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 Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:07 pm
I love to pretend a lot of things. And that I'm a poet is one of them. haha. But I guess I can't be judged on how well they are if they're from my heart. Right? Anyways, I guess this'll be a thread of my poetry... If it's not unwelcomed. *grin*
The Choice is Now Before You|Stained Beauty|The Thief of Hearts|Getaway Train
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:10 pm
The Choice is Now Before You|Stained Beauty|The Thief of Hearts|Getaway Train
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Say so long to the ones you love
When you choose the broader path
Your only hope, the narrow road
Hardly ever traveled
You'll not survive for very long
Ignoring the only One
Care to die? Or care to live?
The choice is now before you
Want the Truth? Or love the lies?
'Cause only one can reign
Chaos or a better world?
The choice is now before you
So choose the Lord and live forever
Or Satan's claim will stand
I bid farewell with a hopeful heart
To one day see you again
I turn towards home and conintue on
The road all long and windy
So follow me or fall behind
The choice... is now behind you
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:16 pm
The Choice is Now Before You|Stained Beauty|The Thief of Hearts|Getaway Train
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I'm a stained beauty,
can you not see?
If God made me perfect,
how stained could I be?
I sin just like you
and the rest of the world.
Therefore I am stained,
but a beautiful girl.
The Lord God is perfect.
He makes no mistakes.
The fact that I sin,
just makes His heart break.
He's made me the way
He's always meant to.
A beauty that's stained,
and not out of the blue.
Everything made by
hands of our God
Are perfect creations
although we're all flawed.
The stains that we have
are Satan's black work
Not just the Lord
giving us quirks.
To God we are perfect,
though sinful by nature
'Cause we are His children,
the lil'uns He's nurtured.
Because He is pure
and perfect Himself,
That's how I'm made, but
with sin as my wealth.
There's nothing that comes from
the Lord's beautiful hands,
That wasn't created
the way that He planned.
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:21 pm
The Choice is Now Before You|Stained Beauty|The Thief of Hearts|Getaway Train
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Who shall He pick?
He the Thief of Hearts
Who shall His next victim be?
A victim to the Thief of Hearts
The lucky people, they the victims
They know what awaits them
The Thief of Hearts wants them all
Every heart of every one
But the lucky are the minority
The minority is my brethren
We siblings share a common bond
All hearts lost to the Thief of Hearts
Lost to Love, Lost to Hope
Lost to Grace, Lost to Life
But we care not a bit
Our shed tears are for the ones
The ones who defend themselves
Defending against the Thief of Hearts
They know not that they fight
Fight for their eternal deaths
So my kindred and I pray
We pray for His success
So stop fighting the Thief of Hearts
No Love, no Joy, no Life can compare
Compare to the greatness of one
One life lived in the name
In the name of the Thief of Hearts
One lived in the name
In the name of my Father
My Savior, my Lord, my heart's Thief
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:46 pm
The Choice is Now Before You|Stained Beauty|The Thief of Hearts|Getaway Train
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'Get away!' I cry aloud.
A bad mistake, slipped from my mouth.
It's over and I've let it out.
'It's forever gone?' 'Without a doubt.'
I feel all cold.
So black, so old.
Lost my chance, or so I'm told.
To call it back, would I be so bold?
Hear the whistle, watch it chug.
Wheels a-turning. I need a hug...
See me collapse in the grave I've dug.
How wrong of me to simply shrug.
The last thin wisp the winds just shove
And it shapes into a small, grey dove.
In fear and heartache, a throw my gloves,
Watching the Getaway Train of Love.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:20 pm
Um hope it is okay to post in here...don't want to mess up the orginization of it haha. Well anyways I have to say, out of your work, I think that stained beauty is probably the most touching out of all of them, and it is so imparted with amazingness of symmetry in its work... well I don't want to go on as if I know what I am truly talking about, I mean haha I sort of do but all I want to say is that I love how the stained beauty played throughout it all and how it really reflects what is going on throughout a person's life. We are all stained, but we are all oh so beautiful in God's eyes anyways. Good job, and the other poems are great too.
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:29 am
Everything here is really well written, well expressed, but I thought I'd like to point out--and I've really no idea what denomination you are--but God is a loving God. I always thought, and this is just me mind, that there wouldn't be just one choice that would haunt one forever, and that if someone repented even on their deathbed, God would welcome them...
^.^
That's just me though. I really liked 'Stained Beauty', btw. It had a certain ernestness that I liked, and it sums up everything really nicely.
-Mortalstar
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:00 am
Wow!! Thank you guys! That means a lot to me! Stained Beauty is my favorite. And yeah. Mortal, you're right. God is Love... Choice Before You one is rather cynical and final... But the end "the choice is now behind you" is where that person dies without every having accepted Christ... So yeah... Thanks for you guys' input though!! Thank you so very much!
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