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 Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:54 pm
Hello fellow guild members! I am new to the guild, but I kinda know what to do I guess lol well, here is a song that I have wrote, and note, I do not write the actual instrumental part of the song, I can only write lyrics for now! >.< But her is, I bet, one of my most best songs! If you ask politely, I can even show you another one of my songs, but I hope you like my song, The Sanctuary of the Rose.
Sanctuary of the Rose
6-12-07
By: BleedingAngelRose
(Soft piano part)
I’m not okay as everyone thinks I am,
I’ve been deceived by a great evil.
And though no one can see it,
I’m falling apart inside!
A dream that turned into a nightmare,
Is always the last dream for me.
Now I shall have only nightmares!
(Heavy metalpart)
(You killed me!!)
I always thought you were,
Just too good to be true!
(You loved me)
And yet you still killed me!
I always tried to think,
You were real and you loved me.
But you are only in my fantasy!
(Chorus)
I need to find my Sanctuary!
As the Blood Red Rose,
I am never again loved.
But I’m happy now,
In my own little world,
Of my Sacrificed Sanctuary!
You never were real.
You never will be.
You were just made up,
By the one true evil inside!
You plunged me in the soul,
With that bloody knife!
You killed me inside,
But I’m still alive out side!
(I’ll kill the outside then!)
(Chorus)
I shall be alone forever now,
Here in my little coffin of nightmares.
I sing my own little death song,
Hoping the Angels will come,
And take me away forever from here!
I’m standing here on the edge,
Of a twenty-second story death!
It’s too late to turn back now!
(Chorus)
I’ve tried to commit it several times,
But every time I have failed.
But I won’t fail this time!
Some say for me to stay,
But there’s only one place destined,
For a dead, soulless being like me.
It’s the cold, friendless darkness,
This darkness is a frostbitten world!
(But it’s better then in your arms!)
(Chorus)
I have already fallen in love,
With someone I know is real.
Some try to keep us apart,
It doesn’t matter to me.
I’ll do more then you did,
To get their love and friendship,
But he’s falling away from me!
(Chorus)
(bridge)
I would hold my breath,
Just to see you there.
I would scream your name,
Just to hear from you.
Every part of me,
Wants to die right now.
I have made a choice.
I shall no longer live!!!
(Chorus)
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 2:34 pm
I love the choice of words first off. The emotion of it seems really deep too, plus I can understand why it's probably one fo your favorites. It's so well written and planned out. I must if I could give it a 10/10! Wonderful job Rose!
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:02 pm
Kumiko_Neko I love the choice of words first off. The emotion of it seems really deep too, plus I can understand why it's probably one fo your favorites. It's so well written and planned out. I must if I could give it a 10/10! Wonderful job Rose! Why thank you very much! ^-^ I think what made it so great was because its kinda bout me and what happened when a friend betrayed me -.- and a whole bunch of other stuff lol
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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 2:48 am
I've realized, that most of the better pieces, especially for poems and songs, usually do come real experiances. And this is definately one of them, though I'm sorry for what your friend did. I hope things are either solved or taken care of.
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Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:37 am
Kumiko_Neko I've realized, that most of the better pieces, especially for poems and songs, usually do come real experiances. And this is definately one of them, though I'm sorry for what your friend did. I hope things are either solved or taken care of. thank you, and eveything is actually taken care of. I just stoped all communication from her
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