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 Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 5:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 5:51 pm
Hehehe... sweatdrop I used to watch Beyblade. Hmm... I was thinking of calling you story "Detention" or "Teacher's Pet," but I don't think you'll agree with me. I'm bad with titles. ninja
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 12:35 pm
I like detention. I could base the story on it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:36 am
"The Knowing"
I have lived long and seen all but I know less than a man who has searched his soul for the truth of life, who has drank from the fountain of power that is him. Only one can rule and that is you. All will seem dark if you live in fear if you hold back in case it?s to hard if you want safety not adventure. All live a lie no one is safe, no one can turn the balance of nature. The world is our mother, the sky our father, our brother is earth, and our sister is flame, and we. We are water.
The Knowing has been forgotten through the ages. But a few of the masters still remain. For even though I am young I am the last master in this world. This world you may ask, well how should I explain this there are four main worlds. But there are hundreds of worlds so small that you may think insignificant, yet each very important in the big plan. I think that if you are going to understand this story you must get to know the history of The Knowing. Remember that if you think that this is getting boring for by all means shut this book, but then when you lie in you bed and wonder that what would happen if I read that book would it have changed my life? Or would it just be like another school textbook with almost no meaning outside in the real world.
Just something i had laying around sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 10:37 am
Lilywaterdragon I like detention. I could base the story on it. I have never watched Beyblade (there was always something else on) but it seems a little early to deterimine a title for this...it's a paragraph...but if I had to title it, Detention would be the first thing that came to mind, or Notes, but it would be better to expand on this and see where it goes. I hate being boxed in by a pre-deterimined title.
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 2:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:30 pm
I don't really have a whole story yet, but the idea's in my head. This will probably sound confusing. I sort of got the idea from a movie I saw a couple of months ago, and this idea is really unorganised, I don't really have any dialogue but when I'm writing the story I'll add some in.
Joyful Rebellion
This group of immortal people capture a bunch of other people and force them to explore the seas to see if there's anything else out there other than the land they live in (how I'm going to work this out, I don't know, it will probably be in a different world). Eventually there is an almost entirely different species that are immune to water, fast swimmers, stuff like that. Eventually a group of rebels form and try to escape the place.
This idea is really loose, I'd like to start it but I'm busy. I'm hoping to start it soon and will post it bit by bit here as soon as I can.
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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 1:17 pm
Hey i feel left out crying crying ( though the title is good)
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 8:42 am
crying crying crying Hello i said i am sad help me be happy crying crying crying
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:39 pm
Poison-Ivy99 "The Knowing" I have lived long and seen all but I know less than a man who has searched his soul for the truth of life, who has drank from the fountain of power that is him. Only one can rule and that is you. All will seem dark if you live in fear if you hold back in case it?s to hard if you want safety not adventure. All live a lie no one is safe, no one can turn the balance of nature. The world is our mother, the sky our father, our brother is earth, and our sister is flame, and we. We are water. The Knowing has been forgotten through the ages. But a few of the masters still remain. For even though I am young I am the last master in this world. This world you may ask, well how should I explain this there are four main worlds. But there are hundreds of worlds so small that you may think insignificant, yet each very important in the big plan. I think that if you are going to understand this story you must get to know the history of The Knowing. Remember that if you think that this is getting boring for by all means shut this book, but then when you lie in you bed and wonder that what would happen if I read that book would it have changed my life? Or would it just be like another school textbook with almost no meaning outside in the real world. Just something i had laying around sweatdrop It's very serious, not my style, but still interesting in it's own way. I'd just say, try reading it aloud and see how it sounds. It helps
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