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Trespassers W

PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:19 pm


Just use the last line of the previous poster's haiku as your first line.
Remember the form of haiku:

First five syllables
Second seven syllables
Third five syllables

If you want to, you can get into the formal niceties of traditional haiku by including a season, a theme, a reference to nature and a contrast in the last line but don't sweat it. You're already working under the constraint of whatever last line was left for you by the previous poet. You may of course change punctuation to fit your new poem.

I'll start with this:

A spiffing harvest:
Amid corn and pumpkins find
an Intelli-Guild!
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:22 pm


An Intelli-Guild
Should know haiku's can be, too
Seven, nine, seven

3nodding

rpgamer987


Trespassers W

PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:44 pm


Seven, nine, seven?
We would need a new thread for
that variation.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 4:30 am


That Variation
On nasty Beethoven Theme
Tires ear quite quickly.

Le Aristocrat


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 8:15 am


Tires ears quite quickly
One speaking as Yoda does
Vastly confusing
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 8:22 am


Vastly Confusing
Are the cities in England
Including London.

Le Aristocrat


Shadow Coon

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 8:36 am


Including London
There are many places that
I would like to see.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 8:46 am


I would like to see
Anne Widdecombe do handstands
For conservatives.

Le Aristocrat


Murderous Lemur

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:10 am


For conservatives,
may have proper leadership,
what they stand for sucks.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:30 am


What they stand for sucks
money away from people,
into weaponry.

Trespassers W


Murderous Lemur

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 12:42 pm


Into weaponry,
they load words that barb against,
everyone they hate
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:16 pm


Everyone they hate
gets a moustache drawn on their
nice yearbook picture.

Trespassers W


rpgamer987

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:19 pm


Nice yearbook picture
I never got one of me
Home schooled and all that
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:28 pm


Home schooled and all that,
No difference, RP still,
got an extra bone.

Murderous Lemur


Trespassers W

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 1:38 pm


Got an extra bone?
Thanks, pal! Now I've one to chew
while I bury one.
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