Welcome to Gaia! ::

I wouldn't mind helping you out with your comic! It looks like a good storyboard/sketch, but I'm kind of of confused about the order it's supposed to go in(the numbers at the top and the arrows on the right are what's throwing me off).

Also, just a stylistic note, there should probably be some empty space between panels - it serves to make the page not look so cluttered and separates the scenes a bit. Like this: [link] There's not too much white space between the boxes but it looks cleaner than if the panels were all scrunched together (like this).

It's just a personal preference, but I would recommend that you write your comic book from left to right. Manga is published from right to left because they want to stay true to the original content which was published in Japan (where everything is read from right to left, books, newspapers, etc.). It's not a stylistic choice, it's just the way they read. If you have an English-speaking audience, I think they'd prefer to read a comic the way they grew up reading; left to right. It's always best to cater to what is easiest for the audience if you want people to read your comic (ask anyone in the webcomic business).

Yeh i aint doing that either yet xd
But think about what ur gonna draw first, then plot the frames. Use a ruler and make sure to mix frame sizes and such.

HAha...



ECHO



ECHO


echo