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 Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:56 pm
you could help me think of a name ^_^
and comment on it please i love feedback
hiding in your shadow of guilt
what once was love
what once was true
what now is gone and lost forever
to fogive you or not..
the pressure is building on my shoulders
its pushing
too hard now
for too long
i can no longer hold the weight of 1 thousand lies
from you
from my tearing whimper of a voice
telling you to stop
stop the tourture
the tourture of you
your face
your voice
your lies of "i love you"
maybe you dont even realize
the pain
too much for me
too much for one to handle
so i take it out
on myself
harsh nights
alone in my room with my notebook
hours it seems
thinking of you......
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Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:06 pm
Maybe ''Obsesson Of Unseen Love'' could be the title
it is a good poem no doupt you did a great job heart it is your first?
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Fashionable Conversationalist
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