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Kumiko_Neko
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:53 pm


This is a poem I wrote several weeks ago for a friend of mine.


Dreams
Under the sun, or under the moon,
I dream long about you.
When you're away or when you're near,
In my mind, you're always here.
I imagine your skin, breath, and touch.
Strange or not, it matters much.
I close my eyes; you're all I see.
If only it were reality.
You're in my heart, you're in my soul.
I feel your warmth, despite the cold.
Rain down upon me in my sleep.
Let these illusions give me peace.



Any critiques would be welcome ^^.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:09 am


*Applauds* Beautifully written! I really like it!

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