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The script for the comic i swore i was working on.
i have more fun writing it then i think i'll have drawing.
but yes, its coming guys!!! Uni ate my face and i'm waitign for it to spit it out again.
ALSO: fowl words are used. Like S!it and F@ck and whatnot.
if you are too little to read stuff like that. stop now!
(don't say i didn't warn you)
ps: its written in scrip format. like reading a play. Sorry the stage directions and whatnot didn't coem out in italics. makes it kinda hard to read. but u'll live.
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:: ::~::Chapter One
First panels shows a wide plane with a few small clumps of trees and the rebel base hidden by a forest at night.
Voice: Rock. Paper. Scissors
Then shows a group of five sitting around a fire at a distance
Voice: paper beats rock, I win.
Voice2: what! How does a paper beat a solid rock!
Muscular man with messy dark blue hair and sun-glasses leans back
Man: Sorry honey, I just play the game. I don’t make the rules.
A red headed, freckled girl frowns
Girl: Well it’s a stupid game
Man: Aw, don’t be sad now! I can keep you company in that lonely dark tower if you really want me too
Girl2: Ugh, Kas you’re such a creep
Kas: Now lets not fight ladies! There’s enough of me to go around!
Girl: No thanks! I can handle the watch myself. Next shift is in two hours- don’t be late!
Girl2: Bye Rika! Keep your communicator on!
Kas:
Girl2: We just follow orders, and would you please not drink that stuff while on duty! M already had to bail you once for having it out in the hanger.
Kas looks over at the figure of M who is seated on the ground leading against a log
Kas: aw, he won’t mind getting me out another time! Ain’t that right M?
M: Only if the squadron leader allows it
Kas: You gonna listen to this kid!
M: Blue is our squadron leader, so yes.
Kas: Bah! Bunch o’ hussies you lot are.
Blue: How many times have we been over this! Kas, I don’t think it matters if I’m in command or not, you are to pig headed to follow orders anyways
Kas: And that’s just the way you like me
Aze: where are you going?
Kas: To see a man about a dog.
Aze: To what?
Kas: I’m going to go fertilize the trees.
Aze: why?
Kas: God dammit! I’m going to go take a s**t so stay upwind of that spot over there!
Aze looks wide-eyed at Blue who just laughs
Blue: make sure you don’t get a stick up you’re a**
Kas as he walks away: I’ll get you to pull it out for me!
He vanishes and they all stare into the fire for a moment
M: Rude isn’t he.
Blue: It’s Kas. He’s probably saved all our lives at least once already.
Aze: He’s not that bad….
Blue: You want to take this one M?
M: The council is when the heads of the seven main city-states travel to Dagon to discuss political matters. It only happens once every year, and since the heads are all very important people in the eyes of the citizens, they turn it into a week of festivities.
Blue: It’s all ******** bullshit if you ask me. They sit up there and plan how they are going to destroy this world further and the rest of the city celebrates like the bunch of brainwashed logs they are.
Aze: Well, that’s why we’re here right?
Blue: yeah, I guess. We aren’t strong enough to do anything about it yet…maybe one day….
M: Shh!
Blue grips a gun at her waist
Blue: What is it?
M: Do you not hear that?
Aze: I don’t hear….wait…it sounds like…engines?
Rika comes crashing out of the forest
Rika: DESTROYERS!!!!!!!!! AT LEAST A FIFTY OF THEM AND THEY GOT FLYER DROIDS! They’ve bugged up our air waves! There’s no way to communicate to the-
BAKOOOM!
A huge blast is fired at the rebels base. Kas comes stumbling out of the forest
Kas: What the ******** was that! I nearly s**t my- holy ********! The base!
Blue: MOVE!
The five dash towards the burning base. The sounds of fighting and the humming of the machines engines as the droids swarm the base fills the air. The group starts shooting at the bug like robots as they run across the field.
Blue once inside base: Aze! M! Take the west wing! Rika go see if you can block off the hole they made in the central corridor.
Kas: And me?
Blue: Go break stuff!
Kas: Gladly!
Blue: We need to get to the chamber!
Kas:
Blue: We are the only ones ready for battle- someone’s got to protect the Stone!
Kas is attacked by two of the droids. Blue shoots them off before they can attack.
Kas: I coudda taken ‘em!
Blue: KAS!
Kas: Me!
Blue: BEHIND YOU!
Kas: forceful aren’t you! All you have to do it ask!
Blue: dammit Kas! Take out that destroyer!
Kas gets up and stares at the gigantic metal spider like robot coming down the hall. It fires another massive blast which Blue and him narrowly avoid, but are sent crashing into the walls by the shock wave of the explosion
Blue: KAS! HURRY UP!
Kas: WOMEN! You are all so demanding! Take the night shift!
Blue: Kas! It’s powering up!
Kas: Alright! Alright!
He lets go of the droid which speeds towards the destroyer. Kas then jumps at Blue and shields her with his body as the two robots collide and explode. They get up slowly brushing off dust and rubble
Blue: I said take out the destroyer not the flipping hallway!
Kas:
They run down the hall and turn into another. A voice is heard over the loud speaker
Voice: Attention Alpha-sector members. This is an A-class warning. All systems will be shut down. Vacate the building immediately. Attention all Alpha- sector Members. This is an A-class warning….
Blue: A-class!? That means…The Commander!
Kas: s**t! Screw the chamber!
A wall of droids block their way. Kas picks up a gun from a dead body and fires at them with Blue. They break their way through to a set of large double doors which have been knocked out. They run into a dark room- the only light coming in from the floor to ceiling window on the far wall. Blue runs up to a man lying on the ground- dark blood coming from a wound in his stomach.
Blue: R-Ray… no….
The man opens his eyes
Ray: The stone- the stone has been sent.
Blue: no! it’s not over! We can still win!
Ray: There are too many. Find the stone- start- start again.
Blue: no!
Ray:
Blue: Let it…let it what? Ray? Commander Ray!
Kas pulls her to her feet
Kas: We need to get out of here now! More are arriving. It’s over Blue! We’ll meet the others at the rally point- they have probably left here already.
There is another explosion which shakes the entire base. The two turn to see droids outside the hall and watch as two guild members are shot down
Kas: Looks like we wont be getting out that way!
He takes out his gun and shoots the large window. it doesn’t shatter.
Blue: it’s probably bullet proof you moron
Kas: ******** bullet proof my a**!
Kas: After you my lady!
The two jump out and run off into the forest, leaving the burning buildings behind.
