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deceitful_hearts

PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 10:18 am


Full name of Character: Isaac Damian Parks
Physical Appearance:User Image
Age: 16
How old they appear: about 14
Eye Color: gray-brown
Hair color length and style: It was long when he lived with fred, but his mother made him cut most of it off
Type of body (build): Small
Skin tone and type (i.e., harry, slimy, scaly, oily, fair, burns easily): Dry, pale, alot of scars
Is s/he healthy? no
If not, why not? Or why are they healthy? He smoked since he was 5, has done various drugs, and was a heavy drinker since age 7, not to mention going through years of physical abuse
Do they look healthy? Why/why not? no, he looks pale, gray, and just plain horrable
Least favorite music, why? Hiphop/rap because Firefly always tolled him that it was crap
Literature: Steaphen King
Expletives (curse): he doesn't sware
How do they spend a rainy day? watching tv
Are they a daredevil or cautious? Cautious
Do they act the same alone as when with someone? no, when he's alone, he's very timid and desterbed, when he's around firefly, he's cool and happy, and out in public he's very quiet and polite
Habits: Smokes, cuts
Drinks: yes
How much: alot
Greatest Strength: he's smart
Greatest Weakness: he's very desterbed and confused
Soft spot: little kids (mainly moonbeam, firefly's 2 year old son)
Is their soft spot obvious, why/why not: yes, he'd basicly do anything to protect moonbeam
Biggest Vulnerability: He knows what he's done wrong
Type of childhood: He thinks it was good, but he was kidnapped by Fred and firefly when he was only four, tolled that his "blood mommy" didn't want him anymore, and so went to school under a fals name, helping in the production of snuff films (fred produced killfilms involving the children he kidnapped, he was a serial killer), untill he was 16 and ran away after fred did something realy bad "We only get small sketchy details, but we find out that fred threw moonbeam down a flight of stairs and killed him).
First Memory: Putting on his makup to help fred kill another kid
Most important child hood event that still effects him/her: Helping in the production of the killfilms
Why? because nobody knows what he did (the films themselves were destroyed)
Education: public school, he went through untill 10t grade purposly getting C grades so as not to atract attention.
Religion: Catholic
Mother: His birthmother is very nice, and coos over him after he comes back, but hardly lets him out of the house. Firefly was more like his "friend", teaching him to drink and smoke and kill. But he liked firefly better, because he'd known her for twelve years.
Father: His birth father avoids him, because he feels like he failed to teach isaac the dangers of talking to strangers. Fred beat on him a lot, but taught him "respect".
Siblings, How many, relationship with each: One baby brother (moonbeam), 2 biological sibblings (ages 12 and 10). The 12 year old hates him for taking away the atention, but idolizes him for beating up a school bully. the ten year old is just afraid of him.
How they feel about themselves: He thinks he's evil and deserves to be dead
Past failure they would be embarrassed to admit: failed to save the kids that fred killed
Talents: good fighter
Darkest secret: He assisted in the murders
Does anyone know? no
How are they perceived by strangers: messed up, sort of slow
Friends: none
Most prized possession, why: the cap to the last beer bottle that he drank with firefly
Most important person in their life before story starts, why: firefly
How do they spend the week just before the story starts: helping to pick a boy for fred's next murder
PostPosted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 10:48 pm


Watch your spelling. This is because a lot of us are Grammar Nazis and aren't afraid to hurt your feelings. This is the nice version. smile

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deceitful_hearts

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 12:25 pm


Charlie_The_Bad
Watch your spelling. This is because a lot of us are Grammar Nazis and aren't afraid to hurt your feelings. This is the nice version. smile
sory, i'm trying my best. I never could spell.
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