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 Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:03 am
Put my RP skills to the test. I am a Para RPer and if you are a good RPer I wish to Post a few times so you know my skills and power. I have my own RP Char. from myspace.
Name: Lord Nemesis BloodFang.
PM me if you think I am need to do better. If I do then I will be asking you to help me.
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:06 am
_Lord Nemesis was standing 500" from anyone and anything, he was sick and tired or moving so slow to fight any one. So he was no longer going to use his slow movement to fight any more. He was wearing a baggy red shirt that weight 250 LBS covered his 500 LBS Saiyan Armor. His legs were wrapped in a thin black spandex pants that hugged his legs, covering that was 100 LBS of black baggy pants. His Saiyan shoes were 150 LBS and he wore 1 ton ankle cuffs that were hidden by his pants. His wrist bands were also 1 ton and they were hidden by his white gloves. What he had never told any one was that all of his clothes were so heavy and that his armor was not only there for protection as a 500 LBS training armor that was vary hard and flexible. His armor also was a Ki/energy condenser, he had it made by an old friend that had passed away a long time ago. This was to use up 1/3 of his Ki/energy before it could be sensed._
"It is time to let you see my true speed and power."
_Lord Nemesis would then look up at the night sky. A purple and black hue seemed to spread throughout the darkened sky. His thick dark red aura was filling the air around him as a peaceful breeze would roll over the ground slowly, his dark red hair would move slightly as the wind would brush over his back sending his cape slowly into the air around his body. His eyes giving off a powerful Crimson red glow but his eyes were now black do to his newly found powers from using his Orb to bring back a Friend from the dead. His heart was tainted for only a few minuets before he was able to control a whole new level of power and with it came more speed then ever before._
_Lord Nemesis would then start to take off his shirt and he could feel his self get lighter. Then he would toss it into the air about 10" above him and it would fall to the ground, leaving a 3 inch indent around the shirt in the ground. He would then take off both of his wrist bands and drop the ground and they would hit the ground hard shaking it and it would leave a 5" crater in the ground on both sides of Lord Nemesis. Then he would bend down and un-strap his ankle cuffs and they would hit the ground but they didn't shake the ground, they only left a 1" indent in the ground next to his feet. Lord Nemesis stand to his feet and he would pull his pants off and kick they off to the side as a grin would slide onto his face. He would then place his hand on the sides of his Armor and he would start to pull it from his skin and his power would jump to that of a Super Saiyan 2 but it was only pull half way off his skin. Then he would start to slide it up off of his body and his power would jump up again and his power was that is a Super Saiyan 3. As he would quickly take off the rest of his Armor and his power was fully reviled at long last. _
"Now you will see true power."
_Lord Nemesis's power started to rise as he would power up beyond that of a normal Saiyan. His arms out to his sides at not touching his body and he was looking at a slight angle up into the air, his red aura would slowly turn black. The ground under him started to cracked and small peaces of the ground would float up into the air around him as he would tighten every one of his mussels in his body forcing out power like no other. He would easily surpass Super Saiyans of kind and any power level with this power he hand hidden with in him self. This power was Demonic and Heavenly at the same time, it would burst out of his body leaving a massive hole in the ground 800" wide and 1,000" deep. The air around his would start to spin wildly like a tornado. His hair would start to change to a pure black but it would have a red glow to it, his normally Crimson red glowing eyes would change to a thick black glow. Lord Nemesis's body would be in a state of pure power and it would start to send powerful shock waves from his body, floating in the air above the hole._
_The sky were turning black with blood red clouds as lighting was sparking all over his body, trailing from his feet to the tip of his hair the lighting would crack with every movement it made. The ground was shaking wildly and it would be off of the rector scales. His powerful black aura filled the air around him for 500", it would look like a black flame had engulfed his body reaching into the sky 500" and 400" below him. He would then start to raise his arms out to his sides as the wind around him was now like a F5 tornado. It spun around him in any and all directions, each time two winds that were going in different directions would scrap each other it would send a small circle shaped blade and it would slicing at every thing that would enter the wind. As his aura would keep the wind 50" from his body he would let his arms down and he would relax finely unleashing his Full power to the world. He was the "Eye of the Tornado" as it would sway from side to side wildly but under his complete control. As his power would grow so would the hole in the ground, the hole was now 1,300" wide and 1,700" deep. The tornado was covering the entire hole as he would not be powering up yet his full power was bein let out of his body. His power was now at that of Super Saiyan 4 Gogeta at his full power, but Lord Nemesis was only in his normal Saiyan form._
_Lord Nemesis would slowly float down near the ground, he was floating 15" above the ground. Lord Nemesis dark red aura looked as if it was coming out of the ground in a 100" around him. His feet hung down pointed at the ground, as the sparks around him would slowly fade away and his aura looked like it was sparkling around him. Lord Nemesis at this point could take on nearly any one and come out on top. The few that would with stand this power were not on the planet at the time he was. Everything looked as if it was in slow-motion to him and he would start there waiting an opponent to show. He would then close his eyes and he would cross his arms over his chest. His body was slightly bulging more with mussels and to keep his power at this low level he would have to keep his heart beat slow and his breathing calm. He would still be floating in the air with the power and strength of a Super Saiyan 4 Gogeta but his speed was twice that of Gogeta. The Gravity around him was 100X that of normal and it was still nothing but normal to Lord Nemesis._
:The Fight: ((Under Construction.))
_Lord Nemesis was floating in the air waiting for an opponent worth fighting to show up and challenge him to a fight. He was only wearing only a skin tight pair of shorts that showed every mussel in his legs. The rest of his body seemed to be venerable, he stood 5" 11', his body was bulging with mussels and a tremendous amount of energy. Lord Nemesis was the last person at this point to mess with it you were unskilled in a fight. Then out of no where a huge power level appeared on the other side of the Planet, Lord Nemesis seen that it was nearly as high as his so he would have a huge grin on his face. Lord Nemesis that this person was only there to fight him and test his own power on Lord Nemesis._
_Lord Nemesis was happy that there was a person out there that was worth fighting all out. For once he was willing to fight with his full force and make the up coming fight as bloody as possible. With in a few seconds the power level appeared 1,000" from Lord Nemesis facing him with a sadistic grin. As they looked upon each other Lord Nemesis realized that it was the only and only Super Saiyan 4 Gogeta but something was different about him. He was not two different energies like before he was only one. He was one being not a fusion of Goku and Vegeta, this changed everything for Lord Nemesis because he knew that the fight would go until one of them was dead. So Lord Nemesis would say out load in a calm yet demanding voice._
"Are we going to get things started?."
_Lord Nemesis would then float up to eye level with this Gogeta and he would stair him in the face. Then get into his fighting stands with his hand slightly out to his side sending out small waves if heated air, if anything was to move with in them they would bounce off and be sent back at him with twice the speed. This was good in a battle of tactics and speed, then all of the sudden he would rush towards Lord Nemesis with his right fist cocked back ready to attack full force. Lord Nemesis stood there waiting for his to get to the right spot so his first attack could not easily be avoided, and at the last passable second Lord Nemesis would turn to the right moving a few inches at the same time narrowly avoiding his attack. As he moved Gogeta seemed to be moving in slow-motion as Lord Nemesis brought his left knee up with a devastating amount of force that it would knock the wind out of Gogeta. As it hit him Lord Nemesis would c**k his right arm forward and he would swing it back at the neck of Gogeta that would knock his head forward. Then he would move his knee from his stomach as he would put his hands together and slammed them into Gogeta's back sending him to the crater face first._
_Lord Nemesis was floating in the air with a grin on his face as dust and rocks were sent 500" into the air. Then as the dust started to clear Gogeta would appear with in a split second and he sent a powerful right hook to Lord Nemesis sides, letting out a screech of pain he would send his left elbow to the side of Gogeta's face. Then they both teleported 5" away from each other facing each other. There power was clashing in the air and thunder clouds rolled in and it slowly started to rain. Then the two disappeared in a flash in lightning and speed, they were teleporting all over the planet chasing each other and hitting each other. Each time they appeared they hit each other 5 times with each hit a boom would thunder though the air sending shock waves that could be seen the naked eye._
_Then they would stop teleporting around and they would still be punching each other faster then ever, there power was growing with ever hit they took. Then Lord Nemesis would cover his right fist in a powerful red Ki/energy. He would send it at Gogeta's chest as it hit he was sent flying back in the air then Lord Nemesis would rush towards Gogeta and he would spin to the right sending his right foot at his face after he did a 360 in mid air. He was sent flying down at the ground as a small amount of blood would come from his nose. He cough his self before he would hit the ground and Lord Nemesis would appear in front of him sending a powerful left knee to his stomach but Gogeta caught it at the last second. He would then send Lord Nemesis spinning back into the air and at the same second he would send a powerful beam at Lord Nemesis at a slight angle towards the ground. Lord Nemesis would catch him self at the last second with nearly no time to react he would put his hands out to the side and a powerful shield formed around him. The beam would be forced around the shield in servile smaller beams, a few of the beams would hit the ground and cause a huge explorations on the ground._
_Then Lord Nemesis would gather a huge amount of Ki/energy and ht would keep it in a small orb, then before Gogeta could end his attack he would send the orb though the beam at Gogeta. Then Gogeta would stop his attack and as he did he seen a powerful orb coming at him with grate speed He had no time to react and it hit him in the stomach. As it hit it exploded with such power it sent out a huge shock wave that would leave a crater in the ground 500"wide and 500"wide. Gogeta was blasted to the ground fast, as he hit the ground he was sent 10" into the ground and didn't get up for a few minutes When he got up his clothes were torn up and he was bleeding from his nose and his mouth._
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 10:28 pm
(You are very accurate when it comes to details. You recall every detail. This is a very good thing as you make the scene life like. There are, however, quite a few spelling errors that need correcting. But, other than that, very good. I would, however, like to see you referring to other character power levels other than just Gogeta's. We understand that you are battling against Gogeta, but like couldn't you have other's watching? Perhaps someone new? Like who else besides Gogeta would be on this planet? Would there be people running in every direction trying to get to some sanctuary? I would like to think, since you mention the ressurrection of Gogeta, that there would be races of creatures far more advanced capable of witnessing such an atrocity. Like my granny, empress dee, someone who secretly was in love with Vegeta the ol' Prince of Saiyans, long before Vegeta was ever "in love" with Bulma, was one of those people watching. Fearless in the face of this wind. Capable of seeing every but of action going on. With Empress Dee was her grandson Ryu Bogard, and beside Ryu and Dee was Terry Bogard. You know what, I am going to add to this right now below and continue it.)
Empress Dee, a small petite woman of about five feet in height stood watching closely of the battle between Gogeta and Lord Nemesis. Gogeta, being the fused form of Vegeta and Goku, Dee had this secret crush of long, long ago. This was way back when the original Planet Vegetasai was still around.
She recalled to mind the final day of the Planet...when she, and she alone saved the Prince from the true wrath of Frieza. The poor prince of saiyans on that day was trapped within a special metallic cage that not even a super saiyan in the oozaru form could break. The only way out of there was by a chemical reaction, something only a Tuffle would know about.
Luckily, Dee was part Tuffle. Her original form was a Tuffle, but it was when Dee warned King Vegeta of Frieza's plan, before Frieza and his henchmen could take control of the planet, allowing the King ideal time to think over the situation, when she was granted the DNA of a saiyan. She was very grateful. She had the full knowledge of a tuffle, but looked like a saiyan complete with a long tail.
Over time, due to the many loves that she has encountered, her saiyan tail began to become a rainbow of fur. Oh, it still presented its original brown shade, but it had other colors in it, as if it was fused in there.
At any rate, she had freed Vegeta from the cage, got a well-deserved kiss from the Prince (something the prince would never admit he actually did), and thus was partly responsible for the saving of the saiyan race.
She stood there at the battle field watching with her husband Terry. Terry, a well-known King of the Fighters aka the Legendary lone hungry golden wolf, was a man that was eternally loyal to Dee. The two had a true lover's bond. They would stand by each other even in the face of death.
Terry had an arsenal of powers, but, he was no match of Lord Nemesis. He had no choice but to stay on the sidelines and watch. He didn't mind, though. The fight was very good.
Ryu Bogard, the grandson of Terry and Empress stood there also. He was the only remaining child of the late William-Tyler. Will had died long ago due to being overly worried about people. He was his own worst enemy as they say. But, it was also unavoidable. Nonetheless, Ryu was very strong. His cries could easily make one go deaf.
The three watching did not dare hide their powers, for to Lord Nemesis, they would be of no concern to him. Not even worth his time.
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:43 pm
((OOC: I'll keep this simple. If they are NOT full blooded Saiyan and the most well known, I will not be adding them into my RP. I was asking to point out my mistakes and seeing that you "Said" there are a few but yet you didn't point them out. My words.
"PM me if you think I am need to do better. If I do then I will be asking you to help me."
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