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The Sound of Chains?
  Interesting.
  You need to see a shrink.
  It's different. Err, unusual?
  *is here only for the gold*
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Dark_Slytherin
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:09 am


Feel lucky ladies and gents. You'll be the first to read this, being it hasn't been added to my DA gallery yet. However, the image won't be added until later (no scanner here at work).





*leaves a space for the image (will be added later)*



-"The Sound of Chains"-

...

The chains shook once more.

...

He bit back all groans of pain, reflexes for what was to come and grunts he wished to release.

But he refused to satisfy that beast of such pleasure.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

He'd dish it out as long as he could.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

He. He wanted it to stop. But pleas here would fall on deaf ears.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

Nor would his pride allow it. He wouldn't beg. He wouldn't cry. He'll be the one to win.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

He was no longer sure how much more he could take.

Doubt was beginning to settle in.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

Again.

...

And again.

...

Once more, the chains shook.

...

He hissed out this time. Bone was hit as well was skin.

He could hear the other smirk with glee. He wouldn't allow sound escape from him ever again.

He wouldn't let him win. Never.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

How long has it been? Time no longer seemed the same.

Has it been a month?

A week?

A day?

It might have been just several minutes for all he knew.

The pain was getting to him.

...

The chains shook once more.

...

An endless cycle. That this was.

While the other didn't get his pleasure, the chains would shake.

He wouldn't give up. He'd never give in. He'll beat this.

Or at least he hopes to.

...

The chains shook once more.

...



PS: It may suffer an edit in the future, but I doubt it, and if there should be, it'd be minor really (in terms of the text).
PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:12 pm


Ooh...this is very interesting. I want to see the picture! Supply it! Soon!

In any case, it held my attention.

There's just one thing, though. When it said "And endless cycle. That this was." did you really mean 'And' or did you mean 'An'?

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:49 am


Meant "an". *edits*

Thanks for pointing that out to me. The image is coming on soon.

Was bound oto have errors. I put the RAW first version up. xd
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