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 Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 6:39 pm
Hey all <3 I'm quickly becoming a hitched member, married to the guild and all xD Anywho, at the spontaneous idea of his lordship mortal-kun, I've placed this thread up here, for those who would like to review and criticize my stories and whatnot. Hooray for you right? Sure.. xD
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 6:44 pm
Updates and stuffs ^.~ Hi guys.. T^T I'm sorry to report, that I will be not online very often at all. My laptops powercorddied earlier today.. and that was my source of net.. So.. until I can replace it.. I'm afraid posting something in here, is a no no.. I simply cannot get online long enough to do so.. ((that and there's no way to type one up in the mean time.) I'll let you know when things have changed.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 9:26 pm
Well lol I already told you what I thought about the first part on the im's. I'll hit up the second part tomorrow. For now i just want to add in addition. I think the story so far is pretty interesting. I mean 40,000 years is quite a long time to be apart, so I take it time is very little essence to them? But I know it still means something, so to see a strong bond like that, it is awesome. But wow lol talk about the crazyness of the events. I can't wait to see what happens next, and if Nova actually gets out of that mess in one piece, because the way it looks like a lot of stuff is hanging on the balance and he isn't even able to stand on his own two feet haah. But yeah hopefully the butterfly will open his wings ^_^
Good analogy, and hope to see more stuff in the future!
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 11:59 pm
Thank you mi'lord. *bows* I've just posted the third chapter. I hope you all like ^^
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 8:12 pm
Skye sounds really awesome so far. Lol the bond that all the friends share together is seen clearly through this, very good work on that. Sad to see everyone having to sacrifice themselves in some shape or form, but they have such a strong bond to Nova that it seems not to even matter. Lol I am still on chapter 2 so I don't know what happens next, but so far I'd like to say that it is seeming to go pretty well. The only thing I have a little problem with was the second to last paragraph, with all the dialog flowing about it was a few rereads before recognizing who said what. Perhaps knock the speech per a person into its own paragraph? Anywho other than that, the story itself is rather entertaining, and I really can't wait to find out what happens next! However I am limiting myself 1 chapter a day so that I don't run out of things to read lol.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:52 pm
It warms my heart that you're spending some of your important time to read this story I'm composing.. thank you mi'lord, once again for your devotion to the guild, and to your members.
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 10:50 pm
No problem at all ^_^, I love to read, and I always am here to support my crew and members ^_^. I read chapter 3 yesterday, so I'll post up my little review that I told you on im.
****This contains spoilers****
I can't believe skye left like that, that was so crazy. However I guess he did have someone else to attend to. I guess when it comes down to it, you have to protect the one you care most for. Anywho, I guess it really makes Zero's sacrifice even more important now, and the key aspect to this whole thing. Kai jumping in and just everything is seemingly working out for Nova, I am just hoping Nova will be able to see Kai again, someway somehow haha, although I don't expect it too soon.
****End Spoilers*****
Anywho, keep up the writing, and I'll keep up the reading ^_^
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 9:34 pm
lol I knew if I caught up with everything and read a chapter ahead that I'd be stuck without something to read soon enough lol. Well it just means you have to owe me two chapters for tomorrow haha.
As for now though, I read chapter 4...was it yesterday? Or the day before? Either way, I thought it was cool, loved the action, and wish you finished off the last part so I know what happens haha, quite a spectacle to see indeed.
Anywho I gave you more of a feedback through im's, so I'll just cut it short for now, the next I'll try to review on here first before telling you how I thought the chapter was.
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:06 pm
NO!!!! *jumps in front of bullet trying to save nova, but fails miserably*...*sigh*... It looks like I couldn't take the bullet on this one guys, it seems like nova might be mia for a bit, however I will still leave random comments on here talking about one thing...
Get your story up! Lol, I don't care if you have to permo swipe your friends laptop, just start posting! Lol okay I am just messing around, but do hope to see you around again, okay?
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 9:23 pm
It has been a few weeks man, don't tell me you're holding out on me! Lol...okay I know you're going to get your internet connection up soon enough, well have access to one soon enough, so I better start seeing updates as well!
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