depending on whether you have chosen a pantheon or are unaffiliated (also called in Limbo).


Affiliated:

arrow Use elements from your pantheon.
arrow Determine one story to be submitted on behalf of your Pantheon. You may do this by writing a collaborative story or by writing individual stories and deciding among them.
arrow Once you have chosen your story, PM it to me (the Herald), with your pantheon in the subject line.


In Limbo:

arrow Use elements from any pantheon not covered by a forum. (Norse, Egyptian, Hindu, Native American, etc)
arrow PM it to me (the Herald) with "Limbo" in the subject line.

On October 25th28th, the Pantheon stories and the one or two best Limbo stories (determined by me) will be posted in the Guild for voting.

Prize: 2000 gold, and possibly a small item.
All members of the winning pantheon will share the prize.

Remember: Stories should be well written, creative, and give the reader a nice Halloween shiver.

Questions, comments, or suggestions? Post them here.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:17 pm


Does it have to be completely scary? What's the word limit?

Mcfeegle


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:17 pm


Yes, it should be scary. But if you want to incorporate comedy (for example), you can do that too.

No word limit, although stories are often more effective if they're shorter, so use your judgment. 2000 is probably a good rule of thumb.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:36 pm


What? Comedy? Me? Why ever would you think that was what I wanted add? ninja

2000 sounds good. I already have a vague idea of what I'm going to do, I just need to flesh it out a bit more.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:13 pm


Excellent. Take your time - you've got just over two weeks.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:58 pm


Uhmm.... What if we haven't chosen a pantheon just yet? Because I like a wide range of myths and legends, and I'm having quite a hard time choosing.

LeitaKree


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:40 pm


It says right in the rules that you can enter it as Limbo. I still haven't started mine yet. sweatdrop I'll try to get around to it tomorrow.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:35 pm



Isn't this a little biased towards the Night Creatures?

I can't imagine how you could write a REALLY scary story with the Pantheon of Greek Gods....

stare
...maybe I should give my imagination a tune-up.



Edit: 1,000th post!

Mitsukeru Furidomu


Mcfeegle

PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 3:26 pm


What are you talking about? Almost every greek myth I've ever read could be turned into a horror story if you flesh it out and use dark language. The same could be said for almost any myths.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:01 pm


True, true....

Now that I think on it, the story of Orpheus could definitely work.
He got ripped to pieces didn't he.

Mitsukeru Furidomu


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:46 pm


Mitsukeru Furidomu

Isn't this a little biased towards the Night Creatures?


I'm glad you asked, and Mcfeegle's right - there's plenty of freaky/gory material in the other pantheons for people to use. And if you take a minute to look for it, you've already got a leg up because you're not falling back on stock scares.

LeitaKree - No problem. You don't need a pantheon to enter. Just enter from Limbo - pick any pantheon that doesn't have a subforum and write a story using it. That includes Norse myth, Egyptian myth, Hindu myth, Persian myth, Native American myth, Japanese myth, Chinese myth, various sorts of mythical beasts such as dragons, and pretty much anything that isn't exclusively Greek, exclusively nocturnal, or fey.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 4:00 pm


I kept meaning to write an entry, but I suck at horror and I was stuck, so it never actually got done. sweatdrop Sorry about that.

Great story LeitaKree! It could use a bit more show and a bit less tell, but I really like the concept and the plot.

Mcfeegle


xTurquoiseDragonx

PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 4:34 pm


I feel like such a lazy a** for not writing something. I promise I'll participate in the next one. ...Watch it be something I'm horrible at now. xd

Congrats on the story, LeitaKree! It was short but awesome.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:04 pm


Mcfeegle
I kept meaning to write an entry, but I suck at horror and I was stuck, so it never actually got done. sweatdrop Sorry about that.

Great story LeitaKree! It could use a bit more show and a bit less tell, but I really like the concept and the plot.


xTurquoiseDragonx
I feel like such a lazy a** for not writing something. I promise I'll participate in the next one. ...Watch it be something I'm horrible at now. xd

Congrats on the story, LeitaKree! It was short but awesome.


Oh, thanks guys! I kinda forgot about it... But I'm glad you liked it! n__n

LeitaKree

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