Pawns
I just finished this earlier today, it's a oneshot and I'd really like some feedback on it. It's written third person, retrospective, zero-dialogue, and hook-line style, so it's extremely experimental. Oh yeah, and very angsty! I'd prefer if you reviewed there [it allows you to even if you dont have an account], but comments here will be accepted as well. heart
~Kakashi Fans Unite!~ (A Naruto Fanguild)
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