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Firlodge

PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 1:43 pm


(I hope this is in the right place, please don't bite me.)

The basics is to follow this tutorial:

http://glittercandy.deviantart.com/art/Mary-Sue-Tutorial-48101443

then when that's done, I'm sure someone will help us along. Maybe they'll ask questions or something.

So here's me going through the tutorial:

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Step 1: Female, since I am

Step 2: Appearance

Hair

Her hair is a curly golden waterfall-like cascade, with natural red, orange, yellow, blue, indigo, and violet highlights. She can also change her hair colour at will.

Eyes

Her left eye is normally blue and her right eye is normally hazel. However, they change colour according to her moods, and she has the power to change them at will. They glitter like gems and she can see in the dark. Her eyes emit ambient lighting and she can use them to create exciting laser shows, using the colours of her hair.

Body and diet

She has the perfect body despite gorging on junk food and not exercising. She's the greatest fighter ever!

Nails

Her nails are unbreakable, but she still manages to keep them short.
Don't ever break. Thanks to her nails, she has the power over all the elements. Let's ignore the whole unstable thing.

Race

She's half elf, half kitune, half drow, half unicorn, half vampire and half human.

Clothes

The most fashionable ones, ever, DUH!

Step 3: Skills

She's the best ever at everything, duh!

Step 4: Background

Here's her tragic past:

A week after she was born, a very tragic past ensued. On Monday, her father died. On Tuesday, her mother died. On Wednesday, her eldest brother died. On Thursday, her eldest sister died. On Friday, her youngest brother died. On Saturday, her youngest sister died. On Sunday, her twin sister died.

She's secretly the queen of the unicorns but doesn't know this, since like all mary-sues good characters, she has the trendy A-word.

She's also rich beyond imagination.

Despite her tragic past, she is a happy, healthy and well-adjusted person.


Step 5: Personality

She has the best ever personality. To make her realistic, however, she needs flaws.

As an MS, she can't have proper flaws. Thus, I propose the following:

-Everyone hates her because she's a hybrid
-Everyone hates her because they're jealous
-Her guardians hate her and abuse her. That's a flaw, right?

Step 6:name
Her name is:

Sa'pp'hi're'-Bl'ue'-Se'pt'em'be'r-K'aw'ia'ii'-Ch'oc'ol'at'e-O'ra'ng'e-S'no'wd'ro'p-T'in'fo'il'-Cu'te'

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And now it's your turn!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:03 pm


I think I love you. xD

It pains me too much to do this. It really does. xD

VenusRain

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Firlodge

PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:59 am


VenusRain
I think I love you. xD

It pains me too much to do this. It really does. xD


Oh, well.
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