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My poems for her... (are they good? Be honest)

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BlurpleBliss-PermaBanned

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:01 pm


I wrote two of these for someone special... They are rather sad, I guess it's because I'm sad at the time. The third one is just a collection of my deepest thoughts.




Embracing Sin

I dreamt of you again
Your fingers laced with mine
Our bodies entangled
The darkness around us
Hiding secrets we don't care to know
Body to body
Flesh to flesh
Eye to eye
They're calling out to us now
LOuder and more violent
We don't hear them, only eachother
Our own shakey voices
Muttering eachother's names
"I love you"
"...I love you too"
A smile
A laugh
A tear
My lips kiss south
Shadows fall silent with jelousy
They hold us in contempt
We have everything
They love, nevermore
Romance drifting like dust from the ceiling
You sigh
You moan
You shudder
I embrace you
Press your warmth close to me
Kiss you without remorce
Leaving remnants of sweet nothing on your tounge
I speak words of truth, you listen
Stilling
Breathing
Drifting
Sleep nears us
Bodies glistening with exaustion
We kiss once more
The shadows close in
Seeking their long awaited revenge



Peices

I'm falling to peices
Without you, stitches aren't enough
My heart falls apart regardless
Only you can fix it all
But I just can't reach you
Our arms outstretched
My hand barely grazing your fingertips
A bit further
I could pull you against me
Hold you and never let you go
I have lost a whole year
I will not lose a lifetime
I will embrace you again
If only I could reach you now
I would make sure no one would ever take you away again
My heart is shattered
But do not fear
I will put them in a jar and save them for you
Only if you will save yourself for me



Drowning

I dreamt of shallow water
Shallow where I thought it was deep
I fell so hard with nothing to fall into
Now I'm left, churning in the mud
All that missing depth is within me now
Making a void and filling it with brackish water
Why do I hold so tight to what I should be running from
My dark side screams within its dismal cage
Run to where she sleeps
Hold her
Kiss her
Make her yours again
Love so pure, wasting away
It all feels like a dream right now
A reverie where he held me under
The irony of a death at the hands of true love
Yet I sit in his arms
A warm embrace and soft kisses
Only a temporary visage made by the awful souls inside of him
They hate me so, yet our hearts beat the same
His bravery awes me
I will love him until the end, pray it never comes
Try to forget her... Just for now
I sink into his arms
Just to drown a bit longer
PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 9:09 am


very good i really liked the first one, it's hereby my fav poem!

Rayvens Girl

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BlurpleBliss-PermaBanned

PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 12:52 pm


Thankyou! whee heart
PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:25 pm


My heart stops beating only for you, baby...

Ah... I love reading other people's poetry. whee Very nice. You certainly have a way of expressing yourself in your own unique way. 3nodding
For your loving...

Dystopia Lycanthropia


Saapento No Naga

PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 12:29 pm


Nice poems! I found the had a sort of an "Evanescence" flavour to them, especially the songs "Breath No More" and "Going Under". Have you ever tried writing song lyrics?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 8:58 pm


The last poem is my favorite. Especially the last line. <3
Do you have a Deviantart account? If so, I'd love to see it.

All_Bi_Myself


BlurpleBliss-PermaBanned

PostPosted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 4:16 pm


redface redface redface

Thankyouu...

I have a deviant art. I need to update it though.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:44 pm


Your poems are quite exquisite. There is so much emotion and feeling behind them....wow.

Do you have an Allpoetry account? If so, please link me!

Kiiska

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