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ErikaKathryn

PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:22 pm


Well, Here's the prologue ^_^ Hope you all enjoy it




The sky showed a dark, deep black, having only few stars to shine through. The moon, almost to a new rotation, was only a slither in view. All seemed well in the neighborhood, all the children were sleeping, as were their parents.

Except one family.

This house—a suburban style home like the others—was a nice pure white on the outside, with small square windows on the bottom floor, but big inviting ones on the next. The roof was a stone blue color and texture. Unlike the white siding, the door was a vibrant red color—quite the contrary to the blue ones that ran up and down the street.

You would have only known that there were people awake if you listened closely, for they were trying to keep their voices down.

"Did you see what your daughter did earlier?" It was obviously a man's voice who gave that gruff, yet silent, question to the woman before him.

The woman wearing blue plaid pajama pants and an oversized grey T sighed. Her husband had been yelling about their second born for the last hour. She ran a French-manicured hand through her mid-back length chestnut brown hair, and gazed her unnatural-looking Topaz eyes at her husband, "Simon, hush, or you'll wake the girls. Yes, she's somewhat different. I've noticed."

Simon still continued to talk in the same tone of voice despite his wife's protest, "Well—what are you going to do about it? The powers are from your side of the family!" He practically screamed his reply before taking a seat on the dark tan leather couch. His hazel eyes were cast down, letting his slightly shaggy dirty blonde hair fall into his face as it looked sternly at the carpet. His hands sat in between his legs, elbows on the black silk pajama pants, in a holding position. Despite his intense thinking, Simon shivered a bit from the breeze the nearby window gave—for he wasn't wearing a shirt to bed that evening.

Simon's wife sat next to him, and grabbed a hold of his own shoulder, leaning against him, "Simon, if you made it through my mother's powers, you can handle our daughter. I'll talk to her in the morning so that she may learn to control the power."

"I hope you're right, Delilah," Simon spoke as he turned his head to hers, "C'mon, let's go to bed for the night." He kissed her lightly on the lips before standing up, and pulling her into a hug.

Delilah giggled like she did when she was younger, holding her husband's hand as they began to the trek to their bedroom—on the first floor, unlike their daughters' rooms.

Simon had the door already opened when they heard a scream. Delilah gasped quickly as she looked to Simon, who'd also done the same. They quickly let go of each other's hands, running up the stairs to the bedrooms.

'Why did we have to buy such big staircases?' Simon roared in his mind. He made it up the stairs before his wife, and pushed open Isabel's room's door. What he saw nearly gave him a heart attack.

Isabel's father stood in shell shock as her mother finally made it up the stairs to the same horrid sight.

Before the two stood their younger daughter, she looked as though she were sleep walking and having no control over her body. Isabel lay hovering above her bed, entangled in a black mystical power that seemed to me sucking the life right out of her. The only part of Isabel's body that wasn't covered in black tendrils was her face, the part she was currently crying from and gasping for air. The problem wasn't that no air was coming in from the outside, but that her lungs were being squeezed more and more by her younger sister.

Delilah ran towards the younger girl and tackled her to the floor. It was obvious this had 'awakened' her, because her eyes stopped glowing white and Isabel fell to the bed—not coughing, crying, or screaming anymore. The one with powers turned her topaz eyes—much like her mother's—to look at her older sister. The sight astonished her.

Isabel's clothes and body had red pressure marks, obviously going to turn her skin into bruises, as well as blood trickling out of her mouth. Just the sight made the dark brunette turn her head around to look at her mother, silently seeing the anger and sadness in her eyes. She just stayed where she was on the floor crying as Simon began to walk towards Isabel.
Simon came out of shock once Isabel was once more lying on her bed. He practically sprinted up to her, and took hold of her palm—faced upward. They were all quiet, knowing a pulse was being taken. Moments later Simon looked up, "You killed her," it was spoken so low almost inaudible.

The couple's last living child froze. "You killed her." This time he spoke it louder, with more force. Delilah just stayed where she was, tears already falling from her face mourning the loss of her baby girl.

"YOU KILLED HER!" Her father screamed once more, proceeding to then walked forward. Simon grabbed hold of his youngest, pulling her up to stand after gripping her shoulder. "WHAT WERE YOU DOING?!"

Marylin, the daughter with powers, begin to let tears flow much like her mother. Tears ran from her topaz eyes, down her pale flushed heart-shaped face, leaving streak marks in their place.

Simon continued to yell, it was certain that neighbor's could hear them clearly. As he continued his verbal assault, Delilah stood up beside her husband. Her beloved stopped his yelling when she leaned against him. Dark hazel eyes softened, and held the woman close, rubbing her back in small circular motions whispering, "Its okay…it's not your fault…"

Once Delilah stopped her crying, she looked at Marylin whose tears were also just stopped—leaving red puffy eyes in their wake. "Marylin," Delilah practically whispered, "what happened up here?"

Said teen just shook her head, not knowing herself. Simon sighed angrily and scowled as his wife just gave a sad nod, and helped Marylin back to her bedroom so that she may get back to sleep.

Although his wife left, Simon stayed and looked at his lifeless Princess. Her once sparkling sapphire eyes—inherited from Simon's mother—gazed at the ceiling so lifeless that it was if she's wasn't the same. As if even in death, she'd changed.

Before he could do anything, Delilah returned. "Did she say anything?" Simon asked angrily. His wife shook her head, leaving him to let out tears—something he rarely did.

Simon was angry; no, more than angry. He punched his fist into the carpeted grey floor as angry tears continued to fall onto the ground, his head downcast as he kneeled before the bed. Delilah knew when her husband was troubled; anyone could have known that from the way he was acting, so she kneeled next to him holding onto her baby's lifeless hand crying softly next to her husband as he silently muttered, "What are you doing, Marylin? What are you doing to our lives..."
PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:31 pm


Chapter One [2 Years Later]:


"What are you doing, Marylin! What are you doing to our lives?" I turned my gaze from the wall to the face of my father, letting my topaz eyes become locked with his own hazel pair, trying to out glare the other.

After a few minutes he turned away, walking out of the room huffing and muttering about how I was such a screw up to their lives. That's what he always said, ever since two years ago I'd accidentally killed my older sister, Isabel.

My father still acts as if I meant to do it on purpose, and my mother doesn't but has her own despise towards me. I can see why, what with being a murderer. But, I mean it wasn't my fault! If they had decided to educate me on my powers sooner…no, the same thing may have happened for even then I wouldn't have had a great hold on them.

I sighed, running a hand through my shoulder length brown hair, and decided that thinking on this would just cause me grief, and I wouldn't allow it. I stood up from my seat at the dining room table, and grabbed my coat and school bag by the door. My head turned to look at the rest of the house, debating whether or not I should tell them I was leaving. I sighed once more, knowing that they wouldn't care. With that I walked out of the house and headed off to school.

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"Hey! Lin!" I turned my head, seeing one of my best friends run toward me.

I waved back and shouted, "Hey Leah!" just as she came close enough that she gave me a side hug, "Hey! How've you been?" She questioned.

I shrugged, "Pretty good," A lie. One of the many ones I told my friends at school. Like how my eye color was just contacts, that I knew nothing about my sister's death (It ended up being stated that her brain had 30% more fluids than it originally should have, or so everyone thinks), and that everything was fine at home. I never asked anyone to come to my house, and no one questioned it either.

"That's cool," Leah said as we headed to homeroom, "My mom's been a b***h," I grimaced, you see Leah's mother is bipolar and the two have their own set of problems, especially since her father walked out on them the year before.

"What happened this time?" I asked. We'd finally arrived at homeroom, and took our seats across from each other.

Leah sighed, brushed one of her hands through her dirty blonde hair, "She's been blaming me a lot lately for my dad's leave, and chucking objects around the house," At my starring shock expression Leah added, "Don't worry, none of them hit me or broke. I already got ride of breakable objects long ago," I nodded as homeroom began, more students arriving as well as the teacher.

"So," Leah dragged out the 'o', "anything interesting at your house? You always say nothing, but…"

I shook my head; she was always the one trying to get information on my home life. Our other friend Jayne just turned around in her seat to look at Leah with a shake of her own head and said, "Give it a rest, Leah. Lin's never gonna tell us about her home life. You should just give up like the rest of us."

I laughed at the pout that graced Leah's face as she replied back, "Yeah well, I'm not like the rest of you, and besides, I really wanna know how our dear Lin lives," Their argument continued on for a bit more before the teacher told us to shush for the announcements were on.

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"So, are we seriously gonna do this?" Jayne questioned Leah, who nodded her head.

"Of course! We want to know more about our best friend, so if we end up having to follow her home to do so, then let it be that." Leah answered as the two looked at the door where Marylin had just walked out of and began running to keep up with her, but slow enough to remain anonymous.

Within a few minutes, the two girls saw Marylin take out a key from her jean pocket and open up a house's red door, sighing as she walked in. Leah nodded to Jayne, and got up from behind a bush, leaving Jayne to sigh much like how Lin had just moments before and follow her.

Standing up, Jayne watched Leah crouch underneath an opened window, waving her over. She rushed over, also going into a sitting position underneath the window. "Hey are you sure –" Leah shushed Jayne, turning her attention to Marylin.

"Hey, I'm home," They heard Marylin state in a somewhat depressed tone of voice. No answer came, but the sound of someone else walking into the room were heard. Leah and Jayne couldn't see who, but could hear his voice.

"You still decide to come into this house," The man, for the voice couldn't possibly be a woman's, was heard trailing off at the end of his sentence.

Once again Lin sighed, "Well, I do live here…"

He scoffed, "We should have kicked you out long ago!"

Leah and Jayne watched as their best friend's eyes widened at the response. "You're not seriously going to…" she trailed off.

The man laughed, "Like hell I will! You've been nothing but a pain to us these past two years!" Leah and Jayne's eyes also widened, realizing what happened two years ago: Isabel's death.

"Fine, if you want me gone," Marylin spoke, voice filled with uncertainty, "I'll leave."

Finally the older man smiled and pulled out 3 trunks from a nearby closet, tossed them in front of his daughter, and sat on the couch, taking the remote and flipping through the channels. Eyes willing with tears, Marylin ran up the steps to her room, grabbing the bags.

"Oh. My. God." Leah breathed each word slowly out. Jayne could only nod, thinking the same as Leah.

"Where will she go…?" Jayne silently asked aloud, not really waiting for a response.

Leah just shook her head, still in a daze, and began to walk away. Seeing this, Jayne ran up to her, "Where are you going?!" She exclaimed.

"Home," Leah answered shortly, walking around Jayne and back onto the sidewalk.

"What do you mean home?!" Leah turned around, "We have to do something about Lin, Leah!"

"She didn't want us involved in the first place. You were right, we should have never came," Acting coldly, Leah turned back around and headed home.

Jayne sighed – she should have expected this out of Leah, she never liked being involved with family problems of any sort. She turned around, looking back at Marylin's house, 'If only there was something I could do…' she thought, and with a shake of her head, also headed home.

ErikaKathryn


ErikaKathryn

PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:34 pm


Okay, well there's the Prologue and Chapter 1! I haven't written anything so far for chapter 2, so if anyone has any suggestions, go right on ahead and throw them my way! I have the basic idea planned out, but I've revised it a whole lot of time, and the next chapter or so is kind of confused for the most part. Any advice or criticism is greatly appreciated, and I love opinions!
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