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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 1:43 pm
(I hope this is in the right place, please don't bite me.)
The basics is to follow this tutorial:
http://glittercandy.deviantart.com/art/Mary-Sue-Tutorial-48101443
then when that's done, I'm sure someone will help us along. Maybe they'll ask questions or something.
So here's me going through the tutorial:
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Step 1: Female, since I am
Step 2: Appearance
Hair
Her hair is a curly golden waterfall-like cascade, with natural red, orange, yellow, blue, indigo, and violet highlights. She can also change her hair colour at will.
Eyes
Her left eye is normally blue and her right eye is normally hazel. However, they change colour according to her moods, and she has the power to change them at will. They glitter like gems and she can see in the dark. Her eyes emit ambient lighting and she can use them to create exciting laser shows, using the colours of her hair.
Body and diet
She has the perfect body despite gorging on junk food and not exercising. She's the greatest fighter ever!
Nails
Her nails are unbreakable, but she still manages to keep them short. Don't ever break. Thanks to her nails, she has the power over all the elements. Let's ignore the whole unstable thing.
Race
She's half elf, half kitune, half drow, half unicorn, half vampire and half human.
Clothes
The most fashionable ones, ever, DUH!
Step 3: Skills
She's the best ever at everything, duh!
Step 4: Background
Here's her tragic past:
A week after she was born, a very tragic past ensued. On Monday, her father died. On Tuesday, her mother died. On Wednesday, her eldest brother died. On Thursday, her eldest sister died. On Friday, her youngest brother died. On Saturday, her youngest sister died. On Sunday, her twin sister died.
She's secretly the queen of the unicorns but doesn't know this, since like all mary-sues good characters, she has the trendy A-word.
She's also rich beyond imagination.
Despite her tragic past, she is a happy, healthy and well-adjusted person.
Step 5: Personality
She has the best ever personality. To make her realistic, however, she needs flaws.
As an MS, she can't have proper flaws. Thus, I propose the following:
-Everyone hates her because she's a hybrid -Everyone hates her because they're jealous -Her guardians hate her and abuse her. That's a flaw, right?
Step 6:name Her name is:
Sa'pp'hi're'-Bl'ue'-Se'pt'em'be'r-K'aw'ia'ii'-Ch'oc'ol'at'e-O'ra'ng'e-S'no'wd'ro'p-T'in'fo'il'-Cu'te'
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And now it's your turn!
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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:03 pm
I think I love you. xD
It pains me too much to do this. It really does. xD
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:59 am
VenusRain I think I love you. xD It pains me too much to do this. It really does. xD Oh, well.
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