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Twitchy_joe

PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:59 pm


First Name: Tweak
Last Name: Thomas
Nicknames: just Tweak
Age: 19
Birthdate: May 22
Background: Though not born a vampire, he was introduced to the monsters at a young age. His family served as housekeepers to an English couple, rich from old money. He lived his days of youth in a cellar made to house his family. The couple which they served had a little...secret, which one day became a secret no longer. As the neighborhood stormed the mansion to cleanse their town of the monstrosities, Tweak, his mother, father, and baby sister where shackled in the basement. As shouts and a woman's shrill scream could be heard from above, the master of the house burst through the door and began to tear into Tweak's mother's throat. In no time, Tweak watched through tear-filled eyes as his parents' bodies were cast aside. A darkness began to enclose Tweak's vision as he fell unconscious with his baby sister's cries echoing in his ears. He awoke the next night in a neighbor's house and quickly darted out the door. At the smoldering wreak which had once been the basement, he found himself crying, holding the charred skulls of his family. He ran away from that place and vowed never to return. Months later he discoved he was now infected with the curse and had fallen into smoking and killing to ease the pain of his heart. He moves silently from town to town taking out those who he believes are unfit for this world.
Vampire(y/n): yep
Fluent Language(s): English
Weapon: None
Hair Color: Dull red
Eye Color: Emerald green
Piercings (if any): Two in the left ear, three in the right, and one in the tongue (all done by himself. *takes a bow* thank you...thank you heh
Tattoos (if any): A demented jester juggles three skulls as his eyes stare menacingly out at you from Tweak's left shoulder
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:02 am


Its been awhile since I've rped. Could i get some feedback on this character? Even if it's from other new people I just want some criticism.

Twitchy_joe


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:03 pm


well i think its great except for the tattoo... its just a little bit of overkill you dont need to beat people over the head with his past...plus you cant peirce your own tongue cause theres like a major artery and it would kill you
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