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 Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:16 am
Hi .. I was just wondering if you guys could help me with this ^^
perhaps you have some critique that helps me to improve it ..
pic away ..
Thanks so Much heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:42 pm
Hmmm... I'm not sure how I can help with this one. The proportions are lovely and her expression is soo sad. crying Did you have anything more specific in mind for help?
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:04 am
No not really .. but I'm not happy with eyes .. I'll try and change that when I'll color it ^^
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:02 am
 crying Its truely beautiful! I can't find a flaw with it.... xp 
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Aranel Anira Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:08 am
I've spent quite a lot of time watching this since there was something bothering me about it but I couldn't put my finger on it XD
and finally realized what it was and it's just something minor that happened to catch my eye for detail and started poking in it XP
it's the shoulders... it feels like the one hiding behind the hair is too slaunted compared to the other one if you imagine how it would go if you could see all of it.
or that the one you can see isn't slaunted enough... that's a matter of opinion XP
but as said that's a really minor thing and probably nothing you should have to throw yourself over and "fix" ^^
and without focusing on details like I tend to do it is indeed a lovely picture 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 12:52 am
I agree with Taheen on that one. Next time draw the body first before you draw that hair so you don't get confused. Try using a reference picture as well because the body is not something that can easily drawn from your head. I have a slight issue with how high the armpit should be but I'm not too sure whether there really is a problem. Apart from that this is a very nice piece of work and I can't wait for you to colour. Good Job! cool
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 12:18 pm
 I did draw the body first xd
And I always draw everything from my head I hate helplines and stuff wink after I sketched the work like with this piece I'll examine it and I can't see what wrong with it I ask other people like you guys. Thanks for the help.
But yea there is something weird with the shoulder I'll try and fix that. heart
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:40 am
What I do is sketch everything with guidelines, ink it and later erase it. I used to be bad but I practice almost everyday in school when I'm bored (hehehe I can even listen to what the teacher is saying at the same time) and now I can do it real quick and precise. Don't talk to me about the body and other head angles though because I'm bad xd
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:45 am
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 5:54 am
I need you help once again biggrin
I'm working on this avi art for my friend perhaps you guys van help a bit .. I think the hands are to small
 
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 8:10 pm
Nice but your hands needs to be bigger. For example if I have a close up look of your finger it would look bigger. Apply that theory to your hands and wala. Like your clean lines
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 2:14 am
Solryu Nice but your hands needs to be bigger. For example if I have a close up look of your finger it would look bigger. Apply that theory to your hands and wala. Like your clean lines As I said with my comment on the art about the hands xd I thought so. I'll have to draw them bigger and you think I have clean lines o.0 this is just sketch blaugh but thanks biggrin
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Aranel Anira Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:20 pm
^_^ super kawaii!! but yeah, everyone is right about the whole hands thing. I hate hands!!! They are so hard to work on.
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:01 pm
Aranel Anira ^_^ super kawaii!! but yeah, everyone is right about the whole hands thing. I hate hands!!! They are so hard to work on. You know what I hate them too. xp Takes me ages to draw ><
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