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 Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 10:23 pm
DISCLAIMER: only the poem is mine, the picture is from photobucket...
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:37 am
I know how that last painful kiss feels when they say goodbye..I couldn't even think of a more beautiful way of putting it...this is definitely one of the best things I have ever read.
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 7:35 pm
Mysterious_0ne I know how that last painful kiss feels when they say goodbye..I couldn't even think of a more beautiful way of putting it...this is definitely one of the best things I have ever read. thanks! 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 8:01 pm
I like it, but it feels like it's missing something.
It doesn't sound complete. No offense, I like it and all, but it seems like there could be more, and not just like, more lines or more words, but more... hm... substance, you know?
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 5:12 pm
aya ayanami Mysterious_0ne I know how that last painful kiss feels when they say goodbye..I couldn't even think of a more beautiful way of putting it...this is definitely one of the best things I have ever read. thanks! 4laugh No problem
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