I see the angels, I'll lead them to your door.
There's no escape now...
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As I said in the title, I wrote this a little while ago; I think it was either early October or late November...
Anyway, it's a poem, told from Bella's point of view about Edward (well... to him really...).
I showed it to some friends who had read Twilight and one who hadn't. The friends who had (one of whom actually got me into the books to begin with) both said I was scarily obsessed, and the one who hadn't thought I was more insane than she thought before... ^_^
I'm hoping I can get a better reaction here...
And I'm struggling with the title; any suggestions are welcome.
Anyway, here it is...
Twilight
I love the way you look at me,
I love your careful face,
I love the way you play piano,
With tenderness and grace.
I love your gentle touch,
I love it when you stare,
I love your colour-changing eyes
And your soft bronze hair.
I love your gentlemanly ways,
I love your glittering skin,
I love your icy lips
And your perfect grin.
I love the way you walk,
I love the way you dress,
I love the way you respect me-
Who’d ask for anything less?
I love your perfect manners,
I love it when we kiss,
I love it when we are together,
There’s not a moment I want to miss.
I love the way you sing me to sleep,
I love the way you know your limit,
I love your soul, I love you more
With every passing minute.
I love the way you’ve stayed with me,
Through all this trouble and strife,
But most of all I love the fact
That you’ll love me, all my life.
Anyway, it's a poem, told from Bella's point of view about Edward (well... to him really...).
I showed it to some friends who had read Twilight and one who hadn't. The friends who had (one of whom actually got me into the books to begin with) both said I was scarily obsessed, and the one who hadn't thought I was more insane than she thought before... ^_^
I'm hoping I can get a better reaction here...
And I'm struggling with the title; any suggestions are welcome.
Anyway, here it is...
Twilight
I love the way you look at me,
I love your careful face,
I love the way you play piano,
With tenderness and grace.
I love your gentle touch,
I love it when you stare,
I love your colour-changing eyes
And your soft bronze hair.
I love your gentlemanly ways,
I love your glittering skin,
I love your icy lips
And your perfect grin.
I love the way you walk,
I love the way you dress,
I love the way you respect me-
Who’d ask for anything less?
I love your perfect manners,
I love it when we kiss,
I love it when we are together,
There’s not a moment I want to miss.
I love the way you sing me to sleep,
I love the way you know your limit,
I love your soul, I love you more
With every passing minute.
I love the way you’ve stayed with me,
Through all this trouble and strife,
But most of all I love the fact
That you’ll love me, all my life.
Copyright (C) 2007 mizzshy, All Rights Reserved
Please tell me what you think! ^_^
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... No mercy no more,
No remorse 'cause I still remember
The smile when you tore me apart...
... No mercy no more,
No remorse 'cause I still remember
The smile when you tore me apart...
