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Sarillia285

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 1:39 pm


Post your poetry! I don't care how emo or happy it is. I'll post my favorites of mine & I want to read the favorites that you have written.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 1:41 pm


Your Eyes Send Out Sweet Whispers


Your eyes send out sweet whispers
As you see all of them here
A sea of familiar gloomy faces
Causes all past feelings to seer

As your sweet whispers reach me
My eyes are brimming with tears
My shadow opens slowly
Reality has become my worst fears

I feel so hallow inside me
For now I find I’m home
Your sweet whispers live in my skin
I know I’m not alone

I can almost feel your hands upon me
Sweet whispers in this place we once shared
Thinking about my future without you
Leaves me fearful… terrified… scared

I still cant believe it happened
Was there something I did wrong
But thinking, whishing, hoping
Wont change the fact… you’re gone

I cant believe this is over
Why did you have to die
I hate it, but I need to say
I love you & goodbye

Sarillia285


Jyu1ch1

PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 9:15 pm


I dig it man. cool
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:32 pm


Jyu1ch1
I dig it man. cool


thanx hun ^^

Sarillia285


Sarillia285

PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 7:48 pm


Remember How You Loved Me

Remember how you loved me
Remember how I cried
Remember how she told me
That saddening day you died

I wish that I could see you
I wish that I said goodbye
I wish they had given me a chance
Or at least told me that they tried

Remember all those good times
Up at the lake
Remember how little I was
And the way mom used to bake

Remember when they told you
How it was already too late
They old you about your cancer
It was a little more than fate

Remember how I loved you
Remember how I tried
I tried so hard to understand
The reason why you died

Daddy never explained it
Nor gave a reason why
And as I write this poem
I try hard not to cry

I wish I could visit more often
The place they buried you
I know you want the best for me
And the best I will try to do

I know you had a hard life
Harder then I’ll ever know
I’ll remember you forever
Since it’s so hard to let you go
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