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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 4:39 pm


I'm sorry to say, but my plans for a contest have been removed. But this forum may still be used for poetic purposes. Feel free to post poetry and get some constructive criticism via Meareign.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:48 pm


...I am so not paying 500g to see what people think of some lame poetry I throw up onto the keyboard. gonk
Then again, I'm also pretty poor.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:53 pm


That's fine. It's not your thing.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:55 pm


where would i put my poem if i were to enter

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:18 pm


Hmmm. Perhaps I'll enter.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:35 pm


With this I Shino Deceptive Killer states that Mana_ecl Zetsuya has not done anything illegal and I submitted by freewill. Therefore, should I fail to attain any prize, I cannot report him.
I HAVE TWO POEMS!!!
Green
Green Is A Snake
Grinning From Ear To Ear
And With Malevolence
In It's Stare It Lets
Out a Hiss For
All To Hear.

Howcome

If a heart is the most sensitive thing
how come I felt nothing when mine was broken.
If pain is something to be expirienced naturally
how come I have to cut to feel it.
If loving is the greatest healer
how come I can't heal.

Shino Deceptive Killer


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:43 pm


With this I state I Desdemona13 state that Mana_ecl Zetsuya has not done anything illegal and I submitted by freewill. Therefore, should I fail to attain any prize, I cannot report him.

I also have two poems.

Briste
I want a shot to go through my heart.
Show me a reason for the end to start.

A line of red cut across my wrist.
The furious shaking of an angry fist.

Give me a needle to put in my arm.
And a damn good excuse to not do harm.

For the pain to end and breath to stop.
Of a shattered mind long forgot.

Break my back and forget my name.
There's nothing worse then a betrayers shame.

Tell me one more lie like you always do.
And the bodies that fall will number two.

No more hurts and no more sighs.
You know it's sad when the heaven's cry.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tear
Drip. Drip. Drip.
Water falls, salt water.
Tears trickling down.
Drip drip. Drip.
Red splashes on white sheets.
Red line across a wrist.
Bu-bump. Bu-bump bu-bump.
The heart beats slowly.
Then slower still.
Bu-bump. Bu-bump. Bu-bump.
Drums beat a steady rhythm.
They fade away into nothing.
Thump. Thump thump.
Someone knocks on a door.
No one gets up to answer.
Thump. Thump. Thump.
Dirt is shoveled down onto a coffin.
A life is forgotten and lost.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 4:23 am


You would post them in here, woodelf.

Lost Zetsuya
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:32 pm


I have some poems, but I will post them for free though. Enjoy.

Quote:
Lonely Eagle
An eagle soars through the day,
Looking for innocent, tiny prey

His wings carve through the air like a thousand knifes
Before this moment, he has taken many lives

He will take yet another one,
This on will be easy, and will get done

He plunges toward the sea of green
Hearing that alone rabbit scream

As his striving hunger calls out
He gives a protracted, dreadful shout.

His spreads his talons out so wide
And gets the hare before it even had a chance to hide

With that hare gripped so tight,
He beats his wings with all his might

The eagle calls out in the air
While gliding to his magnificent lair.

He drops his prize on the ground,
Eager to show his family what he had found

A shot rang out and without a glance,
That lonely eagle lost his chance

He falls slowly from the sky,
Wondering why at that moment, why, oh why?

With his heart beat slowing down
He then finally hit the cold, hard ground

With so many lives he cost
His was done, he had lost.


Quote:
Soul
I dream of you every single night
Whenever I see you, my heart gives flight

Across the night sky my soul dances
Wondering all the possibilities, the chances

Your breath on my ear sends shivers down my spine
I am just glad, that you are mine all mine

Whenever my eyes land upon you
I see into a soul that is ever so true

You have everything that I lack
That is why you always have my back

Your eyes twinkle like the stars that show up in the sky
The very ones that hold my soul that fly’s

How lucky I am to have you to hold
All of our little secrets, truth be told

Was it destiny, chance, or fate that we are together?
Remember, we will last, for a life time, forever.


Quote:
Waste
What a big waste I was to you
While ever-lasting the sky was truly blue

Love was the truth that I kept
Even in the times that I wept

Stubborn but sorry was I in times of it
Only too proud was I to admit

We are so much the same that it’s a shame
This whole thing has turned into nothing but a game

Too alike we exist, differences that are far
Clashing all the time, we are

Battles are fought, no one ever winning
Far and few were there in the beginning

Feelings hurt, things said that weren’t true
Hurt words exchanged, but hardly few

In the end the battle done
Unfortunately neither of us ever won

A new beginning was again born
What was once a relationship, is now torn

Friends that was it, we choose that pathway
Hopefully we won’t ever drift away
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:03 pm


I have one for free...

Quote:
Roses are red
Violets are Blue
I hate poetry
And it hates me too

VVLB

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 6:54 pm


Oh man... I'm such an awful poetry critic...
If I were a judge, I'd be thrashing most of you with terribly harsh, critical comments.
cool
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 7:11 pm


For every critisism, there's a compliment that outweighs it. He he he.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 7:55 pm


Well, take a look at the first post. XD
The contest is out. I don't have much gold.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 8:07 pm


Does this mean that we get a refund?

Siobahn Telrunya

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 8:41 pm


I never accepted the trades. I just canceled them.
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