Hey all. I've recently had an idea in my story about writing a horror story, which is a bit of a change as I normaly right fantasy or sci-fi story. This is what I was thinking of writing;

this Woman lives in London, and she frequently has to take the tube to get to work. Theres only 1 problem, she's clostrophobic. So it's a nightmare each day to get there and back again. One day, half way through her journy, her ultimate nightmare comes true. The train breaks down suddenly and almost totaly derails.

There is still some power, but the whole line has had to be shut down. What's worse, there no chance of rescue in such a confined space. The driver tells everyone to go out, and make a chain of hands to guide everyone through the pitch black tunnels to the next station, some half a mile away.

This is already a Nightmare scenario for our protaganist. It doesn't help that there are rumours flying about. Rumours that somthing ELLSE is down there. Suddenly, screams in the darkness and flashes of light start up and people start vanashing.

Nobody knows who, or what is down there. But to avoid a grisly fate, our protaganist will have to overcome her fear and somehow pass these monsters. One things for sure, it won't be easy. Down their, in the pitch black tubes.

Before I start wrighting this, I'd like to hear what other horror fanatics think of this. It's goana be a short story (hopefully) rather than a full book, and I'll gladly post it here if I finish it.

Any constructive opinions would be great. Thanks in advance!