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 Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:56 pm
Heres a poem I wrote, I was depressed when I wrote it....-.-
I am Not...
What is flawless?
Flawless is a ballerina,
That is dancing at her best.
Flawless is the clear blue sky,
That you feel you can fly in.
Flawless is the feeling of perfection,
In which everything is at it's best.
Everyone is flawless.
I am not flawless.
What is beauty?
Beauty is a colorful sunset,
In which you could watch every night.
Beauty is a field of flowers,
That you want to lay in all day.
Beauty is a bright red rose,
That you never want to die.
Everyone is beautiful.
I am not beautiful.
What is love?
Love is when you open up someone's heart,
And they see that they will always protect you.
Love is when you care about someone,
They never want to let go.
Love is when they will never leave you,
Because they want to be with you forever.
Love is when you can tell people your secrets,
And they will keep your secrets locked in their hearts.
Love is when you can talk to someone for hours,
And they will always listen carefully.
Love is not fight,
But a nice hug from a friend.
Everybody is loved.
Am I loved?
People say I am,
But I don't feel like it....
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 11:28 am
Aww....*huggles* don't be sad *pokes* but I hope writting the poem helped you feel better. I'm sorry that you feel bad, but we all have our ups and downs. As for the poem, it's really good, there were a few parts I thought that seemed a little awkward, but not in a bad way.
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